बचपन

by apriya on April 26, 2012, 10:15:23 AM
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बचपन कि वो हंसी
अब कही खो सी गयी है
वो निश्छल मुस्कुराना
वो पाक साफ़ दिल
ये सारी बाते
अतीत कि सी हो गयी है
अब तो मन में भरा द्वेष
स्वार्थ कलह और क्लेश
मन कि ज़मीन
मैली सी हो गयी है
कोई लौटा दे वो पाकीज़ा मन
वो बेबाक हंसी
वो निःस्वार्थ दोस्ती
वो झूमता बचपन
बस यही एक ख्वाहिश रह गयी
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«Reply #1 on: April 26, 2012, 10:23:29 AM »
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ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
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«Reply #2 on: April 26, 2012, 11:57:18 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause

ati sundar priyaji..
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«Reply #3 on: April 26, 2012, 12:12:48 PM »
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बचपन कि वो हंसी
अब कही खो सी गयी है
वो निश्छल मुस्कुराना
वो पाक साफ़ दिल
ये सारी बाते
अतीत कि सी हो गयी है
अब तो मन में भरा द्वेष
स्वार्थ कलह और क्लेश
मन कि ज़मीन
मैली सी हो गयी है
कोई लौटा दे वो पाकीज़ा मन
वो बेबाक हंसी
वो निःस्वार्थ दोस्ती
वो झूमता बचपन
बस यही एक ख्वाहिश रह गयी
Bahut sundar aur pyari rachna par bahut bahut mubaarak apriya ji
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«Reply #4 on: April 26, 2012, 12:23:46 PM »
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मुझे बहोत खुशी हुई कि आपलोगों को पसंद आई| प्रोत्साहन के लिए शुक्रिया आप सबो का|
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«Reply #5 on: April 26, 2012, 03:20:58 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: April 26, 2012, 04:26:34 PM »
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Nice.
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«Reply #7 on: April 26, 2012, 04:30:17 PM »
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 Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: April 27, 2012, 03:31:19 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause
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bahut khoob apriya ji
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«Reply #9 on: April 27, 2012, 07:30:16 AM »
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«Reply #10 on: April 27, 2012, 07:37:21 AM »
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Ati sundar  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: April 30, 2012, 06:59:10 AM »
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«Reply #12 on: April 30, 2012, 10:44:47 AM »
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बचपन कि वो हंसी
अब कही खो सी गयी है
वो निश्छल मुस्कुराना
वो पाक साफ़ दिल
ये सारी बाते
अतीत कि सी हो गयी है
अब तो मन में भरा द्वेष
स्वार्थ कलह और क्लेश
मन कि ज़मीन
मैली सी हो गयी है
कोई लौटा दे वो पाकीज़ा मन
वो बेबाक हंसी
वो निःस्वार्थ दोस्ती
वो झूमता बचपन
बस यही एक ख्वाहिश रह गयी


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