APNA APNA KHAYAL .......................... ( QAIS )

by Qais on June 23, 2012, 12:44:27 PM
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Koshish - e - Roti   Daal   hai   keval  ,
Zindagani     wabaal      hai     keval


Ho   Ghazal  ,   Nazm   ya   Rubaai woh  ,
Chand   shabdon   ka   jaal   hai  keval


Ab   zubaaN   par   Bhikariyon  ke  bhee ,
100   rupaye    ka    sawaal   hai  keval


Woh  Haqeeqat  hai , par haqeeqat   mein,
Apna  -  Apna     Khayal    hai     keval
 

Yeh  Zameen  Aasmaan   kuchh   nahi 'Qais' ,
Uska    Husn - o - Jamaal   hai    keval
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«Reply #1 on: June 23, 2012, 12:58:09 PM »
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waah waah waah Qais bhaai dili daad qubool kare dheron mubarakbaad aap khush rahe
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«Reply #2 on: June 23, 2012, 01:21:18 PM »
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Qais ji dil ko chhoo liya apne. Kiya sahi halaat bayan kiye hain. Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: June 23, 2012, 01:58:18 PM »
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Waah Waah....Bahut Bahut Khoob Qais Ji

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: June 23, 2012, 01:59:37 PM »
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Waise bhai abhee bheekaari etne bhee advance naheeN huye kee 100 rupiye mange.
Haa ab apnee marjee ke mutabik bheek lete hai.
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Aapki ye gazal bhut saandar hai.
Or bheekaree waala sher bhut khoob hai.
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«Reply #5 on: June 23, 2012, 03:52:19 PM »
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WAAAAAH !
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«Reply #6 on: June 23, 2012, 04:26:36 PM »
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Sach me kamaal ka likha hai..
2nd sher behad khoob raha.
Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: June 23, 2012, 05:33:38 PM »
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ummdaaaa bohooot ummdaaa

bohoot khoob likha hai sir

dheeeeeroon daad !! Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: June 23, 2012, 07:32:29 PM »
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wah bhai Qais--
kya kehne aapki ghazal ke--
kya baat kya baat
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«Reply #9 on: June 23, 2012, 07:51:53 PM »
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Qais Sahaab Aadaab!

Masha AllaaH janab.... waaH kia kahne jee ... behad khoobsurat
aur umdaa khayaaloN ko khoobsurat lafzoN meiN baNdha hai janab..

Behad khoob... Badi achchi Gazal rahi... har ashaar ka khayaal
hume behad khoob laga... Usual Smile
Is umdaa Kalaam par huamri dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul
kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   
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«Reply #10 on: June 23, 2012, 08:10:05 PM »
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Bahut khoob Qais saheb. Kaafi achha laga padh kar.
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«Reply #11 on: June 23, 2012, 11:59:34 PM »
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bahut bahut acha likha hai aapne
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«Reply #12 on: June 24, 2012, 07:45:42 AM »
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bahut achi gahzal hai qais sahab

ye sher ........... bahut bahut acha hai.....
behad umdaaa

Woh  Haqeeqat  hai , par haqeeqat   mein,
Apna  -  Apna     Khayal    hai     keval
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«Reply #13 on: June 25, 2012, 12:41:55 PM »
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Ek achhi gazal koshish hai... kaheen kaheen meer ka rang saaf jhalakta hai ... keep it up....
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«Reply #14 on: June 25, 2012, 02:12:50 PM »
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Saini  saheb  aapka  bahut  bahut  shukrya .
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