baat...............(K_A)

by khamosh_aawaaz on June 14, 2012, 10:12:44 AM
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«Reply #15 on: June 16, 2012, 06:07:32 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on June 14, 2012, 10:33:18 AM
bahut hee laajwaab chhotee bahr kee peshkash is par dheron daad aur ek rau

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«Reply #16 on: June 18, 2012, 10:34:18 AM »
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on June 14, 2012, 10:12:44 AM

                            beeet   gai   so   baat  gai..!
                            per   meri   poori  raat gai.!!

                           
                            thii   to  mehbooba  wo  meri.!
                            mere  dushman  ke saath   gai.!


                            insaaniyat kaun pooche yahaan.!
                            buss  rishte  mein  zaat  gai.!


                            rahe jeet ke bhi haare hue se.!
                            sungg   mere   to   maat  gai.!

                       
                            sudhar na sakaa 'khamosh' kabhi.!
                            bekaar    maa    ki  laat  gai.!!


bhayee matlaa bahut acha laga , thoda behr pe dhyaan do ... aur aakhri sher nahi acha laga ..  "laat" wala.. ye lafz sahi nahi maa ke liye

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«Reply #17 on: June 18, 2012, 06:27:08 PM »
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Quote from: Masoom Shahzada on June 14, 2012, 10:48:24 AM
Beautifull.

thanx
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«Reply #18 on: June 19, 2012, 10:42:42 AM »
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Waah waah....K_A ji..bahut..khoob...Raqeeb
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«Reply #19 on: June 19, 2012, 10:46:24 AM »
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on June 14, 2012, 10:12:44 AM

                            beeet   gai   so   baat  gai..!
                            per   meri   poori  raat gai.!!

                            
                            thii   to  mehbooba  wo  meri.!
                            mere  dushman  ke saath   gai.!


                            insaaniyat kaun pooche yahaan.!
                            buss  rishte  mein  zaat  gai.!


                            rahe jeet ke bhi haare hue se.!
                            sungg   mere   to   maat  gai.!

                      
                            sudhar na sakaa 'khamosh' kabhi.!
                            bekaar    maa    ki  laat  gai.!!
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Lovely KA ji ek Rau bhi banta hai is creation pe....
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«Reply #20 on: June 19, 2012, 02:06:57 PM »
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on June 14, 2012, 10:12:44 AM

                            beeet   gai   so   baat  gai..!
                            per   meri   poori  raat gai.!!

                           
                            thii   to  mehbooba  wo  meri.!
                            mere  dushman  ke saath   gai.!


                            insaaniyat kaun pooche yahaan.!
                            buss  rishte  mein  zaat  gai.!


                            rahe jeet ke bhi haare hue se.!
                            sungg   mere   to   maat  gai.!

                       
                            sudhar na sakaa 'khamosh' kabhi.!
                            bekaar    maa    ki  laat  gai.!!

Bahut Bahut Khoob  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #21 on: June 22, 2012, 02:38:33 PM »
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Quote from: himanshuIITR on June 14, 2012, 11:31:35 AM
very nice one rau

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«Reply #22 on: July 25, 2012, 09:19:51 AM »
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Quote from: shaukeen on June 14, 2012, 01:04:01 PM
Bahut acche
Applause Applause

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«Reply #23 on: July 25, 2012, 09:37:02 AM »
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BAHUT KHUB K_A JI Applause Applause
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«Reply #24 on: July 28, 2012, 07:59:02 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on June 14, 2012, 02:11:14 PM
Bahut khoob , KA ji. 1 rau .

thanx FHS
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«Reply #25 on: July 30, 2012, 06:30:59 PM »
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Quote from: jaishree on June 14, 2012, 04:47:54 PM
wah bahut khoob

thanx
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«Reply #26 on: August 02, 2012, 08:00:56 AM »
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Quote from: soudagar on June 14, 2012, 04:51:52 PM
bahut badhiya sir bahut hi gazb likha hai apne dhero daad......... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

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«Reply #27 on: August 06, 2012, 08:07:30 AM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on June 14, 2012, 04:55:36 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob K_A ji....!!!



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