"" aashiqi me fir Nirala khud ko aazmaya ja sakta hai "

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«Reply #15 on: January 17, 2011, 09:37:17 AM »
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suraj ko paschim se nikala ja sakta hai
har mausam ko bhi badla ja sakta hai

badal sakti hai zameen ye insaan sab kuch
aur aasmaan ko bhi badla ja sakta hai

lekin ee mastane nirale ek baat samjhle
teri shayri ki lazzat ko nahin badla ja sakta hai....!!!

mastam mast post nirala ji...
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«Reply #16 on: January 17, 2011, 09:59:00 AM »
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hahaha Meri shayri ko Lazzatdaar Izzat se nawazne ka Thankuuuu
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suna hai mene bhi badalta hai aasmaan bhi
      baad uske sahiba jameen ke unn nishano ka kya hoga
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thanx K mam
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«Reply #17 on: January 17, 2011, 02:52:43 PM »
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galtiyo ko sudhara ja skta hai
naadaniyo ko bhulaya ja skta hai

ho jaye gumaan logo ko,tujhpr
kuch aisi socho ko sakaara ja skta hai

sach ko jhut or jhut ko sach,banana kesa
sach ko sach hi batlaya ja skta hai

gar ho lagan sacha, ho hausalo me udaan
chaand sitaaro ko fir pahlu me chupaya ja skta hai

ho jo bhrosa khud pr,imaan ho pakka
muflisi ke tukdo ko fir thukraya ja skta hai

gar ho gurbat,kubat angaaro pr chlne ki
aashiqi me fir Nirala khud ko aazmaya ja skta hai

mumken hr kosiso

bahoot khoob khayalaat hain nirala ji...har sher zabardast..dheron daad janab  Usual Smile
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«Reply #18 on: January 17, 2011, 02:53:27 PM »
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suraj ko paschim se nikala ja sakta hai
har mausam ko bhi badla ja sakta hai

badal sakti hai zameen ye insaan sab kuch
aur aasmaan ko bhi badla ja sakta hai

lekin ee mastane nirale ek baat samjhle
teri shayri ki lazzat ko nahin badla ja sakta hai....!!!

mastam mast post nirala ji...

Bilkul durust farmaya KDK ji agreed
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«Reply #19 on: January 17, 2011, 03:22:57 PM »
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bahut khoob jnaab....sach kha, zindagi mein zindagi ka har rang
aajmaana chahiye.....khoob kha
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«Reply #20 on: January 17, 2011, 03:34:27 PM »
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sabse pahle Beqaraar ji--
aapko bata du ke aap hi iss post ko create krne ki asli wajah hain--
aapke ek behtareen post pr mene kuch funny sa reply dia tha fir mujhe naadani ya yun kahen ki Meri galti ka ehsaas hua.. bas pahli line wahi rakh dia maine.
--aapko thanx kahna bhi galt hoga.
aapko bas yahi kahunga Sir ki shayd Nirala ab kabhi koi naadani janbujh ke nahi karega---haan galti nahi krne ki koi guarrantee nahi Usual SmileUsual SmileWinking
aapka Sukriya ji.
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thanx
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«Reply #21 on: January 17, 2011, 03:37:12 PM »
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Nihaar ji--- aapka teh dil se dhanyabaad.
aapne padha aur sarah bas dil khus ho gaya ji.
nirola ka hosla badhane ke liye thanx
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thanx
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