asar.................A.B

by adil bechain on February 20, 2012, 11:52:13 AM
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                       mere  chiraag   aap   sa   asar   nahin    rakhte..,
                       jalte zarur hain, andhere ki khabar nahin rakhte...,

                       kisi  ke   muskhuraane   ki  bhi taftish karein aap,
                       mere  muhaafiz   bhi   aisi   nazar   nahin  rakhte,

                       thakk  jaate   hain   khyaal   bhi    chalte -chalte,
                       mere  jazbe   bhi   aap   sa   safar   nahin   rakhte,

                       dushmano.n   se   bhi  kabhi   gale   mil  liya  karo,
                       dil    mein  abb  itna   bhi  zahar    nahin   rakhte,

                       baad   maut   ke    hona   dafan   sab   ko bechain...!
                       iss   khyaal   se   qabr ko kabhi  ghar nahin rakhte.

                      
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«Reply #1 on: February 20, 2012, 12:50:58 PM »
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Mindblowing creation Adil ji.. Simply fantastic !! Bahoot Bahoot Umda !!!

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«Reply #2 on: February 20, 2012, 01:14:20 PM »
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very gud adil ji bohud umda ek ek line kuch kehti hai
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«Reply #3 on: February 20, 2012, 01:30:00 PM »
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Waaah Waaah Waah!!!

Kya Kehne Adil Ji...

Bahut Bahut Khooob!!!!

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«Reply #4 on: February 20, 2012, 04:22:12 PM »
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lajawaab--awsome creation
maan gaye ustaad-- Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: February 20, 2012, 06:12:51 PM »
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Bechain sahaab aadaab!

Janab waah kia kahne aapke...
behad khoobsurti se ahsaas o khayaal ko lafz diye hai janab...

sabhi ashaar kafi umdaa aur gehre rahe janaab...
is khoob aur umdaa kalaam par humari dili daad
o mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

likhte rahiye... aate rahiye...
shaad o aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: February 20, 2012, 06:28:52 PM »
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Bahut khoob Adil Bhai
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dushmano.n   se   bhi  kabhi   gale   mil  liya  karo,
dil    mein  abb  itna   bhi  zahar    nahin   rakhte,
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«Reply #7 on: February 20, 2012, 07:19:10 PM »
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bahut badiya likha adil ji aapne...
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«Reply #8 on: February 21, 2012, 04:19:51 AM »
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«Reply #9 on: February 21, 2012, 04:29:53 AM »
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 Hats off to you! Bahut khub Adil ji
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«Reply #10 on: February 21, 2012, 12:17:54 PM »
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Quote from: Nysha on February 20, 2012, 12:50:58 PM
Mindblowing creation Adil ji.. Simply fantastic !! Bahoot Bahoot Umda !!!

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«Reply #11 on: February 21, 2012, 12:18:45 PM »
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very gud adil ji bohud umda ek ek line kuch kehti hai

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Waaah Waaah Waah!!!

Kya Kehne Adil Ji...

Bahut Bahut Khooob!!!!

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lajawaab--awsome creation
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