Apni jaan maang rahi hu...Geet...

by brokenbyluv on June 12, 2011, 09:06:09 PM
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Merre ajnabi ye kavita sirrf tumhare liye hamare darmiya chahe kitne faasle ho kitni doori ho kitni hi majburiya ho per merra pyar tumahre liye kabhi kam nhi hoga aur main janti hu ki tum bhi mujhse hamesha mhbt karoge...merri zindgi merri khushiya aur merra har lafz sirrf aur sirrf tumhare naam hai...




Tum apne dil ki baat sab ke samne zaahir karna sikho,
main tumse tumhari apni pehchan maang rahi hu,

ek kadam badhao merri taraf himmat ka,
main tumse mhbt ki udaan maang rahi hu,

main thamungi jo tum hath badhoge,
main tumse apni zindgi ka sabse kimti insan maang rahi hu,

ji nhi sakti tumse door hokar itna smjh lo,
main tou tumse apni jaan maang rahi hu,

mujhe tum sang apna ghar basana hai,
main tumse apne khuabo ka makaan maang rahi hu,

merre labo pe tumhara hi naam jachta hai,
main tumse apni khoyi hui muskaan maang rahi hu,

merre dil mein bhi kayi hasrate chhipi hai,
main tumse kisike hone ka gumaan maang rahi hu,

main jaan gayi hu merra har pehelu khaali hai tum bin,
main tumse ab apni ulfat ka ek nishan maang rahi hu,

jiske rehte mujhe zindgi ka koi rasta mushkil na lage,
main tumse tumhare sath ka aesa aasmaan maang rahi hu,

main bus tumse tumhari pehchan maang rahi hu,
jiske bin ji nhi sakti vo insan maang rahi hu.........
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«Reply #1 on: June 12, 2011, 09:12:58 PM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on June 12, 2011, 09:06:09 PM

Tum ek baar apne dil ki baat sab k samne zaahir karke dekho,
main tumse tumhari apni pehchan maang rahi hu,

ek kadam badhao merri taraf himmat ka,
main tumse mhbt ki udaan maang rahi hu,

main thamungi jo tum hath badhoge,
main apni zindgi ka sabse kimti insan maang rahi hu,

ji nhi sakti tumse door hokar itna smjh lo,
main tou tumse apni jaan maang rahi hu,

mujhe tum sang apna ghar basana hai,
main tumse apne khuabo ka makaan maang rahi hu,

merre labo pe tumhara hi naam jachta hai,
main tumse apni khoyi hui muskaan maang rahi hu,

merre dil mein bhi kayi hasrate chhipi hai,
main tumse kisike hone ka gumaan maang rahi hu,

main jaan gayi hu merra har pehelu khaali hai tum bin,
main tumse ab apni ulfat ka ek nishan maang rahi hu,

jiske rehte mujhe koi gum koi dard chhu na sake,
main tumse tumhari sath ka aesa aasmaan maang rahi hu,

main bus tumse tumhari pehchan maang rahi hu,
jiske bin ji nhi sakti vo insan maang rahi hu.........

Bahut Khoobsurat Ehsaas Likhe Hai aapne ... kahi dil ko zaroor chhuu kar jaate haiN ... Broken Ji !

Very Touching ... Very Impressive Creation ... !

dilee mubaaraqbaad aur daad qubuul kareN .. !!!
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«Reply #2 on: June 12, 2011, 09:16:16 PM »
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Quote from: Anshumali on June 12, 2011, 09:12:58 PM
Bahut Khoobsurat Ehsaas Likhe Hai aapne ... kahi dil ko zaroor chhuu kar jaate haiN ... Broken Ji !

Very Touching ... Very Impressive Creation ... !

dilee mubaaraqbaad aur daad qubuul kareN .. !!!

Bahut shukriya naresh ji kuch tabdiliya ki hai maine zara dobara gaur kijiyega...shukriya....
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«Reply #3 on: June 13, 2011, 06:22:35 AM »
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bahut bahut aur bahut khub geetji...

khub...
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«Reply #4 on: June 13, 2011, 12:21:52 PM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on June 12, 2011, 09:06:09 PM
Merre ajnabi ye kavita sirrf tumhare liye hamare darmiya chahe kitne faasle ho kitni doori ho kitni hi majburiya ho per merra pyar tumahre liye kabhi kam nhi hoga aur main janti hu ki tum bhi mujhse hamesha mhbt karoge...merri zindgi merri khushiya aur merra har lafz sirrf aur sirrf tumhare naam hai...




Tum apne dil ki baat sab ke samne zaahir karna sikho,
main tumse tumhari apni pehchan maang rahi hu,

ek kadam badhao merri taraf himmat ka,
main tumse mhbt ki udaan maang rahi hu,

main thamungi jo tum hath badhoge,
main tumse apni zindgi ka sabse kimti insan maang rahi hu,

ji nhi sakti tumse door hokar itna smjh lo,
main tou tumse apni jaan maang rahi hu,

mujhe tum sang apna ghar basana hai,
main tumse apne khuabo ka makaan maang rahi hu,

merre labo pe tumhara hi naam jachta hai,
main tumse apni khoyi hui muskaan maang rahi hu,

merre dil mein bhi kayi hasrate chhipi hai,
main tumse kisike hone ka gumaan maang rahi hu,

main jaan gayi hu merra har pehelu khaali hai tum bin,
main tumse ab apni ulfat ka ek nishan maang rahi hu,

jiske rehte mujhe zindgi ka koi rasta mushkil na lage,
main tumse tumhare sath ka aesa aasmaan maang rahi hu,

main bus tumse tumhari pehchan maang rahi hu,
jiske bin ji nhi sakti vo insan maang rahi hu.........

bahut achchcha Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: June 13, 2011, 12:44:03 PM »
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Bht LKhoovb Geet Ji.. Wah.. Aeisa lag ta hai jeise humari hi ehsaas kisine bayaan ki hoe..

-SKY-
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«Reply #6 on: June 17, 2011, 08:11:10 AM »
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Quote from: manjum on June 13, 2011, 06:22:35 AM
bahut bahut aur bahut khub geetji...

khub...

Bahut bahut shukriya manju mann ji..
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«Reply #7 on: June 17, 2011, 08:13:09 AM »
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Quote from: Shihab on June 13, 2011, 06:30:51 AM
Bahut Bahut Khub Brokenbyluv Ji...

Shad o Aabad Rahiye...

~Shihab~

Shukriya shihab ji..
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«Reply #8 on: June 17, 2011, 08:13:45 AM »
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Quote from: adil bechain on June 13, 2011, 12:21:52 PM

bahut achchcha Applause Applause Applause Applause

Shukriya adil ji..
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Quote from: SkykiTears on June 13, 2011, 12:44:03 PM
Bht LKhoovb Geet Ji.. Wah.. Aeisa lag ta hai jeise humari hi ehsaas kisine bayaan ki hoe..

-SKY-

Mujhe behad khushi hui sky ji ki apko merre lafzo mein apnapan laga bahut shukriya ji..
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