baad muddat ke........A.B

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                               tahrik-e-zindabaad mein koi josh na mila...,
                               kai  sarr  mile  per  sarfarosh  na mila...,

                               rahaa  beasar  na  jaane  kyon  maiqada apna..,
                               bikhre paimaan.n ke beech koi madhosh na mila..,

                               binaa  noor  ke  bhi  rahi roshan zindagi uski..,
                               wallah  uss  jaisa  hamein  baa-hosh  na  mila..,

                               samajhna  kamzor  hamein  thi  ek  bhool  uski..,
                               aaj  tak  phir hamein  aisa  khargosh  na mila..,

                               utre  goad  se  jo  hamm  apni maa ke bechain...,
                               afsos  phir  kabhi  hamein aisa aagosh na mila..,
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«Reply #1 on: April 18, 2012, 01:13:46 PM »
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Adil bhai, bahut bahut khoob. Matle aur Maqte ke she'r kamaal k hain.
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«Reply #2 on: April 18, 2012, 01:48:18 PM »
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                               tahrik-e-zindabaad mein koi josh na mila...,
                               kai  sarr  mile  per  sarfarosh  na mila...,

                               rahaa  beasar  na  jaane  kyon  maiqada apna..,
                               bikhre paimaan.n ke beech koi madhosh na mila..,

                               binaa  noor  ke  bhi  rahi roshan zindagi uski..,
                               wallah  uss  jaisa  hamein  baa-hosh  na  mila..,

                               samajhna  kamzor  hamein  thi  ek  bhool  uski..,
                               aaj  tak  phir hamein  aisa  khargosh  na mila..,

                               utre  goad  se  jo  hamm  apni maa ke bechain...,
                               afsos  phir  kabhi  hamein aisa aagosh na mila..,



Bahut bahut Khooob Adil ji..

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«Reply #3 on: April 18, 2012, 02:32:39 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Adil ji...!!!
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«Reply #4 on: April 18, 2012, 02:55:50 PM »
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bahut khoob adil saheb bahut dino ke baad padhaa hai aapko daad haazir hai
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«Reply #5 on: April 18, 2012, 03:07:07 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: April 18, 2012, 03:33:43 PM »
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Bahut haseen ghazal se nawaza hai, adil saheb. tahe dil e shukriya aur daad .Hasan
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«Reply #7 on: April 18, 2012, 04:42:21 PM »
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vaaaaaaaah adil bhai  is shaandaar ghajal par dili daad haajir hai.. 
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«Reply #8 on: April 18, 2012, 06:25:39 PM »
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«Reply #9 on: April 19, 2012, 03:33:35 AM »
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bahut bahut khub adilji...

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«Reply #10 on: April 19, 2012, 09:23:58 AM »
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Adil bhai, bahut bahut khoob. Matle aur Maqte ke she'r kamaal k hain.

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«Reply #11 on: April 19, 2012, 08:35:09 PM »
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Bechain Sahaab Aadaab!


Kia baat hai janab waaH waaH waaH behad khoob aur umdaa kalaam kahi
hai janab... behad khoob kafi umdaa aur purasar ahsaas O khayaal bayaaN
kiye hai... Usual Smile


Sabhi ashaar Masha Allaah aik se badhkar aik haiN...
humari dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile


Likhate rahiye.. aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
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                               tahrik-e-zindabaad mein koi josh na mila...,
                               kai  sarr  mile  per  sarfarosh  na mila...,

                               rahaa  beasar  na  jaane  kyon  maiqada apna..,
                               bikhre paimaan.n ke beech koi madhosh na mila..,

                               binaa  noor  ke  bhi  rahi roshan zindagi uski..,
                               wallah  uss  jaisa  hamein  baa-hosh  na  mila..,

                               samajhna  kamzor  hamein  thi  ek  bhool  uski..,
                               aaj  tak  phir hamein  aisa  khargosh  na mila..,

                               utre  goad  se  jo  hamm  apni maa ke bechain...,
                               afsos  phir  kabhi  hamein aisa aagosh na mila..,

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«Reply #12 on: April 21, 2012, 08:14:55 AM »
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Bahut bahut Khooob Adil ji..

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shukriya khawaish ji
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«Reply #13 on: May 09, 2012, 10:03:20 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Adil ji...!!!

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«Reply #14 on: May 17, 2012, 06:49:49 PM »
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bahut khoob adil saheb bahut dino ke baad padhaa hai aapko daad haazir hai

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