adhura jeevan...............

by ranjana on May 14, 2006, 02:23:40 AM
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zindagi ko puri tarah se jeene ki kala ,
bhala kise aati hai..........
kahi na kahi zindagi mein ........
har kisi ke koi kami toh rah jaati hai..............

pyar ka geet gungunaata hai har koi,
dil ki awazo ka tarana sunata hai har koi
aasman par bane en rishto ko nibhata hai har koi.
fir bhi har chahre per woh khushi kyu nahi nazar aati hai.......
pura pyar paane mein kuch toh kami rah jati hai............
har kisi ki zindagi mein kahi na kahi kuch toh kami rah jaati hai.

dil se jab nikalti hai kavitaa ,
puri hi nazar aati hai........
par kagazo per bichchte hi..........
woh kyu adhuri si nazar aati hai........
shabado ke jaal mein bhavanaye ulajh si jaati hain
pyar ,kissey. kavitaa .yeh sirf dil ko hi toh behelaati hain......
apni baat samjhane mein kuch toh kami rah jaati hai............

har kisi ki nigaahein mujhe kyu.........
kisi nayi cheego ko talashati nazar aati hain
sab kuch paa kar bhi ek pyas si kyu rah jaati hai
zindagi mein kahi na kahi kuch toh kami rah jaati hai.....
sampooran jeevan jeene ki kala bhala kise aati hai.....................Huh?Huh?Huh?Huh?


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mrkotians
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«Reply #1 on: May 14, 2006, 02:43:32 AM »
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ranjana... achcha... hain... dil se...

yeh jeevan ek tapovan hain
aur ek anand ke niveshan...

yeh jeevan ek oonchi neechi gayan hain
kabhi yaathan kabhi santosh
kabhi pyar kabhi bewafa
kabhi milan kabhi judai

yeh jeevan ek tapovan hain...
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«Reply #2 on: May 14, 2006, 03:21:48 AM »
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ranjana... achcha... hain... dil se...

yeh jeevan ek tapovan hain
aur ek anand ke niveshan...

yeh jeevan ek oonchi neechi gayan hain
kabhi yaathan kabhi santosh
kabhi pyar kabhi bewafa
kabhi milan kabhi judai

yeh jeevan ek tapovan hain...



sach kaha aapne jeevan ek tapovan hai............bahut khub........
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darde_dil
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«Reply #3 on: May 14, 2006, 04:28:27 AM »
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Bohot KHoob Ranjana Ji Aur mrkotains Ji !!!
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ranjana
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«Reply #4 on: May 14, 2006, 06:44:54 AM »
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shuriya ji........... Usual Smile
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mrkotians
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«Reply #5 on: May 15, 2006, 02:54:57 PM »
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ek vedanthi ne kaha yeh jeevan hain soona soona...
ek kavi ne gaaya yeh jeevan hain sona sona...

vedanthi ne kaha sona lagti mitti...
kavi ne kaha mitti hotii hain sona...
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ranjana
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«Reply #6 on: May 16, 2006, 07:03:11 AM »
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nice MK ji....................

katara- katara insaan ghat jata hai
tinka- tinka sab mitt jaata hai
dil ke bhawar mein hai sab fanse hue
lamaha -lamaha yeh waqt pit sa jata hai.........
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mrkotians
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«Reply #7 on: May 16, 2006, 11:05:58 PM »
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dhanyawaad ranjana...

wahan ek lok hain
idhar ek rasta hain
milke jayenge wahan
khushi se rehna hain...

gareebi ki baat hi nahin
bhook bhi nahin hain wahan
kab tak hum hain wahan
tab tak yeh dard nahin...
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Pooja
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«Reply #8 on: May 17, 2006, 01:39:29 AM »
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good one Ranju and MK ji
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ranjana
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«Reply #9 on: May 17, 2006, 03:53:08 AM »
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shukriya Pooja .................
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mrkotians
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«Reply #10 on: May 17, 2006, 11:47:47 PM »
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kaise maya hain yeh zindagi
jaise chaya hain subah ki him
chamakte, chalakte yeh raat
zindagi ki dhal jayegi...

behte nadi ko kaun sa sagar
ud'te panchi ko kahan ghar
zindagi ke sagar ke retho
kinaron chukar pahuncte doosra kinara

sham ke suraj se rangeen leela
aasmaan mein ud'te panchi kaala
kinare ko kataar mein padte rethon
srushti ki sundar jhoot ki maala...
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ranjana
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«Reply #11 on: May 19, 2006, 05:37:56 AM »
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kaise maya hain yeh zindagi
jaise chaya hain subah ki him
chamakte, chalakte yeh raat
zindagi ki dhal jayegi...

behte nadi ko kaun sa sagar
ud'te panchi ko kahan ghar
zindagi ke sagar ke retho
kinaron chukar pahuncte doosra kinara

sham ke suraj se rangeen leela
aasmaan mein ud'te panchi kaala
kinare ko kataar mein padte rethon
srushti ki sundar jhoot ki maala...



shukriya MK ji..................bahut khub
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Shikha12
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«Reply #12 on: May 19, 2006, 12:17:25 PM »
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very nice work Ranju and Mrkotians...
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mrkotians
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«Reply #13 on: May 20, 2006, 12:09:49 AM »
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kaun hain gareeb... biwi ko pyar se na dekhnewala
bachchon ke khel mein milkar na hasnewala
sangeet sabha mein baithkar na apne ko bhoolnewala
gareeb mann hi gareebi hain...
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ranjana
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«Reply #14 on: May 25, 2006, 09:20:34 AM »
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NICE ONE MANJOO JI
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