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Kahan kisi ke dum par kisi ki zindgani hai.
Apne hi haathon sab apni kahaani likhte hain.
Jidhar dhalaan tha chal nikle udhar hi ko.
Nadiyaa ki dharaa si jab rawaani rakhte hain.
udhar ke ho liye jidhar hawaa ka rukh tha.
Kahaan aise log josh-e-jawaani rakhte hain.
Apne hi haathon apni kahaani likhte hain.
Fakat chhahat se kahaan hoti hai koi cheez apni.
fir bhi na jaane kyun nazar uss par rakhte hain.
milta hai jahaan mein ussi ko sab kuch
apni soch ke sachhe humsafar jo banate hain.
waqt ke ghode ki lagaam kaskar rakhte hain.
Apni manzil ki taraf tezi se chalte hain.
apne hi haathon apni kahaani likhte hain.
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«Reply #1 on: April 24, 2010, 11:18:32 AM » |
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Bahut bahut Khoob Sureshji.. 
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«Reply #2 on: April 24, 2010, 11:25:54 AM » |
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«Reply #3 on: April 24, 2010, 11:27:28 AM » |
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Wah! bahut khoob likha hai aap ne Suresh Ji
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«Reply #4 on: April 24, 2010, 11:31:08 AM » |
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shukriya rajesh ji. Wah! bahut khoob likha hai aap ne Suresh Ji
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«Reply #5 on: April 24, 2010, 11:45:57 AM » |
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Kahan kisi ke dum par kisi ki zindgani hai.
Apne hi haathon sab apni kahaani likhte hain.
Jidhar dhalaan tha chal nikle udhar hi ko.
Nadiyaa ki dharaa si jab rawaani rakhte hain.
udhar ke ho liye jidhar hawaa ka rukh tha.
Kahaan aise log josh-e-jawaani rakhte hain.
Apne hi haathon apni kahaani likhte hain.
Fakat chhahat se kahaan hoti hai koi cheez apni.
fir bhi na jaane kyun nazar uss par rakhte hain.
milta hai jahaan mein ussi ko sab kuch
apni soch ke sachhe humsafar jo banate hain.
waqt ke ghode ki lagaam kaskar rakhte hain.
Apni manzil ki taraf tezi se chalte hain.
apne hi haathon apni kahaani likhte hain.
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«Reply #6 on: April 24, 2010, 12:15:56 PM » |
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Wah kya baat hai Suresh Sangwan ji.......
Apne hi haathon se apni kahaani likhte hain
zindagi jeene ka josh hai jisey wo khud apni zindagani likte hain
toofano se lardne ki himmat agar ham rakhte hain
toh har mushkilon ka saamna ham kar sakhte hain
apne hi haathon ki taqdeer ham khud banate hain
nafrat karte hai nafrat paate hai-pyar karte hai pyar paate hai
Apne hi haathon ki.....
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«Reply #7 on: April 24, 2010, 07:15:27 PM » |
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne Suresh ji...!!!
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«Reply #8 on: April 24, 2010, 07:58:25 PM » |
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Very very gud Suresh Ji!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #9 on: April 25, 2010, 09:06:45 AM » |
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bahut khoob cara ji. aapne as usual bahut achha extension diya hai. excellent. and thanks ki aapne pasand farmaya. Wah kya baat hai Suresh Sangwan ji.......
Apne hi haathon se apni kahaani likhte hain
zindagi jeene ka josh hai jisey wo khud apni zindagani likte hain
toofano se lardne ki himmat agar ham rakhte hain
toh har mushkilon ka saamna ham kar sakhte hain
apne hi haathon ki taqdeer ham khud banate hain
nafrat karte hai nafrat paate hai-pyar karte hai pyar paate hai
Apne hi haathon ki.....
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«Reply #10 on: April 25, 2010, 09:07:31 AM » |
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bahut bahut shukriya klaskar ji. bahut khoob likha hai aapne Suresh ji...!!!
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«Reply #11 on: April 25, 2010, 09:08:00 AM » |
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thanks neelgold ji. Very very gud Suresh Ji!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #12 on: April 25, 2010, 09:12:51 AM » |
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«Reply #13 on: April 25, 2010, 10:21:03 AM » |
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Wah kya baat hai Suresh Sangwan ji.......
Apne hi haathon se apni kahaani likhte hain
zindagi jeene ka josh hai jisey wo khud apni zindagani likte hain
toofano se lardne ki himmat agar ham rakhte hain
toh har mushkilon ka saamna ham kar sakhte hain
apne hi haathon ki taqdeer ham khud banate hain
nafrat karte hai nafrat paate hai-pyar karte hai pyar paate hai
Apne hi haathon ki.....
bahut khub............................ |
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«Reply #14 on: April 28, 2010, 09:48:38 AM » |
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THANKS NITIN JI. bahut khub............................
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