"BAABUL TERA GHAR NA CHOOT PAYEGA"

by k.shael on May 10, 2008, 11:57:09 AM
Pages: 1 [2]  All
ReplyPrint
Author  (Read 8136 times)
muhammed rashed
Guest
«Reply #15 on: June 03, 2008, 12:02:37 PM »
Reply with quote
hamin to tarif bhi karni nahi ati bahoot khoob  Applause Applause Thumbs UP
hi shel i truely touchable to every one heart
keep going

 tearyeyed
Rashed[]
Logged
Similar Poetry and Posts (Note: Find replies to above post after the related posts and poetry)
~~"TERA PYAAR NA BHULA PAAYENGE"~~ by k.shael in Shayri-E-Dard « 1 2  All »
"Ghar Ki Bewiyon Koe Kun Rulate Hoe." -SKY- by SkykiTears in Shairi - E - Zindagi
"GHAR" Unwaan par ANAARHI k chand aash'aar by Anaarhi in Ghazals
k.shael
Guest
«Reply #16 on: June 03, 2008, 12:04:26 PM »
Reply with quote
THANX POONAM JI & MUHAMMED JI
THANX FOR APPRICIATE MY WORK
BY. K.SHAEL
Logged
Azeem Azaad
WeCare
Mashhur Shayar
***

Rau: 14
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
65 days, 6 hours and 29 minutes.
Humko Abtak Aashiqi Ka Wo Zamaana Yaad Hai,.

Posts: 19903
Member Since: Feb 2006


View Profile
«Reply #17 on: December 13, 2008, 11:19:03 AM »
Reply with quote
Waah Waah,.
Kya Khoob Likha Hai,.
Shally Ji,.
Nice One Yaar,.
And Jaya Didi Aapne Bhi Kamaal Ka Likha Hai,.
Logged
Pooja
Guest
«Reply #18 on: December 13, 2008, 11:35:42 AM »
Reply with quote
good work shally
Logged
k.shael
Guest
«Reply #19 on: December 13, 2008, 11:53:28 AM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: Jaanasheen on December 13, 2008, 11:19:03 AM
Waah Waah,.
Kya Khoob Likha Hai,.
Shally Ji,.
Nice One Yaar,.
And Jaya Didi Aapne Bhi Kamaal Ka Likha Hai,.


Shukriya Azeem ji,

Shally.
Logged
Azeem Azaad
WeCare
Mashhur Shayar
***

Rau: 14
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
65 days, 6 hours and 29 minutes.
Humko Abtak Aashiqi Ka Wo Zamaana Yaad Hai,.

Posts: 19903
Member Since: Feb 2006


View Profile
«Reply #20 on: December 14, 2008, 03:39:24 PM »
Reply with quote
You Are Always welcome My Dear,.
Logged
k.shael
Guest
«Reply #21 on: December 15, 2008, 05:51:33 AM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: Pooja on December 13, 2008, 11:35:42 AM
good work shally

SHUKRIYA POOJA DIDI,

SHALLY.
Logged
Sonia01
Guest
«Reply #22 on: January 04, 2009, 03:35:21 PM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: k.shael on May 10, 2008, 11:57:09 AM
THIS POEM IS DEDICATE TO MY PAPA

BAABUL AAJ TERI BETIYA KO TO EK BAAT
BATA,SAB KEHTE HAI MUJHE TERA GHAR
CHODNA HOGA...

ISS GHAR KE SAB RISHTOON KO TODNA
HOGA,BAABUL MUJHE NAHI CHODNA GHAR
TERA,NA HI TOOTEGA KOI RISHTA MERA

MUJHE NAHI JANA TUJHE CHOD KAR,KEH DE
TU ISS DUNIYA KO BOL KAR,KYUN DUSRE
GHAR JAO MEIN,

KYUN ISS GHAR KO PARAYA BATTAON MEIN,
NA MUJHE MILAEGI MERI MAA WAHA,NA HOGA
MERA BHAI WAHA....

CHOOTI KE SAATH JHAGAD PAAONGI KAISE,
AGAR BHEJEGA TU MUJHE WAHA,TERE PASS
KYA KAMI HAI MUJHE JO TUJHE CHOD US
GHAR MEIN JAO MEIN,

TU HI BATA AKELI NAYE RISHTOON MEIN,
KAISE KHUD KO DHAL PAAONGI MEIN,TERA
AANAGN NA MILEGA NA HOGA SAATH
SAHELIYOON KA,

TU HI DE JAWAB MERI INN PAHELIYOON KA
BABA TUJHE TERI BETIYA SE PYAR NAHI,MERI
CHOD TU KHUD KI BATA KAISE REH PAYEGA TU
MERE BINA....

PAL-PAL YAAD KAREGA MUJHE PAL-PAL AAWAJ
DEGA,PHIR KON AAKAR TUJHE PAANI KA GILAAS
DEGA,

JAB TU RAAT KO THAK HAAR KE GHAR AAYEGA,
KAISE MERI HASSI KO SUN KHUD KO KHUSH KAR
PAYEGA,BIN TERE AAGAR MEIN HOON AADHOORI
TO TERA GHAR BHI TO SOONA HO JAYEGA....

JANE KISS DESH MEIN BHEJEGA TU MUJHE,
KAISE TUJHSE MILAN HO PAYEGA,BABA EK BAT
BATA APNI BITIYA KO KYA TU USKE BINA REH
PAYEGA...

KAREGA JAB MERI VIDAAI TU USS KHUDA KA BHI DIL
BHAR AAYEGA,KAR ITNI REHMAT MUJHPE MERE BAABUL

TERE GHAR MEIN REHNE DE MUJHE,KABHI TUJHE
DUKH NA DOONGI YE WAADA HAI MERA,BAABUL TU
HI BATA MUJH BIN KAISE HOGA GUJARA TERA...

BAABUL KEH DE USS KHUDA AUR ISS DUNIYA SE,KI
TU MUJHE JUDA NA KAR PAAYEGA,BAABUL EK BAAT
BATA APNI BITIYA KO KYA TU MERE BINA REH
PAYEGA...

BY. K.SHAEL

Her larki aisa hi sochti hai jaise ke aap...
Bahut accha likha hai aapne yeh kavita...
Papa aap ke bahut khush honge ye nazrana
padkar... Bahut khoob... Applause Applause
Logged
superspawn10
Guest
«Reply #23 on: May 02, 2009, 08:30:51 PM »
Reply with quote
bohot khoob likha hai...mashaallah...
Logged
k.shael
Guest
«Reply #24 on: May 04, 2009, 05:32:22 AM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: Sonia01 on January 04, 2009, 03:35:21 PM
Her larki aisa hi sochti hai jaise ke aap...
Bahut accha likha hai aapne yeh kavita...
Papa aap ke bahut khush honge ye nazrana
padkar... Bahut khoob... Applause Applause


Bahut Bahut Shukriya Soniya Dear,

Shally.
Logged
k.shael
Guest
«Reply #25 on: May 04, 2009, 05:34:08 AM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: superspawn10 on May 02, 2009, 08:30:51 PM
bohot khoob likha hai...mashaallah...

Bahut Bahut Shukriya SS Ji,

Aapne mere bahut purane aur mere dil ke sabse kareeb thread pe reply kiya thanx a lottttttt

Shally.
Logged
Pages: 1 [2]  All
ReplyPrint
Yoindia ShayariAdab > Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari > Shairi - E - Zindagi > Topic: "BAABUL TERA GHAR NA CHOOT PAYEGA"
Jump to:  

+ Quick Reply
With a Quick-Reply you can use bulletin board code and smileys as you would in a normal post, but much more conveniently.


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
User
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
December 25, 2024, 04:29:09 PM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
Shayri
by mkv
[December 22, 2024, 05:36:15 PM]
मोहब्बत लिखने की ,,,saah...
by saahill
[December 19, 2024, 08:27:42 AM]
तुम्हारे ख़्वाब ,,,,, sa...
by saahill
[December 17, 2024, 08:39:55 AM]
सुना था मोहब्बत ,,,, saa...
by saahill
[December 15, 2024, 06:04:49 AM]
साजिश नहीं ,,,, saahill
by saahill
[December 13, 2024, 06:54:09 AM]
zikar tumhara ,,,, saahil...
by saahill
[December 10, 2024, 08:23:12 AM]
khamosh ,,,, saahill
by saahill
[December 10, 2024, 08:22:15 AM]
Hyderabadi language
by Arif Uddin
[December 03, 2024, 07:06:48 PM]
parhezz ,,,, saahill
by saahill
[November 26, 2024, 08:47:05 AM]
mulaqaat nhi ho rahi,,,, ...
by saahill
[November 21, 2024, 09:01:29 AM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.098 seconds with 25 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8509 Real Poets and poetry admirer