<>*Apne ruuh me basa paaya hai*<>

by *KasaK*....Dil Ki on October 05, 2010, 07:39:27 PM
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<>*Apne ruuh me basa paaya hai*<>


Har ek beete pal ne mujhe aksar ye samjhaya hai
Nahin aaunga laut k main kyun tune mujhe ganwaya hai

Haule halue chalti hawa bhi aksar mujhse kehti hai
Maine  tere garmi se jalte jism ko aaram pahonchaya hai

Chhanw me jab main jaa baithti hun kadi dhup me
Kehti hai maine tujhe thandak ka ehsaas karaya hai

Chandni raat me jab nahin hota koi chiraag bhi sath
Chanda ki kirnon ne tab mujhe raasta dikhaya hai

Kisi ki majburi dekh kabhi main jo udas ho jati hun
Uss majburi ne majburi me sambhalke rehna sikhaya hai

Jab bhi tujhse kuch kaha hai ee mere humraahi maine
Tune hath pakad k mera mujhe manzil pe pahonchaya hai

Kaise kahun k tu dur hai mujhse ee mere jaan e jigar
Tujhe to maine har pal apne ruuh me basa paaya hai…!!!
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«Reply #1 on: October 06, 2010, 12:28:51 AM »
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wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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«Reply #2 on: October 06, 2010, 02:39:57 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI    KASAK... DIL KI JI.....

TUNE IS QADAR HAME GUM ME BHI KHUSH RAHENA SEEKHYA HAI
KE BIN TERE HAMNE TUJHKO "APNE RUUH ME BASA PAAYA HAI"....
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«Reply #3 on: October 06, 2010, 05:33:01 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Kasak ji.. too good...

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teri har mushkil me yunhi main tere saath rahunga,
tujhe na dikhe manzil agar to main raah dikhaunga,

andheri ho agar koi raah agar na dikhe koi ummeed agar,
teri har chaahat ko main mohabbat se poora kar dunga,

dil se tere dhadkanon ke saath main har pal rahunga,
karta hoon tujhse mohabbat ye main har baar kahunga,

tujhse hi judi meri saanse hain tujhse hi mera sab kuch,
na mil paaya agar saath tera to main khud ko hi mita dunga,

chaaha hai tujhe maine tujhe har pal chaahta rahunga,
tu hi meri zindagi hai main ye sabse kahunga,.....
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«Reply #4 on: October 06, 2010, 05:44:33 AM »
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aahaaaaaaa kya mastammmmmmmmm reply diya hai kapil ji.......
itna jaldi kaise likh lete ho tum aajkal...aur wo bhi itna mastttttttttttttt....
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«Reply #5 on: October 06, 2010, 05:45:24 AM »
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Quote from: Shihab on October 06, 2010, 03:52:13 AM
Wah Wah Mohtarma Kasak Sahiba Ji Kya Kehne
Kam Shabdon Mein Badi Hi Gehri Baat Likhdi
Jitna Socho Uta Hi Bas Doobte Jaaoge Wah...
Nasihat Baksh Yeh Line Bahut Achchi Lagi Ji.
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Khush Rahiye...

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thnx shihab ji aapne itna pasand kiya meri ek koshish ko...yunhi hausla badhate rahiye...
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«Reply #6 on: October 06, 2010, 05:45:57 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI    KASAK... DIL KI JI.....

TUNE IS QADAR HAME GUM ME BHI KHUSH RAHENA SEEKHYA HAI
KE BIN TERE HAMNE TUJHKO "APNE RUUH ME BASA PAAYA HAI"....

thnx cara ji for appreciating...and aapke replies as always mastammmmmmmmmm
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wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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thnnnnnnnnnxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx neellllllll
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«Reply #8 on: October 06, 2010, 07:15:10 AM »
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Pahli Do Line Behad Khoobsurat Likhi Hai Aapne
Bohat Hi Kam Log Aise Hote Hain Jo Kam Lafzon Men
Itni Badi Baat Likh Paate Hain.Bohat Khoob Kasak Ji Applause Applause

Dad Hazir Hai Ji...

Shad o Aabad Rahen.

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ye hui na bat kya shabda likhe he anu jiii wahhh..

rooh se jism tak jam gaye "Abhi" mere
kisi kaatil nazar ne nasheela koi teer chhoda he~
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«Reply #10 on: October 06, 2010, 07:24:30 AM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on October 05, 2010, 07:39:27 PM
<>*Apne ruuh me basa paaya hai*<>


Har ek beete pal ne mujhe aksar ye samjhaya hai
Nahin aaunga laut k main kyun tune mujhe ganwaya hai

Haule halue chalti hawa bhi aksar mujhse kehti hai
Maine  tere garmi se jalte jism ko aaram pahonchaya hai

Chhanw me jab main jaa baithti hun kadi dhup me
Kehti hai maine tujhe thandak ka ehsaas karaya hai

Chandni raat me jab nahin hota koi chiraag bhi sath
Chanda ki kirnon ne tab mujhe raasta dikhaya hai

Kisi ki majburi dekh kabhi main jo udas ho jati hun
Uss majburi ne majburi me sambhalke rehna sikhaya hai

Jab bhi tujhse kuch kaha hai ee mere humraahi maine
Tune hath pakad k mera mujhe manzil pe pahonchaya hai

Kaise kahun k tu dur hai mujhse ee mere jaan e jigar
Tujhe to maine har pal apne ruuh me basa paaya hai…!!!

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Anuji, Aapki har poetry Ko mera salaam par yeh poetry Bahut Hi gehre Jazbaat liye hue Hai.One of your best work..Asaan se Shabdo mein bahut Gehrai Dikhaayi hai Aapne..

"Har Ek Beete pal ne Mujhe aksar yeh samjhaya hai
nahi aaunga laut ke main kyon tune mujhe gawaya hai

Chandni raat mein jab nahi hota koi chirag bhi saath
Chanda ki kirnon ne tab mujhe raasta dikhaya hai

Kisi ki majboori dekh kahi main jo udaas ho jaati hoon
uss majboori ne majboori mein sambhalkar reehna sikhaya hai

Yeh 3 Ashaar main zindagi bhar sambhaal kar Rakhunga..

Tooooooooo Gooooooooood Dear!!!

 Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you!
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«Reply #11 on: October 07, 2010, 11:55:51 AM »
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Bahut khoob kasak ji...
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khwaish ji sab aapko padhke likha hai...aapki soch me saj k meri poem mast ban gai....har bar ek nai koshish karne ko prerit karti hain aapki poems mujhe,,,thnx ji hamaesha hausla badhane k liye...ynhi hamesha sath rehna......
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«Reply #13 on: October 07, 2010, 07:24:23 PM »
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kya karen kuch kuch hota hai kyun ki dil to pagal hai.... and thanks a lot for your sweet sweet compliments...par aapka jawaab kahaan hai...!!!

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on October 06, 2010, 05:44:33 AM
aahaaaaaaa kya mastammmmmmmmm reply diya hai kapil ji.......
itna jaldi kaise likh lete ho tum aajkal...aur wo bhi itna mastttttttttttttt....
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on October 05, 2010, 07:39:27 PM
<>*Apne ruuh me basa paaya hai*<>


Har ek beete pal ne mujhe aksar ye samjhaya hai
Nahin aaunga laut k main kyun tune mujhe ganwaya hai

Haule halue chalti hawa bhi aksar mujhse kehti hai
Maine  tere garmi se jalte jism ko aaram pahonchaya hai

Chhanw me jab main jaa baithti hun kadi dhup me
Kehti hai maine tujhe thandak ka ehsaas karaya hai

Chandni raat me jab nahin hota koi chiraag bhi sath
Chanda ki kirnon ne tab mujhe raasta dikhaya hai

Kisi ki majburi dekh kabhi main jo udas ho jati hun
Uss majburi ne majburi me sambhalke rehna sikhaya hai

Jab bhi tujhse kuch kaha hai ee mere humraahi maine
Tune hath pakad k mera mujhe manzil pe pahonchaya hai

Kaise kahun k tu dur hai mujhse ee mere jaan e jigar
Tujhe to maine har pal apne ruuh me basa paaya hai…!!!

Wah! Anamika Ji Bahut umda peshkash hai
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