BAAT DIL KI

by Rizwan Ali (Zinda) on May 10, 2009, 10:50:57 AM
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Baat Dil Ki Lavon Par Ruki Reh Gayi,
Ek Nadi Ret Hi Mein Davi Reh Gayi|

Usne Gairon Ki Tehzeev Apna TO Lee,
Uski Rangat Mager Saawli Reh Gayi|

Ki Unhe Khushk Karne Ki Koshish Bahot,
Meri Aankho Mein Fir Bhi Nami Reh Gayi|

Bhaa-gayi Mejwaani Meri Iss Kadar,
Muflisi Mere Ghar Mein Ruki Reh Gayi|

Saare Kachche Makaan Soga'e Shaher Ke,
Ek Haweli Mager Jaagti Reh Gayi|

Saare Manjar Tere Shaher Ke Gum Hu'e,
Teri Surat Nazar Mein Basi Reh Gayi|
Dekhte-Dekhte Chhu-Liya Aasma,
Har Nazar Mera Kadd Naapti Reh Gayi|

                             Rizwan Ali (Zinda)
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«Reply #1 on: May 10, 2009, 12:54:52 PM »
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Wahhhhhhhh wahhhhhhhhhh wahhhhhhhhhhhhhh wahhhhhhhhhh Rizwan mere bhai tumne to kamal kar diya subhan_allah dost kya kalam likha hain dil se dad kabool ho, khuda tumhari kalam ka jadoo kayem rakhe.

Muflisi mere ghar me ruki reh gayi.........Maza aa gaya.  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: May 10, 2009, 01:03:26 PM »
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Welcome to yoindia Rizwan Sahab
bahut accha likha hai aapne Applause Applause Applause
keep posting...
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«Reply #3 on: May 10, 2009, 01:05:31 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Rizwan Bhai... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Umeed Karta Hoon Aapse Aur Bhi Kalam Padhne Ko Milenge.Bahut ache
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«Reply #4 on: May 10, 2009, 04:07:57 PM »
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Rizwan Sahib, bahut aala aur bakamaal shayiri likhi hai...
Khushaamdeed kehte hain yahan aapko...
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«Reply #5 on: May 10, 2009, 04:10:27 PM »
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Baat Dil Ki Lavon Par Ruki Reh Gayi,
Ek Nadi Ret Hi Mein Davi Reh Gayi|

Usne Gairon Ki Tehzeev Apna TO Lee,
Uski Rangat Mager Saawli Reh Gayi|

Ki Unhe Khushk Karne Ki Koshish Bahot,
Meri Aankho Mein Fir Bhi Nami Reh Gayi|

Bhaa-gayi Mejwaani Meri Iss Kadar,
Muflisi Mere Ghar Mein Ruki Reh Gayi|

Saare Kachche Makaan Soga'e Shaher Ke,
Ek Haweli Mager Jaagti Reh Gayi|

Saare Manjar Tere Shaher Ke Gum Hu'e,
Teri Surat Nazar Mein Basi Reh Gayi|
Dekhte-Dekhte Chhu-Liya Aasma,
Har Nazar Mera Kadd Naapti Reh Gayi|

                             Rizwan Ali (Zinda)
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Wah Rizwan ji bahut khoob  Applause
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«Reply #6 on: May 10, 2009, 09:06:05 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Rizwan Ji
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«Reply #7 on: May 11, 2009, 07:17:59 AM »
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bhoot bahoot khoob Rizwan Ji.. Keep writing...
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«Reply #8 on: May 13, 2009, 09:47:21 AM »
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Bohot Khoob Rizwan Ji
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«Reply #9 on: May 16, 2009, 08:01:00 AM »
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very very nice rizwan ji,keep writting,
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«Reply #10 on: October 30, 2010, 02:12:44 PM »
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Thank you Everyone!
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«Reply #11 on: October 30, 2010, 05:51:51 PM »
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Bohat Achhey Janaab Rizwab Sahab
Badi Hi Khoobsurat Peshkash Hai.

Dad hi Dad.

Khush Rahen.

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«Reply #12 on: February 04, 2011, 11:50:01 AM »
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Thanx
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«Reply #13 on: February 06, 2011, 09:13:31 PM »
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Baat Dil Ki Lavon Par Ruki Reh Gayi,
Ek Nadi Ret Hi Mein Davi Reh Gayi|

Usne Gairon Ki Tehzeev Apna TO Lee,
Uski Rangat Mager Saawli Reh Gayi|

Ki Unhe Khushk Karne Ki Koshish Bahot,
Meri Aankho Mein Fir Bhi Nami Reh Gayi|

Bhaa-gayi Mejwaani Meri Iss Kadar,
Muflisi Mere Ghar Mein Ruki Reh Gayi|

Saare Kachche Makaan Soga'e Shaher Ke,
Ek Haweli Mager Jaagti Reh Gayi|

Saare Manjar Tere Shaher Ke Gum Hu'e,
Teri Surat Nazar Mein Basi Reh Gayi|
Dekhte-Dekhte Chhu-Liya Aasma,
Har Nazar Mera Kadd Naapti Reh Gayi|

                             Rizwan Ali (Zinda)
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bahut bahut khoob zinda sahab behtreen zindadili ka ehsaas karaya apni ghazal ke hawale se. saare ashaar  khoob rahe
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