ajooba.........A.B

by adil bechain on June 04, 2012, 06:03:09 PM
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                        zindagi   meri   kahaani  dhoondti  rahi..,
                        mujse  waabasta  nishaani  dhoondti  rahi..,

                        hai    kyaa    sabab   udaasi   ka   mere,
                        khushi   meri   pareshaani  dhoondti  rahi,

                        detaa  nahin  dastak  mehmaan  ghar pe ab,
                        aaj 'daawat' meri  mezbaani dhoondti rahi,

                        lagayaa   ilzaam   naahaq  hi mujhpe sabne,
                        sadaaqat mujh mein be-imaani dhoondti rahi,

                        qadr   mere  jazbaat   ki   naa   thi  use,
                        shamsheer   meri  qurbaani  dhoondti  rahi,

                        huaa   sard   khoon  waqt  ke   saath-saath,
                        zaeefi    usme    rawaani    dhondti   rahi,

                        dekh   mere   24   bachcho.n   ko  bechain..,
                        sarkaar  mujhmein  jawaani  dhoondti  rahi..,
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«Reply #1 on: June 04, 2012, 06:24:56 PM »
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wah wah...
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«Reply #2 on: June 05, 2012, 05:28:24 AM »
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 Applause
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«Reply #3 on: June 05, 2012, 05:52:43 AM »
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Adil saheb duaa kartaa hoon ki aap hameshaa jwaan rahe dheron daad aur ek rau
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«Reply #4 on: June 05, 2012, 06:08:48 AM »
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Quote from: adil bechain on June 04, 2012, 06:03:09 PM

                        zindagi   meri   kahaani  dhoondti  rahi..,
                        mujse  waabasta  nishaani  dhoondti  rahi..,
                         Applause Applause Applause
                        hai    kyaa    sabab   udaasi   ka   mere,
                        khushi   meri   pareshaani  dhoondti  rahi,
                         Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
                        detaa  nahin  dastak  mehmaan  ghar pe ab,
                        aaj 'daawat' meri  mezbaani dhoondti rahi,
                         notworthy notworthy notworthy
                        lagayaa   ilzaam   naahaq  hi mujhpe sabne,
                        sadaaqat mujh mein be-imaani dhoondti rahi,
                         Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
                        qadr   mere  jazbaat   ki   naa   thi  use,
                        shamsheer   meri  qurbaani  dhoondti  rahi,
                         Applause Applause Applause
                        huaa   sard   khoon  waqt  ke   saath-saath,
                        zaeefi    usme    rawaani    dhondti   rahi,
                         Applause Applause Applause
                        dekh   mere   24   bachcho.n   ko  bechain..,
                        sarkaar  mujhmein  jawaani  dhoondti  rahi..,                 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
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«Reply #5 on: June 05, 2012, 07:07:59 AM »
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BAHUT KHOOB ADIL JEE
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: June 05, 2012, 11:32:38 AM »
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waaaahhh ustaaad waaaahhh
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«Reply #7 on: June 05, 2012, 02:15:36 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob Adil ji....!!!
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«Reply #8 on: June 05, 2012, 03:07:15 PM »
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bohot khub adil ji....
aur ek rau
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«Reply #9 on: June 06, 2012, 11:08:34 AM »
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Quote from: adil bechain on June 04, 2012, 06:03:09 PM

                        zindagi   meri   kahaani  dhoondti  rahi..,
                        mujse  waabasta  nishaani  dhoondti  rahi..,

                        hai    kyaa    sabab   udaasi   ka   mere,
                        khushi   meri   pareshaani  dhoondti  rahi,

                        detaa  nahin  dastak  mehmaan  ghar pe ab,
                        aaj 'daawat' meri  mezbaani dhoondti rahi,

                        lagayaa   ilzaam   naahaq  hi mujhpe sabne,
                        sadaaqat mujh mein be-imaani dhoondti rahi,

                        qadr   mere  jazbaat   ki   naa   thi  use,
                        shamsheer   meri  qurbaani  dhoondti  rahi,

                        huaa   sard   khoon  waqt  ke   saath-saath,
                        zaeefi    usme    rawaani    dhondti   rahi,

                        dekh   mere   24   bachcho.n   ko  bechain..,
                        sarkaar  mujhmein  jawaani  dhoondti  rahi..,
BAHUT KHOOB ADIL JI JAWANI BARKARAR RAKHIYE APNI KALAM ME AISE HI ACCHI PESKASH PAR DHERON DAAD
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«Reply #10 on: June 06, 2012, 06:19:41 PM »
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Quote from: superspawn10 on June 04, 2012, 06:24:56 PM
wah wah...

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«Reply #11 on: June 06, 2012, 06:27:38 PM »
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Bechain Sahaab Aadaab!

Janab kia baat hai kafi gehre aur umdaa khayaaloN ko bayaaN
kiya hai... bahut khoob janab bahut khoob... Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar aik se badhkar aik rahe... Usual Smile
Humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                  
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«Reply #12 on: June 06, 2012, 08:30:03 PM »
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kya baat hai bahut khoob adil sahab bahut khoob...

Intezar !
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«Reply #13 on: June 07, 2012, 07:44:10 AM »
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Waah Waah Waah....

Kya Kehne Adil Ji..Bahut Bahut Khoob

Har Ek Ashaar Lajawaab

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«Reply #14 on: June 10, 2012, 11:54:45 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on June 05, 2012, 05:28:24 AM
Applause
  n i c e !

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