Ajmayish .......... (Neel)

by neelgold on May 11, 2010, 01:13:49 AM
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«Reply #15 on: May 12, 2010, 02:44:11 PM »
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shukriya Neel ji... aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai ...!!!

ab to teri dosti se har kali mehekne lagi hai,
zindagi bhi ab kuch khushnuma si hone lagi hai,
chahta hoon tujhe bhi saare ghumon se dur rakhun,
isi chahat me ab hamari zindagi guzarne lagi hai...



Quote from: neelgold on May 11, 2010, 10:04:32 PM
Appki poem ka reply karna to bhool hi gaye ...
bhut khoob kaha hai aapne bi
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Dosti ki nahi jati , ho jati hai
ismain gum ke badle khushi di jati hai
Na ho ke b har lamha koi kareeb hota hai
Ansoo le ke laboo pe sirf muskaan di jati hai...

***Neel***
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«Reply #16 on: May 12, 2010, 02:48:43 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Madhu ji...!!!

Quote from: madhuwesh on May 12, 2010, 02:31:12 AM
Wow Neel ji bahut bahut khoob,excellent creation,Riyaz bhai,Kapil ji,Cara ji,Koyal sis,aap sabhi ne kamaal ke likha.lovely thread. Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #17 on: May 12, 2010, 02:50:47 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Talat ji...!!!

Quote from: Celmira on May 12, 2010, 11:04:19 AM
Very lovely thread...Bohot khoob Neel Ji, bohot achcha likha hai aapne....!!

Very beautiful addition, Kapil Ji.....n Koyal, very nice sher..very nice lines, Cara Ji

Bohot khoob friends  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #18 on: May 12, 2010, 10:05:44 PM »
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Madhu ji , Thnxx Yaar ........
really apperciate!!!!!!!!!!
App hamesha waqt nikalte ho thnx a lottttttttttttt



Quote from: madhuwesh on May 12, 2010, 02:31:12 AM
Wow Neel ji bahut bahut khoob,excellent creation,Riyaz bhai,Kapil ji,Cara ji,Koyal sis,aap sabhi ne kamaal ke likha.lovely thread. Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #19 on: May 12, 2010, 10:17:49 PM »
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Vah VAh Kya baat hai kapil ji

Vry gud reply.....

Khuda kare tumari dosti  ki bagiyain youn hi mehkati rehe
Tum Jindagi ko har paal khusiyon se szate reho
Saab gumo ko abb door rakh ke
Khuda karain abb tum har pal sada Muskarte reho ...

***(Neel)***

Quote from: klaskar on May 12, 2010, 02:44:11 PM
shukriya Neel ji... aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai ...!!!

ab to teri dosti se har kali mehekne lagi hai,
zindagi bhi ab kuch khushnuma si hone lagi hai,
chahta hoon tujhe bhi saare ghumon se dur rakhun,
isi chahat me ab hamari zindagi guzarne lagi hai...
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«Reply #20 on: May 12, 2010, 10:19:58 PM »
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Thnx a lot Celmira JI

Bhut bhut tehe dil se shukriya jo aapne tyme diya

Pasand aya means mehnat safal

Quote from: Celmira on May 12, 2010, 11:04:19 AM
Very lovely thread...Bohot khoob Neel Ji, bohot achcha likha hai aapne....!!

Very beautiful addition, Kapil Ji.....n Koyal, very nice sher..very nice lines, Cara Ji

Bohot khoob friends  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #21 on: May 12, 2010, 11:39:44 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Neel ji aur taarifon ke liye shukriya ....!!!


bas ye asar apki duwaon ka hi hai,
ki ab har pal hum muskuraate hain,
rona bhi chahe kisi pal agar hum,
aansoo aankhon se laut jaate hain...

Quote from: neelgold on May 12, 2010, 10:17:49 PM
Vah VAh Kya baat hai kapil ji

Vry gud reply.....

Khuda kare tumari dosti  ki bagiyain youn hi mehkati rehe
Tum Jindagi ko har paal khusiyon se szate reho
Saab gumo ko abb door rakh ke
Khuda karain abb tum har pal sada Muskarte reho ...

***(Neel)***
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«Reply #22 on: May 13, 2010, 02:42:12 AM »
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You r most welcome Neel ji.ek baar phir se bahut khoob likhi. Kapil ji ne bhi khoob saath diya. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #23 on: May 13, 2010, 05:19:58 PM »
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Shukriya Madhu ji...!!!

Quote from: madhuwesh on May 13, 2010, 02:42:12 AM
You r most welcome Neel ji.ek baar phir se bahut khoob likhi. Kapil ji ne bhi khoob saath diya. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #24 on: May 13, 2010, 08:44:14 PM »
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Thanx a lot Madhu .....................

Alwyz keep smiling!!!!!!!!!!

Quote from: madhuwesh on May 13, 2010, 02:42:12 AM
You r most welcome Neel ji.ek baar phir se bahut khoob likhi. Kapil ji ne bhi khoob saath diya. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #25 on: May 13, 2010, 08:52:18 PM »
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Wah WAh WAh ji !!!!!!!
 Applause Applause Applause Applause

Dua kabool hoti jaroor hai par dua main voh asar chiye
Dosti parvan chadti jaroor hai par usmain bi vafa chiye
Hum log to musafir hai is jindagi ke safar main
Yeh safar bi haseen ban jata hai par uske liye b husafar chiye

***Neel***
Quote from: klaskar on May 12, 2010, 11:39:44 PM
bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Neel ji aur taarifon ke liye shukriya ....!!!


bas ye asar apki duwaon ka hi hai,
ki ab har pal hum muskuraate hain,
rona bhi chahe kisi pal agar hum,
aansoo aankhon se laut jaate hain...
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«Reply #26 on: May 13, 2010, 09:26:56 PM »
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Quote from: neelgold on May 11, 2010, 01:13:49 AM
Jindgi kabhi Iss aur hai to kabhi uss Aur hai
yeh sansoo se bandhi bus ek Dour hai

Ek paal hansi hai agle hi paal Gum hai
Yehi hamari dastan hai aur issi se Hum hai

Jitni sansain bachi hai bus abb tu Muskara le
Khush ho ke jee le aur do paal Tu bi Gunguna le

Kisse kya pata hai aaj hai par Kaal kya ho
Yeh duniya to ho paar hum tum Ho na ho

Haar paal tu jee le khushyion ke saath
Reh na jaye dil main tere abb koi bi baat

Moka hai abhi tu naye kuch dost Bana le
Jo Ruth gaye the tere Apne tu ajj unne Mana le

Yeh jindgi hai do Paal ki , Isse tu Gale se laga le
Yeh kaal fir tuze azmaiye isliye isse Tu ajj ajama Le

***Neel***

Very nice and true...
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«Reply #27 on: May 13, 2010, 09:55:17 PM »
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Shukriya ...!!!

Kya kehne aapke bhi... Waah...!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


hazaaron ki bheed me bas kuch khaas hote hain,
jo paas na hote huye bhi paas hi hote hain,
safar me zindagi ke kai hamsafar milte hain,
kuch bichhad jaate hain kuch saath hi hote hain...

Quote from: neelgold on May 13, 2010, 08:52:18 PM
Wah WAh WAh ji !!!!!!!
 Applause Applause Applause Applause

Dua kabool hoti jaroor hai par dua main voh asar chiye
Dosti parvan chadti jaroor hai par usmain bi vafa chiye
Hum log to musafir hai is jindagi ke safar main
Yeh safar bi haseen ban jata hai par uske liye b husafar chiye

***Neel***
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