Ajmayish .......... (Neel)

by neelgold on May 11, 2010, 01:13:49 AM
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Jindgi kabhi Iss aur hai to kabhi uss Aur hai
yeh sansoo se bandhi bus ek Dour hai

Ek paal hansi hai agle hi paal Gum hai
Yehi hamari dastan hai aur issi se Hum hai

Jitni sansain bachi hai bus abb tu Muskara le
Khush ho ke jee le aur do paal Tu bi Gunguna le

Kisse kya pata hai aaj hai par Kaal kya ho
Yeh duniya to ho paar hum tum Ho na ho

Haar paal tu jee le khushyion ke saath
Reh na jaye dil main tere abb koi bi baat

Moka hai abhi tu naye kuch dost Bana le
Jo Ruth gaye the tere Apne tu ajj unne Mana le

Yeh jindgi hai do Paal ki , Isse tu Gale se laga le
Yeh kaal fir tuze azmaiye isliye isse Tu ajj ajama Le

***Neel***
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«Reply #1 on: May 11, 2010, 01:29:32 AM »
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Good one Neel Ji
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«Reply #2 on: May 11, 2010, 01:39:58 AM »
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Thanx a  lot rajesh JI !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #3 on: May 11, 2010, 05:29:32 AM »
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Bahut achhi poem likhi hai Neel ji. Bahot achhe jazbaat(thoughts) ka izhaar(express) aapne yahan kiya hai. Ye do lines dil ko choo gain:

Moka hai abhi tu naye kuch dost Bana le
Jo Ruth gaye the tere Apne tu ajj unne Mana le
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«Reply #4 on: May 11, 2010, 09:54:59 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Neel ji.... bahut sundar kavita hai aur optimistic approach hai jo ki aapki kavitaon me jyadatar rehta hi hai.. bahut pyaari kavita hai... !!!

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

do line maine bhi likhne ki koshish ki hai...


hum bhi khade hain is raah mein ki koi humse bhi dosti karle,
kisi sachche dost ki muskaan dekh hum bhi do pal muskura le,

haan sach hai ye ki rehti nahi hai zindagi har lamha ek jaisi,
kyun na hum is pal me saare ghum bhulaake zindagi ko jee le,

ye lamha jo hai isse humein koi bhi shikayat nahi hai ab,
to kyun na hum bhi is pal mein kisi khaas ki dosti aazma le...
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«Reply #5 on: May 11, 2010, 01:23:46 PM »
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Nice poem Sona-di..... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Life ki puri philosophy ko shabdo main dhaaldiya hai aapne....

Kaun nahi chahta k jeele har pal khushiyon ke sang
Par kab likhe hote hain naseeb mai hamaare wo rang

Quote from: neelgold on May 11, 2010, 01:13:49 AM
Jindgi kabhi Iss aur hai to kabhi uss Aur hai
yeh sansoo se bandhi bus ek Dour hai

Ek paal hansi hai agle hi paal Gum hai
Yehi hamari dastan hai aur issi se Hum hai

Jitni sansain bachi hai bus abb tu Muskara le
Khush ho ke jee le aur do paal Tu bi Gunguna le

Kisse kya pata hai aaj hai par Kaal kya ho
Yeh duniya to ho paar hum tum Ho na ho

Haar paal tu jee le khushyion ke saath
Reh na jaye dil main tere abb koi bi baat

Moka hai abhi tu naye kuch dost Bana le
Jo Ruth gaye the tere Apne tu ajj unne Mana le

Yeh jindgi hai do Paal ki , Isse tu Gale se laga le
Yeh kaal fir tuze azmaiye isliye isse Tu ajj ajama Le

***Neel***
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«Reply #6 on: May 11, 2010, 01:59:40 PM »
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Wah kya baat hai        NeelGold ji.....

jab tak ye duniya hai tab tak kahan ham hai
aur jeene ka hame itna kahan samay hai
jab tak ye saansen hai tab tak hi hamari zindagi hai
aur ham sab ye bhi jaante hai zindagi me khushi aur gum dono hai
fir kyun nahi ham khush hokar jeete hai
zindagi ki har "Ajmayish" ham muskara kar dete hai...
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«Reply #7 on: May 11, 2010, 08:51:04 PM »
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Thanx a lot Riyaz Ji ..aise words to samz aah jate hai bt aapne usse b translate kiya relly thnx........jo bhut jaida urdu ke words hote hai unne samzne main todi dikat ho jati hai bt its fyn .....

Thnx 4 ur comnts i really appreciate .....
Pata kya hai Riyaz ji muze lagta hai tym rehte saab ko mana lena chiye fir moka mile na mile......

WHr's d tym 2 hate vn thr's so little tym 2 luv'...

Saab ke saath kuhshi ke saath reho saab gile shikve mita ke

Quote from: riyaz106 on May 11, 2010, 05:29:32 AM
Bahut achhi poem likhi hai Neel ji. Bahot achhe jazbaat(thoughts) ka izhaar(express) aapne yahan kiya hai. Ye do lines dil ko choo gain:

Moka hai abhi tu naye kuch dost Bana le
Jo Ruth gaye the tere Apne tu ajj unne Mana le
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«Reply #8 on: May 11, 2010, 09:00:47 PM »
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Thanx a lot Kapil !!!!!!
Appreciate ki u feel that +ive motive .... Yh ur ryt usually i alwyz trying to write sumthing wid positivity.... Jaidatar koshish yehi hoti hai voh isliye ki jaab koi b isse pade usse bi kuch +ive mile... kyon dukh , ansoo sad things -tivity deni hai kissi ko

I believe that watevr u give 2 othrs u vll get d same in return bt much more than that so if u give happiness to othres , sum optimistic thoughts, sum postivity etc so u vll get much more than that in return ....

Alwyz try 2 spread happiness around u ...

Jiada bol  diya kya ? Feared.

Quote from: klaskar on May 11, 2010, 09:54:59 AM
bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Neel ji.... bahut sundar kavita hai aur optimistic approach hai jo ki aapki kavitaon me jyadatar rehta hi hai.. bahut pyaari kavita hai... !!!

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

do line maine bhi likhne ki koshish ki hai...


hum bhi khade hain is raah mein ki koi humse bhi dosti karle,
kisi sachche dost ki muskaan dekh hum bhi do pal muskura le,

haan sach hai ye ki rehti nahi hai zindagi har lamha ek jaisi,
kyun na hum is pal me saare ghum bhulaake zindagi ko jee le,

ye lamha jo hai isse humein koi bhi shikayat nahi hai ab,
to kyun na hum bhi is pal mein kisi khaas ki dosti aazma le...
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«Reply #9 on: May 11, 2010, 09:08:08 PM »
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Thanx a lot Koyal ....... bhut bhut shukriya u really felt the meaning...

Tumne b khoob likha hai uska reply hai...

Haar raang ko khushiyon ka rang tu bana le
Jo beet gaya hai smay tu usse bhula de
haar khosish teri kamyaab hogi, muze hai yakin
Yakin nahi hai tume to tu  isse azama le

Quote from: KOYAL46 on May 11, 2010, 01:23:46 PM
Nice poem Sona-di..... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Life ki puri philosophy ko shabdo main dhaaldiya hai aapne....

Kaun nahi chahta k jeele har pal khushiyon ke sang
Par kab likhe hote hain naseeb mai hamaare wo rang
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«Reply #10 on: May 11, 2010, 09:10:38 PM »
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Cara ji bhut ache ........

Khoob kaha aapne bi

THnx for ur tym jo apne meri poem ko diya

THNXXXXXXXXXXx
 
Quote from: cara on May 11, 2010, 01:59:40 PM
Wah kya baat hai        NeelGold ji.....

jab tak ye duniya hai tab tak kahan ham hai
aur jeene ka hame itna kahan samay hai
jab tak ye saansen hai tab tak hi hamari zindagi hai
aur ham sab ye bhi jaante hai zindagi me khushi aur gum dono hai
fir kyun nahi ham khush hokar jeete hai
zindagi ki har "Ajmayish" ham muskara kar dete hai...
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«Reply #11 on: May 11, 2010, 09:56:24 PM »
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Nahi theek hai.... jyada nahi bola... par mere likhe lines k baare me kuch bhi nahi bola...!!!

Quote from: neelgold on May 11, 2010, 09:00:47 PM
Thanx a lot Kapil !!!!!!
Appreciate ki u feel that +ive motive .... Yh ur ryt usually i alwyz trying to write sumthing wid positivity.... Jaidatar koshish yehi hoti hai voh isliye ki jaab koi b isse pade usse bi kuch +ive mile... kyon dukh , ansoo sad things -tivity deni hai kissi ko

I believe that watevr u give 2 othrs u vll get d same in return bt much more than that so if u give happiness to othres , sum optimistic thoughts, sum postivity etc so u vll get much more than that in return ....

Alwyz try 2 spread happiness around u ...

Jiada bol  diya kya ? Feared.
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«Reply #12 on: May 11, 2010, 10:04:32 PM »
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Appki poem ka reply karna to bhool hi gaye ...
bhut khoob kaha hai aapne bi
reply:

Dosti ki nahi jati , ho jati hai
ismain gum ke badle khushi di jati hai
Na ho ke b har lamha koi kareeb hota hai
Ansoo le ke laboo pe sirf hansi di jati hai...

***Neel***

Quote from: klaskar on May 11, 2010, 09:54:59 AM
bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Neel ji.... bahut sundar kavita hai aur optimistic approach hai jo ki aapki kavitaon me jyadatar rehta hi hai.. bahut pyaari kavita hai... !!!

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

do line maine bhi likhne ki koshish ki hai...


hum bhi khade hain is raah mein ki koi humse bhi dosti karle,
kisi sachche dost ki muskaan dekh hum bhi do pal muskura le,

haan sach hai ye ki rehti nahi hai zindagi har lamha ek jaisi,
kyun na hum is pal me saare ghum bhulaake zindagi ko jee le,

ye lamha jo hai isse humein koi bhi shikayat nahi hai ab,
to kyun na hum bhi is pal mein kisi khaas ki dosti aazma le...
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«Reply #13 on: May 12, 2010, 02:31:12 AM »
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Wow Neel ji bahut bahut khoob,excellent creation,Riyaz bhai,Kapil ji,Cara ji,Koyal sis,aap sabhi ne kamaal ke likha.lovely thread. Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: May 12, 2010, 11:04:19 AM »
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Very lovely thread...Bohot khoob Neel Ji, bohot achcha likha hai aapne....!!

Very beautiful addition, Kapil Ji.....n Koyal, very nice sher..very nice lines, Cara Ji

Bohot khoob friends  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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