Bachpan aur Jawani .... ..... ..... PWFS

by pankajwfs on March 15, 2012, 01:30:25 PM
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Chotte chotte kadmoN pe tumne chalna sikha.
Totli zabaan me maa papa bolna sikha.

Jin walid ki ungli pakad jo duniya dekhi.
Usi duniya me phir unka dil dukhana sikha.

Bachpan me bimaar pade to unhone ki sewa.
Jawani me kyun tumne unka dard talna sikha.

Har ek khwaish bachpan ki unhone puri ki.
Unki pyar ki chahat ko paise se tolna sikha.

Har ek ganth ristoN ki judi Jinke Saaye tale.  
In ristoN ke liye un darkhtoN ko kaatna sikha.

(PWFS - 15/03/2012 @ 07:00 PM)
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«Reply #1 on: March 15, 2012, 05:25:26 PM »
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very nice nd true creation janaab
daad daad

khus rahen
muskurate rahen
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«Reply #2 on: March 15, 2012, 05:34:34 PM »
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bahut achhe pankaj ji... Usual Smile

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«Reply #3 on: March 16, 2012, 03:11:07 AM »
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Quote from: sarfira on March 15, 2012, 05:25:26 PM
very nice nd true creation janaab
daad daad

khus rahen
muskurate rahen


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«Reply #4 on: March 16, 2012, 04:26:32 AM »
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Very very good
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«Reply #5 on: March 16, 2012, 07:54:31 AM »
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Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on March 15, 2012, 05:34:34 PM
bahut achhe pankaj ji... Usual Smile

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«Reply #6 on: March 16, 2012, 08:28:01 AM »
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Quote from: pankajwfs on March 15, 2012, 01:30:25 PM
Chotte chotte kadmoN pe tumne chalna sikha.
Totli zabaan me maa papa bolna sikha.

Jin walid ki ungli pakad jo duniya dekhi.
Usi duniya me phir unka dil dukhana sikha.

Bachpan me bimaar pade to unhone ki sewa.
Jawani me kyun tumne unka dard talna sikha.

Har ek khwaish bachpan ki unhone puri ki.
Unki pyar ki chahat ko paise se tolna sikha.

Har ek ganth ristoN ki judi Jinke Saaye tale. 
In ristoN ke liye un darkhtoN ko kaatna sikha.

(PWFS - 15/03/2012 @ 07:00 PM)


Bahut Bahut Khoooob Pankaj Ji..

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Aur Anmol jazbaat!!!!

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Ek Sher Jo Dil Ke Kareeb Hai, Yaad Aaya Hai...

"Mujhe Pyaar Hai Apne Haath Ki Sabhi Ungliyon Se!!!
Naa Jaane Kaunsi Ungli Ko Pakad Kar,
Mere Maa-Baap Ne Mujhe Chalna Seekhaya Hoga.....
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«Reply #7 on: March 17, 2012, 03:19:32 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on March 16, 2012, 04:26:32 AM
Very very good

Thanks Saini Sir.
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«Reply #8 on: March 19, 2012, 04:20:59 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on March 16, 2012, 08:28:01 AM

Bahut Bahut Khoooob Pankaj Ji..

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Aur Anmol jazbaat!!!!

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Ek Sher Jo Dil Ke Kareeb Hai, Yaad Aaya Hai...

"Mujhe Pyaar Hai Apne Haath Ki Sabhi Ungliyon Se!!!
Naa Jaane Kaunsi Ungli Ko Pakad Kar,
Mere Maa-Baap Ne Mujhe Chalna Seekhaya Hoga.....
Thanks Khwaish ji
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«Reply #9 on: March 31, 2012, 06:14:21 PM »
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nice poetry sirji
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«Reply #10 on: April 01, 2012, 04:44:47 AM »
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Quote from: anand_w on March 31, 2012, 06:14:21 PM
nice poetry sirji
thanks Anand ji
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