...aarzoo chupaa jaate hai ... //Annu//

by annu_genis on May 28, 2011, 12:56:48 PM
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This time I am attempting a full fledged poem ..wud like to know how my fellow shaayars feel abouut it...

Kabhi chalakti aankhon mein Aansu chupa jaate hai
Kabhi dhadkate dil mein Aarzoo chupa jaate hai
Kabhi machalte mausam mein Shararat chupa jaate hai
Aur kabhi bhagati zindagi mein Armaan chupa jaate hai

Kabhi ulajhte rishton mein Ehsaas chupa jaate hai
Kabhi likhi hui baaton mein Alfaaz chupa jaate hai
Kabhi kahe hue lafzo mein Mayane chupa jaate hai
Aur kabhi guzarti yaadon mein Jazbaat chupa jaate hai

Kabhi khushi ki lehar mein Gam chupa jaate hai
Kabhi dushmani ki firaaq mein Dosti chupa jaate hai
Kabhi ajnabi mehfil mein Apnaapan chupa jaate hai
Aur kabhi Chehre ki khwaish mein Pehchaan chupa jaate hai

Bas yun hi hum zindagi se bewafai karte chale jaate hai
Wo jawaab maangti hai aur hum sawaal poochte chale jate hai
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Imdad
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«Reply #1 on: May 28, 2011, 02:28:56 PM »
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nice one.
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nirala
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«Reply #2 on: May 28, 2011, 02:43:22 PM »
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good hai ji…
bhot khub kaha aapne…
zindgi puchti hai sawaal kai
hum bahaano se aksar jawaab chupa jaate hain
dekh kar jahaan ki haqikaten
hum apne armaan o khuwab chupa jaate hain

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«Reply #3 on: May 29, 2011, 03:29:59 PM »
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Thanks Imdaad..
Nirala Ji.. apne to samaa he bana diya ..shukriya!!
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SURESH SANGWAN
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«Reply #4 on: June 04, 2011, 04:37:58 AM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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annu_genis
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«Reply #5 on: June 05, 2011, 07:24:11 AM »
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Thanks Suresh Ji
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