Ajeeb Hai Yeh Dil Ki Duniya "Khwaish":Shairi - E

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Lag Jaa Gale Ke Phir Yeh Haseen Raat Ho Naa Ho
Shayad Phir Iss Janam MeN Mulaakat Ho Naa Ho...................

Zindagi MeN Koi Cheez Humesha Ke Liye Nahi Hoti,
Aur kayi Baar Hum Iss Baat Ko Nahi Samaj Paate..
Milna-Bichadna Zindagi Ka Dastoor Hai,
Chaahe Woh Rishta Pyaar Ka Ho, Dosti Ka Ho,
Yaa Phir Woh Rishta Ho Sirf Ehsaas Kaa.
Jitna Kisi Se Milnaa Khushi Deta Hai,
Uss Se Bichadna Usse Bhi Zyaada Gham De Jaata Hai..
Aaj Kuch Dil Ki Zubaani Likh raha Hoon..Dil Se Padhiyega..

Aaj Hum Saath Hai Kal Naa Jaane Kidhar Jayenge
Yeh Zindagi Hai, Dekhte-Dekhte Bichar Jaayenge

Kal Shayad Ek Duje Ko Milna Bhi Naseeb MeN Na Ho
Yeh Lamhe Bhi Pal Do Pal MeN Guzar Jaayenge

Waise To Zindagi MeN Apno Ki Koi Kami Nahi..!!!!
Kal Kisse Khabar,Kuch Ajnabi RishtoN MeN Hum Dhal Jaayenge

Jab Kisi Ke Saath Kuch Beete Hue PaloN Ki Yaad Aayegi
Yakeenan AshqoN Ke Moti PalkoN Se Utar Jaayenge

Ajeeb Hai Yeh Dil Ki Duniya Bhi Eh Mere Humdum..!!!!
Teri Yaad MeN Hum Apni Ghazal Bhi,Tere Naam Kar Jaayenge

"Khwaish" Ab Tujhse Door Hota Jaayega....!!!!!!!!!!
Varna Tujhe Dard De Kar, Hum Sach MeN Mar Jaayenge...

~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~~


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Re: Ajeeb Hai Yeh Dil Ki Duniya "Khwaish"

«Reply #1 on: September 14, 2012, 10:26:11 AM »

Bohat Khub!!!! Bohat hi jazbaaton se bhari hai ghazal aap ki!!!

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Re: Ajeeb Hai Yeh Dil Ki Duniya "Khwaish"

«Reply #2 on: September 14, 2012, 10:33:10 AM »

Bahut hii rumani peshkash bahut umda aaj ki yeh post mujhe bahut zabardast lagi khwahish bhaiya...aaj phir lga ki yeh wahi khwahish bhai h jo apni qalam se drd ko mehsus karwa sakte hai... Khas shayr ki qalam mein ek matra ki bhi kami ho to wo bht bdi kami lagti hai...unse hamesha sab perfect gazal nazam ki umeed karte hai aur padhne ko betaab rehte hai...aap , saini sir, hasan sir, kuch aise hi khas shayar hain..


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Re: Ajeeb Hai Yeh Dil Ki Duniya "Khwaish"

«Reply #3 on: September 14, 2012, 11:43:32 AM »

bahut khub khwaishji


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Re: Ajeeb Hai Yeh Dil Ki Duniya "Khwaish"

«Reply #4 on: September 14, 2012, 12:17:20 PM »

Quote from: Shireen Hakani on September 14, 2012, 10:26:11 AM

Bohat Khub!!!! Bohat hi jazbaaton se bhari hai ghazal aap ki!!!

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Thankyou Sooooooooooooooooo Much Shireen ji..

Par Aap zaroor Kuch Likh Sakte The..


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Re: Ajeeb Hai Yeh Dil Ki Duniya "Khwaish"

«Reply #5 on: September 14, 2012, 12:52:18 PM »

Akhri line..Aha..
Kya mohobat hai kay ap mar jayenge ager unke dard ka sabab ap bane toh..
Dil nam hogaya dost apki kalam parrke..As usual, dill choo liya apne..
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Khush rahiye..!


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Re: Ajeeb Hai Yeh Dil Ki Duniya "Khwaish"

«Reply #6 on: September 14, 2012, 02:26:25 PM »

Quote from: soudagar on September 14, 2012, 10:33:10 AM

karan ji..Aapka Bahut Bahut Dhanyawaad Jo Aapne Apna Waqt diya Mujhe..Karan ji..main Waheen likhta hoon jo dil Kehta Hai..Kabhi Dil Dard Mehsoos Karwaata Hai, Kabhi Ishq, Kabhi Koi Aur Duniyavi jazba..Main To waheen Khwaish Hoon Jo Har Baar Kuch Naa Kuch Likhta Rehta Hoon..bas Kuch Baatein, Koi Topic Kisi Ke dil Ko Zyaada Chuu Jaati hai.. Saini saheb, Hasan Saheb Ke saamne Main Ek Boond paani Ka Tinka Bhi Nahi... Aapki iss Izzat-Afzaai Ke Liye mere Paas Koi lafz Nahi..Bas yuhi Humesha Saath Dete rahiyega..Aapka Tahe Dil Se Dhanyawaad


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Re: Ajeeb Hai Yeh Dil Ki Duniya "Khwaish"

«Reply #7 on: September 14, 2012, 02:30:16 PM »

Bahut Bahut Bahut Khoob Khwaish ji.. Usual Smile

Dil bhar aaya aur padhte padhte kho gaya tha kahin..

dhero daad mubarakbaad.. Usual Smile


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Re: Ajeeb Hai Yeh Dil Ki Duniya "Khwaish"

«Reply #8 on: September 14, 2012, 04:03:42 PM »

Quote from: khwaish on September 14, 2012, 10:13:45 AM

Lag Jaa Gale Ke Phir Yeh Haseen Raat Ho Naa Ho
Shayad Phir Iss Janam MeN Mulaakat Ho Naa Ho...................

Zindagi MeN Koi Cheez Humesha Ke Liye Nahi Hoti,
Aur kayi Baar Hum Iss Baat Ko Nahi Samaj Paate..
Milna-Bichadna Zindagi Ka Dastoor Hai,
Chaahe Woh Rishta Pyaar Ka Ho, Dosti Ka Ho,
Yaa Phir Woh Rishta Ho Sirf Ehsaas Kaa.
Jitna Kisi Se Milnaa Khushi Deta Hai,
Uss Se Bichadna Usse Bhi Zyaada Gham De Jaata Hai..
Aaj Kuch Dil Ki Zubaani Likh raha Hoon..Dil Se Padhiyega..

Aaj Hum Saath Hai Kal Naa Jaane Kidhar Jayenge
Yeh Zindagi Hai, Dekhte-Dekhte Bichar Jaayenge

Kal Shayad Ek Duje Ko Milna Bhi Naseeb MeN Na Ho
Yeh Lamhe Bhi Pal Do Pal MeN Guzar Jaayenge

Waise To Zindagi MeN Apno Ki Koi Kami Nahi..!!!!
Kal Kisse Khabar,Kuch Ajnabi RishtoN MeN Hum Dhal( kafiye se kharij hai) Jaayenge

Jab Kisi Ke Saath Kuch Beete Hue PaloN Ki Yaad Aayegi
Yakeenan AshqoN Ke Moti PalkoN Se Utar Jaayenge

Ajeeb Hai Yeh Dil Ki Duniya Bhi Eh Mere Humdum..!!!!
Teri Yaad MeN Hum Apni Ghazal Bhi,Tere Naam Kar Jaayenge

"Khwaish" Ab Tujhse Door Hota Jaayega....!!!!!!!!!!
Varna Tujhe Dard De Kar, Hum Sach MeN Mar Jaayenge...

~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~~

gud

--dhal( kafiye sey kharij hai--dekh lein)


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Re: Ajeeb Hai Yeh Dil Ki Duniya "Khwaish"

«Reply #9 on: September 14, 2012, 04:24:37 PM »

Quote from: khwaish on September 14, 2012, 10:13:45 AM

waah bhi or aah bhi apkee is nazm ke liye khwaish ji .........


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Re: Ajeeb Hai Yeh Dil Ki Duniya "Khwaish"

«Reply #10 on: September 15, 2012, 03:27:11 AM »

khwaish ji........

unke sang bitaye lamhe hamesha hume satayenge
na jane wo pal kab fir laut ke ayenge
aaj bhi baithe hain hum raah me unki humsafar
na jaane ke wo kab kis mod se palat aayenge

bht hi touchy poem hai ...... aage nahin likha jata....


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Re: Ajeeb Hai Yeh Dil Ki Duniya "Khwaish"

«Reply #11 on: September 15, 2012, 03:29:06 AM »

Quote from: khwaish on September 14, 2012, 10:13:45 AM

Bahut sach farmaya hai


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Re: Ajeeb Hai Yeh Dil Ki Duniya "Khwaish"

«Reply #12 on: September 15, 2012, 04:56:38 PM »

Bahut khoobsurat nazm pesh kee hai aapne.
dil ke bahut kareeb lagee.
bahut bahut umda khayaalo se sajee.
bahut umda khwaish jee.
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Re: Ajeeb Hai Yeh Dil Ki Duniya "Khwaish"

«Reply #13 on: September 16, 2012, 03:34:18 PM »

waah bahaut hi sundar kalaam khwaish ji ... khoobsurat dard ka ek zinda bayaan !


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