apni kismat se khel rahi hun...

by cool neha on August 02, 2013, 02:28:41 PM
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logo ki bhari bheed me...
tanhaaiyo me jee rahi hun....
jo door hai mujhse...
usi ki yaado me jee rahi hun....

parayo ke saayo me sabhi ko ....
apna banane ki koshish kar rahi hun...
kabhi- kabhi toh apno ko pyar karte hue....
khud ko bhulane ki galti kar rahi hun.....


aye khuda!! bata toh sahi tu yeh mujhe...
kya chahta hai tu mujhse....??
main toh sab teri ichha se kar rahi hun...
phir q tere rahte main ghut ghut ke jee rahi hun??


kabhi toh tujhe bhi aayega taras..
meri zindagi par, isi aas me jee rahi hun...
bharega tu bhi meri jholi khushiyo se.kabhi ....
isi aas me apni kismat se khel rahi hun....
isi aas me apni kismat se khel rahi hun....

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«Reply #1 on: August 02, 2013, 02:35:36 PM »
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waah waah waah bohut khub neha ji bohut umda
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dhanywaad !! Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: August 02, 2013, 03:32:30 PM »
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bahut khoob
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wah wah bahut khub bahut umda creation neha ji.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: August 02, 2013, 03:58:28 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut khooooooooooooob.... dheron daaad..
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«Reply #6 on: August 02, 2013, 04:57:08 PM »
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Bahut Khoob......... Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: August 02, 2013, 06:04:38 PM »
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bahut gehre ehsaaso se saji aapki ye kalaam bahut khoob rahi neha ji.. Usual Smile

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«Reply #9 on: August 02, 2013, 06:15:29 PM »
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aye khuda!! bata toh sahi tu yeh mujhe...
kya chahta hai tu mujhse....??
main toh sab teri ichha se kar rahi hun...
phir q tere rahte main ghut ghut ke jee rahi hun??

wah wah but khuda ki tamnna janana itna asan nahi hai
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«Reply #10 on: August 02, 2013, 06:17:22 PM »
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logo ki bhari bheed me...
tanhaaiyo me jee rahi hun....
jo door hai mujhse...
usi ki yaado me jee rahi hun....

parayo ke saayo me sabhi ko ....
apna banane ki koshish kar rahi hun...
kabhi- kabhi toh apno ko pyar karte hue....
khud ko bhulane ki galti kar rahi hun.....


aye khuda!! bata toh sahi tu yeh mujhe...
kya chahta hai tu mujhse....??
main toh sab teri ichha se kar rahi hun...
phir q tere rahte main ghut ghut ke jee rahi hun??


kabhi toh tujhe bhi aayega taras..
meri zindagi par, isi aas me jee rahi hun...
bharega tu bhi meri jholi khushiyo se.kabhi ....
isi aas me apni kismat se khel rahi hun....
isi aas me apni kismat se khel rahi hun....

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«Reply #11 on: August 02, 2013, 10:15:49 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut bahut sundar Neha ji....!!!
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«Reply #12 on: August 02, 2013, 10:46:55 PM »
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«Reply #13 on: August 08, 2013, 01:15:23 AM »
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hmmm..tute dil ki aawaz saaf sun sakte hain yahan...nice one NEHA...keep it up..Usual SmileUsual SmileUsual Smile
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Great Neha Applause Applause Applause
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