baat...............(K_A)

by khamosh_aawaaz on June 14, 2012, 10:12:44 AM
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                            beeet   gai   so   baat  gai..!
                            per   meri   poori  raat gai.!!

                           
                            thii   to  mehbooba  wo  meri.!
                            mere  dushman  ke saath   gai.!


                            insaaniyat kaun pooche yahaan.!
                            buss  rishte  mein  zaat  gai.!


                            rahe jeet ke bhi haare hue se.!
                            sungg   mere   to   maat  gai.!

                       
                            sudhar na sakaa 'khamosh' kabhi.!
                            bekaar    maa    ki  laat  gai.!!
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«Reply #1 on: June 14, 2012, 10:33:18 AM »
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bahut hee laajwaab chhotee bahr kee peshkash is par dheron daad aur ek rau
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«Reply #2 on: June 14, 2012, 10:48:24 AM »
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Beautifull.
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«Reply #3 on: June 14, 2012, 11:31:35 AM »
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very nice one rau
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«Reply #4 on: June 14, 2012, 01:04:01 PM »
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Bahut acche
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«Reply #5 on: June 14, 2012, 02:11:14 PM »
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Bahut khoob , KA ji. 1 rau .
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«Reply #6 on: June 14, 2012, 04:47:54 PM »
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wah bahut khoob
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bahut badhiya sir bahut hi gazb likha hai apne dhero daad......... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: June 14, 2012, 04:55:36 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob K_A ji....!!!
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«Reply #9 on: June 14, 2012, 04:56:34 PM »
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boht ache
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«Reply #10 on: June 14, 2012, 07:42:34 PM »
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khoob likha jjnab
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«Reply #11 on: June 15, 2012, 03:50:45 AM »
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nice
Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on June 14, 2012, 10:12:44 AM

                            beeet   gai   so   baat  gai..!
                            per   meri   poori  raat gai.!!

                           
                            thii   to  mehbooba  wo  meri.!
                            mere  dushman  ke saath   gai.!


                            insaaniyat kaun pooche yahaan.!
                            buss  rishte  mein  zaat  gai.!


                            rahe jeet ke bhi haare hue se.!
                            sungg   mere   to   maat  gai.!

                       
                            sudhar na sakaa 'khamosh' kabhi.!
                            bekaar    maa    ki  laat  gai.!!
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«Reply #12 on: June 15, 2012, 03:51:29 AM »
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good indeed
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«Reply #13 on: June 15, 2012, 11:26:35 AM »
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K A jee Aadaab!

bahut khoob janab waaH waaH kia kahne... badi hi khoobsurati
se aapni itne kam lafzoN meiN achche ashaaroN ko bayaaN kiya
hai... waqai choti bher meiN koi umdaa sher adaa karna bahut
mushkil hai...

Sabhi ashar khoob rahe janab, haaN saath kafiye wala sher kharij
karke dusra kah dijiye... saNjeeda kalaam meiN aisa sher wazn
nahi rakhta... Usual Smile

Maqta toH janab behad umdaa raha bahut khoob bada hi umdaa khayaal
bayaaN kiya hai waaH jee ... HazaaroN dili daad maqte ke liye..
hamaari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye.... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                 
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«Reply #14 on: June 15, 2012, 05:33:32 PM »
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Vaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Khamosh jee
Bahut hi umda likha hai aapne.
kamaal ke ehsaas.. bahut khoob
Choti behr ki is kalaam pe dher si daad aur haardik shubhkaamnaayen
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