Ajeeb sa khayal - Shikha

by Shikha sanghvi on March 31, 2016, 12:42:48 PM
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Aaj dil ne socha ki kuch alag sa likha jaaye..but I am sure ki aap sabko ye pasand aayegi.

 

Dil mai aaj ajeeb sa khayal hai aaya,

Zindagi ko jaise najdik se hai jaana.

 

Zindagi mai kya khoya or kya paya,

sab kuch jaise chhut sa gaya.

 

Ek pal mai hai milna or bichhad jaana,

Unki yaado se dil ko bahelana.

 

Dil ne chaha kuch aisa kar jaana,

Ki  duniya se jaane ke baad bhi logo ki yaado mai rahena.

 

bahot socha samja par or kuch na dikhai diya,

Tab jaakar humne alfazo se apne pyar ko sajaya.

 

Zindagi ki bhid bhari duniya mai

Apne likhe huye alfazo ko hai jinda rakhna.

 

Shikha
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«Reply #1 on: March 31, 2016, 01:58:09 PM »
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Shikha jee yon to main shayar nahin hoon par thodi bahot dilchaspi shayari se rakhta hoon
Aap se request hai ke kuch radeef khafie ka lehaaz rakhye

Aap hi ke ashaar ko betarteeb kia hai main ne, par ye bhi durust nahi hain

Dil mai aaj ajeeb sa khayal hai aaya
Jaesa ke hamne zindagi nazdik se paya

Sab chhut sa gaya ho jaese duniya mai
Hamne ye zindagi se nahi kuch paya

X--------X

Ek pal mai hai milna aur bichad jaana
Phir unki hi yaadon se dil hai bahelana

Duniya se jaane par bhi rahen har dil mai
Soncha hai ke kuch aesa kaam kar jaana

X--------X
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«Reply #2 on: March 31, 2016, 09:12:19 PM »
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Aaj dil ne socha ki kuch alag sa likha jaaye..but I am sure ki aap sabko ye pasand aayegi.
Aaj dil ne sochaa ke kuchh alag se likhaa jaaye, mujhe yakin hai aap sabko pasand aaye gaa.
aaj dil ne alag se likhney kee koshish kee hai, main jaantee hoon aapko pasand aayegi.

Aaapke khayaal aur koshish kee saraahnaa kartaa hoon, bas aap guide lines ko zaroor follow keejiye. Guide lines main aapko message section mein bhejh rahaa hoon.

 

Dil mai aaj ajeeb sa khayal hai aaya,                                       Dil mein aaj ajeeb saa khayaal hai aayaa

Zindagi ko jaise najdik se hai jaana.                                        Zindagi ko jaise nazdeek se hai paayaa

 

Zindagi mai kya khoya or kya paya,                                        Zindagi mein kyaa khoyaa aur kyaa hai paayaa

sab kuch jaise chhut sa gaya.                                                 Jaise kuchh hai chutaa aur kuchh hai ganwaayaa

 

Ek pal mai hai milna or bichhad jaana,                                   Ek pal mein hai milnaa aur bicharhnaa hai jaanaa

Unki yaado se dil ko bahelana.                                               Unh se bicharnaa aur phir yaadon hai behlaanaa

 

Dil ne chaha kuch aisa kar jaana,                                         Kuchh aise hee lafzoon ko milaane kee koshish keejiye.....               

Ki  duniya se jaane ke baad bhi logo ki yaado mai rahena.               

 

bahot socha samja par or kuch na dikhai diya,                     

Tab jaakar humne alfazo se apne pyar ko sajaya.               

 

Zindagi ki bhid bhari duniya mai

Apne likhe huye alfazo ko hai jinda rakhna.

 

Shikha
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«Reply #3 on: April 01, 2016, 01:25:47 PM »
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Shikha jee yon to main shayar nahin hoon par thodi bahot dilchaspi shayari se rakhta hoon
Aap se request hai ke kuch radeef khafie ka lehaaz rakhye

Aap hi ke ashaar ko betarteeb kia hai main ne, par ye bhi durust nahi hain

Dil mai aaj ajeeb sa khayal hai aaya
Jaesa ke hamne zindagi nazdik se paya

Sab chhut sa gaya ho jaese duniya mai
Hamne ye zindagi se nahi kuch paya

X--------X

Ek pal mai hai milna aur bichad jaana
Phir unki hi yaadon se dil hai bahelana

Duniya se jaane par bhi rahen har dil mai
Soncha hai ke kuch aesa kaam kar jaana

X--------X


Thanks a lot mastji....mafi chahte hai hum
Actually kya hai na aise kuch alfaz aate hai zahen mai to use yaha pe sajake rakh dete hai..sochkar kabhi nahi likha. isiliye aapki narazgi bhi jayaz hai.mante hai hum ki bahot sari galtiya hoti hai humse...par khushi tab milti hai jab humari creation logo ke dil ko chhu jaaye ..kyoki jis feelings ke saath hum likhte hai vo sabke dilo tak pahunchana chahte hai or kuch bhi nahi...par aage se is baat ka khayal rakhenge...par aap bejijak humari galtiyo ko hume dikha sakte ho jinse humari likhat mai bahot furk aayega...

Thanks once again...
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«Reply #4 on: April 01, 2016, 01:29:15 PM »
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Thanks a lot surindarji..

Sir , hume khushi hai ki aap humari galatiyo ko hume dikhate ho or saath mai sahi alfaz bhi sikhate ho....hum aage se is baat ka khayal rakhenge....
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«Reply #5 on: April 03, 2016, 06:08:18 AM »
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Thanks a lot mastji....mafi chahte hai hum
Actually kya hai na aise kuch alfaz aate hai zahen mai to use yaha pe sajake rakh dete hai..sochkar kabhi nahi likha. isiliye aapki narazgi bhi jayaz hai.mante hai hum ki bahot sari galtiya hoti hai humse...par khushi tab milti hai jab humari creation logo ke dil ko chhu jaaye ..kyoki jis feelings ke saath hum likhte hai vo sabke dilo tak pahunchana chahte hai or kuch bhi nahi...par aage se is baat ka khayal rakhenge...par aap bejijak humari galtiyo ko hume dikha sakte ho jinse humari likhat mai bahot furk aayega...

Thanks once again...

Shikha jee main kahan aap se naraz hoon, mujhe aap ki shayari achi lagti hai, bas aap apne zahen mein aae alfaaz ko thoda saja sanwra kar likhen to dil khush ho jaye
aur main cahta yehi hoon k aap ki shayari par masssst masssst massst hi likhon  blob5 hello2 blob5
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«Reply #6 on: April 05, 2016, 10:20:05 AM »
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Thanks a lot mastji.....ye aapka badappan hai
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