Baaten

by bekarar on February 19, 2010, 07:23:18 AM
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bahoot kar chuka hun mai, labo-rukhsaar ki baaten,
palkon ki chilman ki, tere deedar ki baaten,
teri kambakht nazron ke teero talwaar ki baaten,
gulshan chaman ki phoolon ki bahaar ki baaten

chalo aaj karte hain kuch ghar-sansaar ki baaten,
boodhe baap ki charcha, us beemar ki baaten,
maa ke aanchal se bahti ruhani bayar ki baaten
un bahno ki yaaden, unke dulaar ki baaten,

tumhaare rukhsaar se jaate gulabi khumar ki baaten,
haqikat se muhn churate tumhare pyaar ki baaten,
chalo mai band karta hun fir ye bekaar si baaten,
lo fir se karne laga hun mai, jhute pyaar ki baaten,

teri kambakht nazron ke teero talwaar ki baaten,
gulshan chaman ki phoolon ki bahaar ki baaten
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«Reply #1 on: February 19, 2010, 08:12:02 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI      BEKARAR JI......

JITNI BAR KARO APNO KI TAARIF KI BAATEN
MAZE LEKAR SUNENGE BAR BAR YE BAATEN
YAHAN WAHAN KI SUNAO SANSAAR KI BAATEN
KHUSHI KHUSHI SE SUNEGE AURON KI BAATEN
JAB BHI KARO APNO KI KHAMIYON KI BAATEN
APNE GHAR BAR ME AAYI TAKLIF KI BAATEN
MUH FERLETE HAI KAHAN SUNTE HAI YE BAATEN
ZINDAGI MEIN GUM AUR KHUSHIYAN DONO KI HOTI HAI BAATEN
PHIR KYUN SIRF KHUSHIYON KI PASAND KARTE HAI BAATEN
KYUN DOOR BAAGH JAATE HAIN SUNKAR GUM KI BAATEN.....
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«Reply #2 on: February 19, 2010, 09:20:30 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Sanjeev Bro..

Iss Kavita Mein Aapne Pehle Sher mein Husn Ki tareef Mein Kuch likha..

Dusre Sher mein Aapne Ghar-Sansaar,Ghar Ke sadasyon ki Baatein Kahin..

Teesre Sher Mein Jhoote Pyaar Ki Baaton ka Zikr kiya..

Bahut Ache..Har Ek Sher Lajawaab!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: February 19, 2010, 01:11:19 PM »
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Kuch naya padhne ko mila....Bohot Khoob Sanjeev Ji Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: February 19, 2010, 05:26:16 PM »
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haqeeqat bayaan kiyaa aapney inn lines main bekaraar ji ....behtreen Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: February 20, 2010, 05:09:00 AM »
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bhut hi umdaa baat kahi hai aapne or bahut hi imda tareeke se.
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«Reply #6 on: February 20, 2010, 05:25:32 AM »
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MashaAllah ! Bahoot Bahoot UMda Peshkash hai Sanjeev ji, Bahoot Khoob!
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«Reply #7 on: February 21, 2010, 05:51:46 AM »
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Quote from: cara on February 19, 2010, 08:12:02 AM
WAH KYA BAAT HAI      BEKARAR JI......

JITNI BAR KARO APNO KI TAARIF KI BAATEN
MAZE LEKAR SUNENGE BAR BAR YE BAATEN
YAHAN WAHAN KI SUNAO SANSAAR KI BAATEN
KHUSHI KHUSHI SE SUNEGE AURON KI BAATEN
JAB BHI KARO APNO KI KHAMIYON KI BAATEN
APNE GHAR BAR ME AAYI TAKLIF KI BAATEN
MUH FERLETE HAI KAHAN SUNTE HAI YE BAATEN
ZINDAGI MEIN GUM AUR KHUSHIYAN DONO KI HOTI HAI BAATEN
PHIR KYUN SIRF KHUSHIYON KI PASAND KARTE HAI BAATEN
KYUN DOOR BAAGH JAATE HAIN SUNKAR GUM KI BAATEN.....
bahoot shukriya cara ji..aapne pasand kiya..
aur aapne bhi khoob likha hai
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«Reply #8 on: February 21, 2010, 05:57:54 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on February 19, 2010, 09:20:30 AM
Bahut Bahut Khoob Sanjeev Bro..

Iss Kavita Mein Aapne Pehle Sher mein Husn Ki tareef Mein Kuch likha..

Dusre Sher mein Aapne Ghar-Sansaar,Ghar Ke sadasyon ki Baatein Kahin..

Teesre Sher Mein Jhoote Pyaar Ki Baaton ka Zikr kiya..

Bahut Ache..Har Ek Sher Lajawaab!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

tah-e-dil se shukriya bro aapne padha....waise is kavita ki theam kuch yun hai ki.....premi apni premika se aaj bajay pyar mohabbat ki baaton ke apne ghar parivar ke baare me baaten karna chahta hai..lekin in baton par premika ke berukhe-pan ko dekhkar apna irada badal deta hai aur fir se wohi baaten karne lagta hai jo uski premika sunna chahti hai
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«Reply #9 on: February 21, 2010, 05:58:23 AM »
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Wah wah Bekarar ji kya hi khoobsurat aur haqeeqat par mabni ye nazm likhi hai aapane. Really very nice creation. I like it.
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«Reply #10 on: February 21, 2010, 06:00:18 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on February 19, 2010, 01:11:19 PM
Kuch naya padhne ko mila....Bohot Khoob Sanjeev Ji Applause Applause
bahoot shukriya talat
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«Reply #11 on: February 21, 2010, 06:02:30 AM »
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on February 19, 2010, 05:26:16 PM
haqeeqat bayaan kiyaa aapney inn lines main bekaraar ji ....behtreen Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
housala-afazai ka shukriya ka ji
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Quote from: vineet thakkar on February 20, 2010, 05:09:00 AM
bhut hi umdaa baat kahi hai aapne or bahut hi imda tareeke se.
bahoot shukriya vinit ji....yoindia par niyamit aate rahiye
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«Reply #13 on: February 21, 2010, 06:05:16 AM »
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Quote from: Sophi on February 20, 2010, 05:25:32 AM
MashaAllah ! Bahoot Bahoot UMda Peshkash hai Sanjeev ji, Bahoot Khoob!

bahoot abhar sophi ..aapne kavita ko saraha
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«Reply #14 on: February 21, 2010, 06:07:13 AM »
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Quote from: riyaz106 on February 21, 2010, 05:58:23 AM
Wah wah Bekarar ji kya hi khoobsurat aur haqeeqat par mabni ye nazm likhi hai aapane. Really very nice creation. I like it.
bahoot shukriya riyaj sahab aapko pasand aaya
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