aao kuch naya kare.........

by ranjana on May 31, 2006, 04:13:09 AM
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«Reply #15 on: May 31, 2006, 10:41:40 AM »
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hmm true again...

nahi hai aaj kal woh poorani baatein
har waqt techonolgy se jud gaya hai
na koi khel kood hai na galliyon mein bhaagna daodna
tabhi to aaj kal ke insaan khafa rehte hain
na jaane kis dhuein ki hawa lete hain
purani zindagi to khoab hai inke liye
yeh to mobile, pc, car aur plane pe chalte hain
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ranjana
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«Reply #16 on: May 31, 2006, 11:12:37 AM »
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bahut khub Nikki AND VERY TRUE..........

chalo aaj fir se mil ke ek naya jahan basate hai
kuch naye kuch puarne ka fir se milate hain......

tabhi toh maine is nayi list ko banaya hai
aaj ismein likhe saaman ko mangaya hai

dekho ab sab kahan isko talash kar paate hain
ek nayi duniya ki talsh hai mein hum sab jut jaate hain.......
 :D
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«Reply #17 on: June 01, 2006, 06:12:32 AM »
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Puzzled ! Outstanding Work.....Ranjana, Nikki and all

Soya Soya saa lagta hai,
lagta hai yeh thama-thama,
Beawaaz sa ankhey kholey,
Samay ka pahiya jaag raha hai....
Rozmurra ki uljhano main uljha kar,
Sarpat dekho bhaag raha hai......

Reth key jaisey chutth raha hai,
Aur Paani saa yeh behta hai
dil iski raftaar sey darr kar key,
sukhey pattey sa kamph raha hai...

Kitney aaye aur gaye is duniya sey,
Apney sab dukh dardo key paar,
jeevan key aakash par badal key jaisa,
Chup chap yeh mujhko jhaak raha hai...

Duniya nayi ho ya ho purani,
mujhko hoti hai is par hairani,
Kaun bacha yahan  samay sey bolo,
Waqt yeh sabka Naap raha hai....
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nikki
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«Reply #18 on: June 01, 2006, 12:11:40 PM »
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thanx n too gud Shikha...

aao kuch naya karein
aankhon mein pyare-2 sapne bharein
saanson ko hum taaza karein
haathon mein hum khushiyon ke tohfe pakdey
raaston mein phool bikherte hue chalein
sabko hum ikatha karein
khushiyon ke hum nagmein gayein
aur pyar se sab jhoomte jayein
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«Reply #19 on: June 01, 2006, 12:18:27 PM »
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nice Shikha N Nikki........................

aaj fir se kuch naya karne ka man banya hai
aaj fir se hamne gum huey jindagi ke rango ko apnaya hai
hawao mein faili hui khushbu se fizao ko mehakaya hai
dekho aaj fir se vasant mere angan mein utar  aaya hai
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nikki
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«Reply #20 on: June 01, 2006, 12:25:59 PM »
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too gud Ranjana ji...n thanx a million..

jo log ja chuke hain unhein hum vapis bulayenge
jo humein yaad nahi karte unke sapno mein hum bas jayenge
jinko gum hai, unke liye khushiya hum dhond layenge
jo hinsa mein vishvaas rakhte hain, unhein hum ahinsa ka marg dikhayenge
jo bekaar hain, unhein hum job dilwayenge
jo chal nahi sakte, unka sahara hum ban jayenge
jinko dikhayi nahi deta, unke liye hum roshni ke diye ban jagmagayenge
jo bol nahi paate, unke alfaaz hum apne muh se bulwayenge
jinhein sunayi nahi deta..unke liye sunane ke madhiyam hum ban jayenge

agar ho jaye aisa to kitna Khoobsurat jahaan hum bana payenge
log chand pe jaane ki baat karte hain
hum chand sitare dharti pe le aayenge
yeh tamana hai hamari..
agar bhagwaan ne saath diya to issi jeevan mein yeh sab karke jayenge
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«Reply #21 on: June 02, 2006, 02:32:30 AM »
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bahut hi sundar Nikki......................i enjoyed each line............ Usual Smile

ek naya vishwas hai ek nayi aas hai
kuch toh yeh badalga yahana  jab aap sab ka saath hai
dekhi hai maine wahi payas tere shabado mein
jis duniya ko dekhne ki mere dil mein bhi ek aas hai

jeevan ki aapa dhaapi main sab yahan bhatak rahe
thode se sukh ke liye sab yahan per taras rahe
apne hi banaye jaal mein buri tarah se fans rahe
pyar ke rishte sab ab business mein uljhe rahe
ek nayi duniya ke liye sab yahan taras rahe.......

per mere dil ko pura yakeen hai
ek din badlega sab yah hamare dilo ka geet hai

vishwas ke phoolo  se meheki  hum duniya fir se sajayange
sab ek saath honge aur ek naya jahan basayange
jeevan ke kuch mushkil pal payar mein dhal  jaayenge
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«Reply #22 on: June 02, 2006, 08:34:06 AM »
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thanx n wonderfull Rajana ji....

umeed ka sahara hai dost
warna humein bhi iss zindagi ne mara hai dost

khushiya darwaje pe aakar laut jaati hain
dukhon ne har mod pe pukara hai dost

abb to zindagi se koi shikwa bhi nahi karte hum
jab se dekha hai logon ne paise ke liye ek doosre ko mara hai dost
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«Reply #23 on: June 02, 2006, 12:05:30 PM »
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bahut khub Nikki .............abhi kuch lines aa rahi hai dimag mein
jo kuh naye puarane mahol ko bata rahi hain.........un logo ke liye hai yeh jo apne watan ki miiti se dur hai

kyu apne bikhare khawabo ko lekar aa gaye ho tum yahan
yahan kisko talash karte ho , kaun hai tumhra apna yahan
yeh toh hai gaaro ki basti ,kisko paayega tum  apana  yahan

wahan ki bheer mein kho dega khud ko
apno ke intajaar mein ghut ke reh jaaeaga
apne watan  ki miiti ko chor ke aakhir tu  wahan kya paayega

yahan toh hawa bhi apni hai aur gagan bhi hai  apana
yahan sab sach hai lagata nahi hai sapna
wahan toh tut fut ke bikahr jaaoege
wapas aajaao  apne watan
sara sukh chein tum bas yahi paaoege
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«Reply #24 on: June 02, 2006, 02:18:13 PM »
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ranjana.... scintillating sizzling creation... I am unable to express much...
Hangover may remain for few days...
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«Reply #25 on: June 03, 2006, 08:53:28 AM »
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shukriya MANJU JI ..........AAPKO YEH PASAND AAYA ACCHA LAGA...........
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«Reply #26 on: August 13, 2006, 07:25:42 AM »
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Kabhi-kabhi lagta hai............
yun hi bewajah si beet rahi hai zindagi...........
jaise ek hi dhuri, ek hi samye ke pahiye par bina raftar si beh rahi hai zindagi.......

Har mahine ki pehli tarikh aate hi tum kehte ho.........
jo samaan lana hai usko list bana do.......
kaun si "daal" kitne "chawal" aur kitna "aata" lana hai yeh bata do.......
kis ki is mahine kya jarurt hai yeh bhi batla do.........

bas isi tarah mahine dar mahine beet rahi hai zindagi............
in sab se yeh gher toh bhara bhara lagta hai.......
par na jane kyu koi "man ka kona" reeta sa lagta hai.........

Aao,......is baar kuch nayi si list banaye........
is nayi list ke saaman se apni uljhati si zindagi ko kuch sulajaye.....

is nayi list ke saaman mein sabse pehle.......
ek tukda aasman ka lana......
jis mein ham fir se dur dur tak pyar ki ek nayi udaan bhar sake......

lana ek dhup ka tukda........
jiski garmi se ham dono apni thandi hoti "bhawanao" ko garma sake.......

ek tukda tazzi hawa ka bhi lana.........
jis se ham apni pradusheet hoti saanso ko fir se mehka sake.........

aur suno, ho sake toh thode se rang indra-dhanush ke le aana......
jis se ham apni badrang hoti zindagi ko naye rang de sake.......

Janti hun....."tum kahoge ki in sab cheego se ghar nahi chalta......."
Aasman ka tukda .........Tan nahi dhakata......
Dhup ki garmi se.........pat nahi bharta.......
Aur tazi hawa......woh kaha ab milti hai..........?
Indra-dhanush ke rang bhi ab dikhate hai kam.........

Par dekho koshish karke ek baar toh yeh sab jarur lana.....
Taki bewajah ubati . ek hi dhuri par ghumati is zindagi ko.......
fir se ek naya rang, ek madhur sangeet ki laye de sake.............


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ranjana


bhut hi aacha likha hai ranjana ji its superb... chaliye hum bhi dekhe yadi  kuch likh paaye.

zindgi yu hi bewajah si beet rahi hai,
aaj kuch rang khusi ke laau kahn se mein,
khusi ke numainde to her jagah so rahe hai,
isiliye aapni zinde ke sare rang kho rahe hai.

dikh nhi raha hai aasman ka wo tookda,
jahan pyaar se udna chahta hu.
aati nhi ab wo dhoop,
jissey mein aapne riston ko bharna chahta hu.

nhi hai wo mahool jis sey bhed bhao bita saku.
bech du khud ko agartumhare kiye chand sansse
taji hawa ke laa saku.

main bhi to in parisithi mein jakad gaya hu.
sach poocho to parwaar mein ab mar gaya hu.
bas sirf jee raha hu jeene ke liye.........


per mahol badlega her gul khikhilaye.
ek baar phir se aisa waqt to aayega.
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«Reply #27 on: August 13, 2006, 10:04:15 AM »
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bahut khoob kavi ji ........shukriya.......

ek din aisa waqt  jauar aayega
jab yeh gagan fir se khusi ke taaro se jagmagyega

bandhe hue in bandhano mein aakhir
kabhi toh waqt hasta muskarta sa nazar aayega

maana ki abhi hum ghire hue hain apne hi bune jaalo mein
kabhi toh zindagi mein sirf dur tak faila hua azad sa samndur leheryega
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«Reply #28 on: August 13, 2006, 11:49:44 AM »
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bahjot  khoob  Nikki...... Ranjana.........
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«Reply #29 on: August 13, 2006, 12:50:27 PM »
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bahut khoob kavi ji ........shukriya.......

ek din aisa waqt  jauar aayega
jab yeh gagan fir se khusi ke taaro se jagmagyega

bandhe hue in bandhano mein aakhir
kabhi toh waqt hasta muskarta sa nazar aayega

maana ki abhi hum ghire hue hain apne hi bune jaalo mein
kabhi toh zindagi mein sirf dur tak faila hua azad sa samndur leheryega


bas intzaar mein hai.......
phir se wo khusi ka gagan ho,
hasta muskurata aapna chaman ho.
chale hawa bhi mast hoker
koi dewar se na takraye.
aapni pavitr pawan ganga.
ab na marne paaye.
in sab ke liye man sab sahne ko taiyaar hai.
bas wo din aa jaaye mujhe intzaar hai.
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