Andaaz

by Ram Saraswat on August 20, 2012, 12:47:16 PM
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Ab bulbulon ki pahley si aawaz kahan   hey,
              muddat se chaman ka bhi wo mizaz kahan hey,
Har patta cheekh cheekh kahe dard e dastan,
              ahley chaman pe per  koi ilaaz  kahan  hey,
sab apni apni dhun mein rawan rahatey raat din,
              Auron ki fiqr karaney ka riwaz  kahan  hey,
meri pahal pe milna tau  usko qabool  hey,
              per soch mein tabdeeli ka aaghaz kahan hey,
usko  ghuroor aaj bhi hey  taajvari  kaa,
              bhoola hey sir pe aaz magar taaj kahan hey,
Ye Ram teri baat ka dil pe ho quon  aser,
              awaaz tau hey khoob per andaaz  kahan  hey.
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«Reply #1 on: August 20, 2012, 02:17:36 PM »
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beautiful dheron daad
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«Reply #2 on: August 20, 2012, 03:05:07 PM »
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nice....
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«Reply #3 on: August 20, 2012, 03:05:49 PM »
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Quote from: Ram Saraswat on August 20, 2012, 12:47:16 PM
Ab bulbulon ki pahley si aawaz kahan   hey,
              muddat se chaman ka bhi wo mizaz kahan hey, Wah Wah Wah
Har patta cheekh cheekh kahe dard e dastan,
              ahley chaman pe per  koi ilaaz  kahan  hey, Kya baat hai bahut khoob
sab apni apni dhun mein rawan rahatey raat din,
              Auron ki fiqr karaney ka riwaz  kahan  hey, Wah Wah Wah Kya sher kaha hai..laajavaab..jitni bhi tareef kee jaaye kam hai janaab
meri pahal pe milna tau  usko qabool  hey,
              per soch mein tabdeeli ka aaghaz kahan hey, Wah Wah Wah bahut umda khayaal
usko  ghuroor aaj bhi hey  taajvari  kaa,
              bhoola hey sir pe aaz magar taaj kahan hey, Applause Applause Applause
Ye Ram teri baat ka dil pe ho quon  aser,
              awaaz tau hey khoob per andaaz  kahan  hey. Wah Wah Wah ghajab ka maqta hai aapne
Saraswat jee
Is naayaab peshkash par aapko dili mubaarakbaad dete hai..
likhte rahiye
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«Reply #4 on: August 20, 2012, 03:22:17 PM »
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boht khub janab
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«Reply #5 on: August 20, 2012, 03:55:51 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on August 20, 2012, 02:17:36 PM
beautiful dheron daad
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nice....
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beautiful creation .............. lajawab... tareef ke liye alfaz kam pad rahe hai ......

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Saraswat jee
Is naayaab peshkash par aapko dili mubaarakbaad dete hai..
likhte rahiye

Bahut bahut sukriya
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«Reply #9 on: August 20, 2012, 04:04:44 PM »
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Quote from: soudagar on August 20, 2012, 03:57:16 PM
beautiful creation .............. lajawab... tareef ke liye alfaz kam pad rahe hai ......

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Bahut bahut sukriya
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boht khub janab
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«Reply #11 on: August 20, 2012, 05:05:32 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
dhoondho dosto Ram Saraswat jaisa likhne ka ANDAAZ kahan hai
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«Reply #12 on: August 20, 2012, 05:36:23 PM »
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Quote from: Ram Saraswat on August 20, 2012, 12:47:16 PM
Ab bulbulon ki pahley si aawaz kahan   hey,
              muddat se chaman ka bhi wo mizaj kahan hey,
Har patta cheekh cheekh kahe dard e dastan,
              ahley chaman pe per  koi ilaaj  kahan  hey,
sab apni apni dhun mein rawan rahatey raat din,
              Auron ki fiqr karaney ka riwaj  kahan  hey,
meri pahal pe milna tau  usko qabool  hey,
              per soch mein tabdeeli ka aaghaz kahan hey,
usko  ghuroor aaj bhi hey  taajvari  kaa,
              bhoola hey sir pe aaj magar taaj kahan hey,
Ye Ram teri baat ka dil pe ho quon  aser,
              awaaz tau hey khoob per andaaz  kahan  hey.


  khayaal khoob hai per kafia ek saa nahin hai Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
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Quote from: BANSI DHAMEJA on August 20, 2012, 05:05:32 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause
dhoondho dosto Ram Saraswat jaisa likhne ka ANDAAZ kahan hai
Bahut shukriya
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on August 20, 2012, 05:36:23 PM

  khayaal khoob hai per kafia ek saa nahin hai Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile

Khayaal pashand aaya, shukriya.

Daag Dehlvi ki ek Ghazal mein kafiya ko dekhein

Is adaa se vo vafaa karatey hein
Koi jaane ke vafaa karate hain
Daag tuu dekh to kyaa hotaa hai
jabr par jabr kiyaa karate hain 

yahain vafaa aur kiyaa ko lekar kafia banaya gaya hai.
 
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