aao kuch naya kare.........

by ranjana on May 31, 2006, 04:13:09 AM
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Kabhi-kabhi lagta hai............
yun hi bewajah si beet rahi hai zindagi...........
jaise ek hi dhuri, ek hi samye ke pahiye par bina raftar si beh rahi hai zindagi.......

Har mahine ki pehli tarikh aate hi tum kehte ho.........
jo samaan lana hai usko list bana do.......
kaun si "daal" kitne "chawal" aur kitna "aata" lana hai yeh bata do.......
kis ki is mahine kya jarurt hai yeh bhi batla do.........

bas isi tarah mahine dar mahine beet rahi hai zindagi............
in sab se yeh gher toh bhara bhara lagta hai.......
par na jane kyu koi "man ka kona" reeta sa lagta hai.........

Aao,......is baar kuch nayi si list banaye........
is nayi list ke saaman se apni uljhati si zindagi ko kuch sulajaye.....

is nayi list ke saaman mein sabse pehle.......
ek tukda aasman ka lana......
jis mein ham fir se dur dur tak pyar ki ek nayi udaan bhar sake......

lana ek dhup ka tukda........
jiski garmi se ham dono apni thandi hoti "bhawanao" ko garma sake.......

ek tukda tazzi hawa ka bhi lana.........
jis se ham apni pradusheet hoti saanso ko fir se mehka sake.........

aur suno, ho sake toh thode se rang indra-dhanush ke le aana......
jis se ham apni badrang hoti zindagi ko naye rang de sake.......

Janti hun....."tum kahoge ki in sab cheego se ghar nahi chalta......."
Aasman ka tukda .........Tan nahi dhakata......
Dhup ki garmi se.........pat nahi bharta.......
Aur tazi hawa......woh kaha ab milti hai..........?
Indra-dhanush ke rang bhi ab dikhate hai kam.........

Par dekho koshish karke ek baar toh yeh sab jarur lana.....
Taki bewajah ubati . ek hi dhuri par ghumati is zindagi ko.......
fir se ek naya rang, ek madhur sangeet ki laye de sake.............


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ranjana
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«Reply #1 on: May 31, 2006, 04:19:56 AM »
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Kabhi-kabhi lagta hai............
yun hi bewajah si beet rahi hai zindagi...........
jaise ek hi dhuri, ek hi samye ke pahiye par bina raftar si beh rahi hai zindagi.......

Har mahine ki pehli tarikh aate hi tum kehte ho.........
jo samaan lana hai usko list bana do.......
kaun si "daal" kitne "chawal" aur kitna "aata" lana hai yeh bata do.......
kis ki is mahine kya jarurt hai yeh bhi batla do.........

bas isi tarah mahine dar mahine beet rahi hai zindagi............
in sab se yeh gher toh bhara bhara lagta hai.......
par na jane kyu koi "man ka kona" reeta sa lagta hai.........

Aao,......is baar kuch nayi si list banaye........
is nayi list ke saaman se apni uljhati si zindagi ko kuch sulajaye.....

is nayi list ke saaman mein sabse pehle.......
ek tukda aasman ka lana......
jis mein ham fir se dur dur tak pyar ki ek nayi udaan bhar sake......

lana ek dhup ka tukda........
jiski garmi se ham dono apni thandi hoti "bhawanao" ko garma sake.......

ek tukda tazzi hawa ka bhi lana.........
jis se ham apni pradusheet hoti saanso ko fir se mehka sake.........

aur suno, ho sake toh thode se rang indra-dhanush ke le aana......
jis se ham apni badrang hoti zindagi ko naye rang de sake.......

Janti hun....."tum kahoge ki in sab cheego se ghar nahi chalta......."
Aasman ka tukda .........Tan nahi dhakata......
Dhup ki garmi se.........pat nahi bharta.......
Aur tazi hawa......woh kaha ab milti hai..........?
Indra-dhanush ke rang bhi ab dikhate hai kam.........

Par dekho koshish karke ek baar toh yeh sab jarur lana.....
Taki bewajah ubati . ek hi dhuri par ghumati is zindagi ko.......
fir se ek naya rang, ek madhur sangeet ki laye de sake.............


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ranjana


Outstanding........Marvalous Ranj Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: May 31, 2006, 05:45:22 AM »
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shukriya Gaurav..................likha nahi aapne is jindagi ki kittab per kuch..... Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: May 31, 2006, 07:47:32 AM »
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Ranju

Superb !  Excellent ! =D> =D> =D>

Asliyat mein ab yeh zindagi ki kitab ek kalpana ban kar reh gayi hai  sad5

Ab mujhe bhi Gaurav wala dialogue mat maarna  :D

Rajbir
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«Reply #4 on: May 31, 2006, 08:18:51 AM »
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morning everyone...Superbbb Ranajana ji...such a good work..

zindagi bhari padi hai rangon se
agar dekhoge to dikh jayenge
khud ki aankhein band rakhoge to
kaise dekh paoge

zindagi ki uljhano mein ulajhte ja rahe ho
ache bhale hua karte the
yeh kya tum apna haal bana rahe ho

ghar se job, job se ghar
issi routine mein mahino se chalte ja rahe ho
kabhi khud ko bhi time diya karo
kuch aur na sahi..hamare sang ek cup chaye hi pee liya karo

lagta hai tum woh guzre din bhool gaye
sab kuch chod-chaad kar humse milne aaya karte the
kya-2 office mein bahane banaye bataya karte the
abb to woh haseen pal hawa ho gayein hain
lagta hai paise hi sabke gumon ki dawa ho gaye hain
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«Reply #5 on: May 31, 2006, 09:50:52 AM »
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Nikki buddy

Kya baat hai  :D

Very well said. Hum sab ko zaroor kuch pal apne liye nikalne chahiye. =D> =D> =D>

Rajbir
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«Reply #6 on: May 31, 2006, 09:52:14 AM »
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thanx buddy...
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«Reply #7 on: May 31, 2006, 09:59:23 AM »
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shukriya Rajbir ji ..........................

hm sahi kaha aapne , kahan milta hai yeh sab........... Usual Smile

per koshish  toh ki hi ja sakti hai na........ Usual Smile

Gaurav wala dialague marne ka dil toh thaa,........ Usual Smile

but aapne jo ek line likh di woh hi meri is chotti si koshish ke liye aapka bahut accha jawab hai........ :D

shukriya  Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: May 31, 2006, 10:01:25 AM »
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morning everyone...Superbbb Ranajana ji...such a good work..

zindagi bhari padi hai rangon se
agar dekhoge to dikh jayenge
khud ki aankhein band rakhoge to
kaise dekh paoge

zindagi ki uljhano mein ulajhte ja rahe ho
ache bhale hua karte the
yeh kya tum apna haal bana rahe ho

ghar se job, job se ghar
issi routine mein mahino se chalte ja rahe ho
kabhi khud ko bhi time diya karo
kuch aur na sahi..hamare sang ek cup chaye hi pee liya karo

lagta hai tum woh guzre din bhool gaye
sab kuch chod-chaad kar humse milne aaya karte the
kya-2 office mein bahane banaye bataya karte the
abb to woh haseen pal hawa ho gayein hain
lagta hai paise hi sabke gumon ki dawa ho gaye hain


bahut khub Nikki................sach kaha tumne ki ab woh din hawa ho gaye hain..............shukriya.........
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«Reply #9 on: May 31, 2006, 10:04:15 AM »
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thanx n always welcome ji...

zindagi apni raftaar se chalti ja rahai hai
hamari choti-2 khushiya apne paon tale kuchalti ja rahi hai
sabko fikar hai apne kal ko khoobsurat banane ki
magar nahi jaante iss kash-makash mein suhani aaj bhi nikalti ja rahi hai
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«Reply #10 on: May 31, 2006, 10:12:48 AM »
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Buddy

 =D> =D> =D> Aaj to full form mein lag rahi ho  :D

Ranju-->Mere ko maaloom tha ki tum dialogue marogi  :razz:
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«Reply #11 on: May 31, 2006, 10:14:45 AM »
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haan 10 ghante so kar uthi hun na..hehe

zindagi ko band kamra na samajh aye dost
yeh to khula aasmaan hai
ismein to har rang hai..gum ka bhi aur khushi ka bhi
magar lagta hai kuch rango se tu khud hi ban baitha anjaan hai
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«Reply #12 on: May 31, 2006, 10:22:08 AM »
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nice Nikki...................

aaj ki aapa dhaapi mein kahan waqt mil paata hai
kab aaj ka vayast manav apne liye wqat nikaal paata hai
mujhko aaj bhi aksar apna bachpan yaad aa jata hai
woh nani ka ghar woh dadi ki thandi chaawn mein dil kahi kho jaata hai

kitne aache din they woh jab thandi chadaro per lete khule aasman per
sittaro ko dekha karte they........
woh dadi ki dant se bachne ke liye bhari dopher mein
baago mein chhip jaya  karte they..........
aur bhi na jaane kitni baate yeh dil doharya karta hai.....
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«Reply #13 on: May 31, 2006, 10:25:59 AM »
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so true Ranjana ji....lost in bachpan..hehe

guzre hue pal hi to yaad aate hain
woh jinmein hum kabhi hase the
unhe aaj bhi yaad karke hum muskurate hain

aaj ki yaadein to na jaane hum kaisi banayenge
kuch bhi nahi hoga yaad karne ko bhaag daod ke siva
kya soch kar bhala hum kal muskurayenge
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«Reply #14 on: May 31, 2006, 10:37:03 AM »
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ya Nikki true .......tumhri uper likhi lines hi pad ke main apne bachpan
mein kho gayi........... Usual Smile

jaanti ho main jab bhi apne bachpan ko doharati hun
apne bacho ke chahre per ek aajeb si  muskarhat paati hun...........
kahte hai woh mujhse' 'maa "aap kaise wahan raha karti thee
kya wahan AC thaa  ,TV.. thaa , cell ..thaa .........?
in sabke bina aap kaise jiya karti  thee..........
unko meri baate sab ek kahani lagti hain........ sad5

per aaj ke bache sach mein kya doharenge
unko toh sirf NET GAME , ya TV per chal rahe
apne ajab se kisse yaad aaynge........
woh bhi kaha wqat milega hamari taraha se soche
unko toh yeh sab ek time waiste ka saaman nazar aaynge.........
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