AIK QATTA

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my 1st poetry in this forum....its my own .... angel11
waqt ke sahil pAr bikhree kuch maAzi ki tasweerein
zindagee ke chehre pAr likheen dard ki tehreerein
chashm E purnam se gir kar jo toot chuke hain khwab
dil main chubhtee hain ab unhi khwabon kee tabeerein.....
 
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«Reply #1 on: March 21, 2012, 03:51:48 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: March 21, 2012, 03:55:30 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob Laaiba ji most welcome
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«Reply #3 on: March 21, 2012, 04:47:38 PM »
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Yo ki mahfil me aapka swaagat hai Laaiba ji
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best of luck.
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«Reply #4 on: March 21, 2012, 05:13:30 PM »
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MashaAllah bahaut khoob Laaiba !!!
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«Reply #5 on: March 21, 2012, 05:50:20 PM »
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Quote from: heena ke rang on March 21, 2012, 03:51:48 PM
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Quote from: sksaini4 on March 21, 2012, 03:55:30 PM
bahut bahut khoob Laaiba ji most welcome
thanku.....
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«Reply #7 on: March 21, 2012, 05:51:21 PM »
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Quote from: mkv on March 21, 2012, 04:47:38 PM
Yo ki mahfil me aapka swaagat hai Laaiba ji
good one..Applause
best of luck.
thanku mkv...
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«Reply #8 on: March 21, 2012, 05:51:51 PM »
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Quote from: miankhalid on March 21, 2012, 05:13:30 PM
MashaAllah bahaut khoob Laaiba !!!

bohat shukria aapkaa....
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«Reply #9 on: March 21, 2012, 06:14:17 PM »
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Quote from: laaiba on March 21, 2012, 03:24:56 PM
my 1st poetry in this forum....its my own .... angel11
waqt ke sahil pAr bikhree kuch maAzi ki tasweerein
zindagee ke chehre pAr likheen dard ki tehreerein
chashm E purnam se gir kar jo toot chuke hain khwab
dil main chubhtee hain ab unhi khwabon kee tabeerein.....
 

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«Reply #10 on: March 21, 2012, 06:14:49 PM »
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Quote from: laaiba on March 21, 2012, 03:24:56 PM
my 1st poetry in this forum....its my own .... angel11
waqt ke sahil pAr bikhree kuch maAzi ki tasweerein
zindagee ke chehre pAr likheen dard ki tehreerein
chashm E purnam se gir kar jo toot chuke hain khwab
dil main chubhtee hain ab unhi khwabon kee tabeerein.....
 

sabse pehle to aapka swagat hai Yoindia Shayariadab par

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aate rahen
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«Reply #11 on: March 22, 2012, 03:13:16 AM »
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Quote from: laaiba on March 21, 2012, 03:24:56 PM
my 1st poetry in this forum....its my own .... angel11
waqt ke sahil pAr bikhree kuch maAzi ki tasweerein
zindagee ke chehre pAr likheen dard ki tehreerein
chashm E purnam se gir kar jo toot chuke hain khwab
dil main chubhtee hain ab unhi khwabon kee tabeerein.....
 


Bahut khub laaiba ji Yo pe apki pehli post behat acchi rahi. Ab ke aage ki peskash ka intezar rahega. Nice keep writing.
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«Reply #12 on: March 22, 2012, 03:18:37 PM »
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«Reply #13 on: March 22, 2012, 04:55:02 PM »
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Wah bahot khubsurat  poetry hai Laaiba ji. Parhkar bahot achha laga. Daad.
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