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gairon ko kyun dosh de jab apno me har koi begaana hai,
na to hamara koi naya dost bana na bacha koi puraana hai,

chahte the tujhe paana par ab teri yaadon ko apnana hai,
lagta hai ghum hi manzil hai apni aur dard hi thikaana hai,

bahaate the zinda paththaron ke aage hum apne aansu,
na samajh paye ki dard jo apnaa hai wo bas apnaa hai,

kab tak yunhi humein apne aansuon ka bojh uthaana hai,
humein apne hi haathon se apne aansuon ko mitaana hai,

ab hum fir muskura nahi sakte ye to bas ek bahaana hai,
ab humein muskurake zindagi ka tarana hi gungunana hai,

na kisi aur se ab humein apna koi ghum bataana hai,
khud to hasna hi hai ab auron ko bhi bas hasaana hai...

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«Reply #1 on: May 12, 2010, 01:46:06 PM »
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subhan allah.. icon_salut
masha allah.. Clapping Smiley
kya khub likha hai aapne kapil sahab... dil bhar aaya.. Applause Applause

zindagi hi to hai jo hume gham aur khushi dono deti hai.,
zindagi hi to hai jo hume aapse aur aapko humse milati hai..
thik hai agar thoda gham jyada mil gaya zindagi me to kya.,
zindagi hi to hai jo hamare samne khushiyo ka pahad bhi banati hai..

aise hi likhte rahiye...sahab....aapko padhke khud me bhi ek naya umang umarta hai likhne ka.... shukriya.. Usual Smile Usual Smile icon_salut
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«Reply #2 on: May 12, 2010, 02:03:41 PM »
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buhat khoob.. !
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«Reply #3 on: May 12, 2010, 09:13:24 PM »
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Bahaut khoob Kapil Dost... Applause Applause Bahaut acha likha hai... Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: May 12, 2010, 10:23:21 PM »
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Hey Kapil Very Very Gud yaar ...........

Just ek hi baat bolongi.......

KAMAL kya Bemisal!!!!!!!!!!

keep wriritng Dear!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #5 on: May 13, 2010, 02:46:11 AM »
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Wah wah Kapil ji,excellent creation.heart touching and marvelous creation. Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: May 13, 2010, 05:40:52 AM »
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Bahut khoob Kapil
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«Reply #7 on: May 13, 2010, 05:46:49 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Touhid ji... aapne bahut jyada taarif kar di... tahe dil se main shukriya adaa karta hoon aapka... aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai...!!!

Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on May 12, 2010, 01:46:06 PM
subhan allah.. icon_salut
masha allah.. Clapping Smiley
kya khub likha hai aapne kapil sahab... dil bhar aaya.. Applause Applause

zindagi hi to hai jo hume gham aur khushi dono deti hai.,
zindagi hi to hai jo hume aapse aur aapko humse milati hai..
thik hai agar thoda gham jyada mil gaya zindagi me to kya.,
zindagi hi to hai jo hamare samne khushiyo ka pahad bhi banati hai..

aise hi likhte rahiye...sahab....aapko padhke khud me bhi ek naya umang umarta hai likhne ka.... shukriya.. Usual Smile Usual Smile icon_salut
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«Reply #8 on: May 13, 2010, 05:47:10 PM »
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Shukriya ...!!!

Quote from: vb on May 12, 2010, 02:03:41 PM
buhat khoob.. !
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«Reply #9 on: May 13, 2010, 05:47:39 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Rahim bhai... !!!

Quote from: -Rahim- on May 12, 2010, 09:13:24 PM
Bahaut khoob Kapil Dost... Applause Applause Bahaut acha likha hai... Applause Applause
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Thank u so much Neel ji...!!!

Quote from: neelgold on May 12, 2010, 10:23:21 PM
Hey Kapil Very Very Gud yaar ...........

Just ek hi baat bolongi.......

KAMAL kya Bemisal!!!!!!!!!!

keep wriritng Dear!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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bahut bahut shukriya Madhu ji...!!!

Quote from: madhuwesh on May 13, 2010, 02:46:11 AM
Wah wah Kapil ji,excellent creation.heart touching and marvelous creation. Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: May 14, 2010, 04:11:04 AM »
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Great lines Touhid ji.bahut hi khoob icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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bahut bahut shukriya Rajesh ji...!!!

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on May 13, 2010, 05:40:52 AM
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masha allah, kya khoob likhhe ho Applause Applause janaab.. Applause
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