~*~adhure hain ham adhuri hai zindgi~*~

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adhure hain ham adhuri hai daastan
adhure hain mere sab armaan
farz rishto k nibhate hue
kho gaye jaane mere sapne kahan

wo mil sake aisa socha b na tha
ham hai yahaan aur ab wo hai wahaa
zabt saare hain zazbaat dil mei
un zazbaaton ko alfaaz dene ki ab himmat kahaan

raat kaali hai aur kuch baaki nahi
kuch kehne ko ab tanhaai bhi milti hai kahaan
bas ek sazaa si kat rahi hai zindgi
ab kuch khone ko bacha bhi hai kahaan

dard sabke leke khushi sabko dete rahe
khud k liye kabhi jeete aisi mohlat kahaan
BHAWNA jaise ban gayi hai ab patthar
tum hi kaho ab mere paas kuch kehne ko baaki kahaan
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«Reply #1 on: March 16, 2009, 10:32:18 AM »
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Nice one Bhawna ji!
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«Reply #2 on: March 16, 2009, 01:44:07 PM »
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Bahot Bahot Bahot Ahchi Nazm Lihkee Yaar! Beyhud Pasand Ayee Muhje!
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«Reply #3 on: March 16, 2009, 01:51:53 PM »
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adhure hain ham adhuri hai daastan
adhure hai mere sab armaan
farz rishto k nibhate hue
kho gaye jaane mere sapne kahan


Bahut khoob Bhawna ji  Applause
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«Reply #4 on: March 16, 2009, 02:04:47 PM »
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Bohat khoob bhawna tumne to shuru me hi har baat keh di ek ek lafz sachchiee me dooba hua lagta hai. Too good.... Clapping Smiley

Tu jo path_thar hain main aasu_o ka samandar
Aa tujhko dubo kar apni aakho me path_thar pe phool khila du

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«Reply #5 on: March 16, 2009, 11:23:09 PM »
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Bahut khoob...!!
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«Reply #6 on: March 17, 2009, 05:59:08 AM »
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Quote from: salma786 on March 16, 2009, 10:32:18 AM
Nice one Bhawna ji!

shukriya salma ji
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«Reply #7 on: March 17, 2009, 06:00:07 AM »
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Quote from: anjaan dharkan on March 16, 2009, 01:44:07 PM
Bahot Bahot Bahot Ahchi Nazm Lihkee Yaar! Beyhud Pasand Ayee Muhje!

shukriya ad ji for appreciating my work  notworthy
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«Reply #8 on: March 17, 2009, 06:03:27 AM »
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Quote from: cRony/eNemy on March 16, 2009, 11:23:09 PM
Bahut khoob...!!

thnks a lot notworthy

Quote from: Roja on March 16, 2009, 01:51:53 PM

Bahut khoob Bhawna ji  Applause

bohut bohut shukriya roja ji jo aapne hamare likhe ko padha aur saraha bhi notworthy
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«Reply #9 on: March 17, 2009, 06:13:05 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on March 16, 2009, 02:04:47 PM
Bohat khoob bhawna tumne to shuru me hi har baat keh di ek ek lafz sachchiee me dooba hua lagta hai. Too good.... Clapping Smiley

Tu jo path_thar hain main aasu_o ka samandar
Aa tujhko dubo kar apni aakho me path_thar pe phool khila du

-SG-

bohut bohut shukriya saajid ji jo aapne itni gehrai se padha aur saraha

waqt rutha raha ham manate rahe
apni kismat ko ham aajmaate rahe
dil tuta tab ye jaan paaye ham
ek patthar se dil the lagate rahe ham
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«Reply #10 on: March 17, 2009, 06:53:29 PM »
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Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on March 16, 2009, 10:19:21 AM
adhure hain ham adhuri hai daastan
adhure hain mere sab armaan
farz rishto k nibhate hue
kho gaye jaane mere sapne kahan

wo mil sake aisa socha b na tha
ham hai yahaan aur ab wo hai wahaa
zabt saare hain zazbaat dil mei
un zazbaaton ko alfaaz dene ki ab himmat kahaan

raat kaali hai aur kuch baaki nahi
kuch kehne ko ab tanhaai bhi milti hai kahaan
bas ek sazaa si kat rahi hai zindgi
ab kuch khone ko bacha bhi hai kahaan

dard sabke leke khushi sabko dete rahe
khud k liye kabhi jeete aisi mohlat kahaan
BHAWNA jaise ban gayi hai ab patthar
tum hi kaho ab mere paas kuch kehne ko baaki kahaan

bahut Khoob Bhawna.. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: March 23, 2009, 06:36:31 AM »
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bohut bohut shukriya khwaish ji
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«Reply #12 on: March 23, 2009, 06:42:15 AM »
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Nice one Bhawna jee... Applause
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«Reply #13 on: March 23, 2009, 08:24:35 AM »
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thank u dh ji notworthy
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