BACHPAN KI YAADEN PYARI.....K@HIN@@R:Shairi - E

Kohinoor

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Bachpan ki yaaden pyari,
Jb khatpat khatpat chalti thi...
Har game me beimani krne wali
Mai pakde jane pe roya krti thi..

Garmi ki kadakti dopehar me
Jb mummy so jaya krti thi...
Wo apne mitti k chulhe par,
Mai khana pkaya krti thi...

Didi se make up krwa kar,
Pariyon jaisi bnti thi...
Apni gudiya ki shadi me mai,
Fir jam kar nacha krti thi...

Daanton se bachne ki khatir,
Papa ki god me ja k chupti thi...
Ab mitha na khane wali mai,
Tb Laddu pe jaan chidakti thi...

Bachpan ki wo yaaden pyari,
Jb khatpat khatpat chalti thi...


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Re: BACHPAN KI YAADEN PYARI.....K@HIN@@R

«Reply #1 on: November 28, 2013, 02:01:45 PM »

bahut sunder


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Re: BACHPAN KI YAADEN PYARI.....K@HIN@@R

«Reply #2 on: November 28, 2013, 02:12:38 PM »

Quote from: Kohinoor on November 28, 2013, 01:58:44 PM

buhat khoob...

Kohinoor jee!
hum ne pehlay bhe parha tha ap ki poems ko.. and ab phir kuch poems say guzar hua hay... buhat achha likh rahi hen aap... ake khaas andaaz ko apnaanay ki koshish kar rahi hen... jo k jadeed shayaron ka mann-pasand hay... aur kisi hadd tak aasaan bhe.... log bhe pasand karnay lagay hen is andaaz ko...

agarche log is baat ka bura manaatay hen.... lekin zehen main aya hay k kuchh mashwara bhe den aap ko..

azaad nazm ko kai jadeed shayar bilkul he taranum, rhythm ya phir beher keh len... say aazaad samajhtay hen.. dar-asal aisa hay nahi... wohi poems in jadeed poets ki pasand ki jaati hen.. jin main kuchh rhythm hota hay... may be hamaari baat kisi kaam aa sakay aap k...

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Re: BACHPAN KI YAADEN PYARI.....K@HIN@@R

«Reply #3 on: November 28, 2013, 02:36:31 PM »

Bahut khoooooooooooooooob...


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Re: BACHPAN KI YAADEN PYARI.....K@HIN@@R

«Reply #4 on: November 28, 2013, 02:46:22 PM »

bohut achhi tarha se bachpan ki yaad dilai hai aapne
achhe alfzon se asaan tareeqe se bachpan bataya hai ,

waah waah waah
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Re: BACHPAN KI YAADEN PYARI.....K@HIN@@R

«Reply #5 on: November 28, 2013, 03:11:00 PM »

bahut bahut khoob.. Clapping Smiley


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Re: BACHPAN KI YAADEN PYARI.....K@HIN@@R

«Reply #6 on: November 28, 2013, 04:19:00 PM »

Quote from: Kohinoor on November 28, 2013, 01:58:44 PM


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Re: BACHPAN KI YAADEN PYARI.....K@HIN@@R

«Reply #7 on: November 28, 2013, 04:27:46 PM »

Quote from: Kohinoor on November 28, 2013, 01:58:44 PM

Bohat Khoob Memorable Lines Hai:-) Aisa Bachpan To Mere Pas Abhi Bhi Hai;-)

ek Ghazal Bhi Yaad Agayi
Bhale Cheen Lo Mujhse Meri Jawani,
Magar Mujhko Louta Do Bachpan Rawani.
Wo Kagaz Ki Kashti Wo Barish Ka Pani.


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Re: BACHPAN KI YAADEN PYARI.....K@HIN@@R

«Reply #8 on: November 28, 2013, 05:52:50 PM »

bahot achey Applause


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Re: BACHPAN KI YAADEN PYARI.....K@HIN@@R

«Reply #9 on: November 28, 2013, 09:18:29 PM »

Awww!!! Beautifullll....

Iz that ur photo.. icon_scratch


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Re: BACHPAN KI YAADEN PYARI.....K@HIN@@R

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Re: BACHPAN KI YAADEN PYARI.....K@HIN@@R

«Reply #11 on: November 28, 2013, 10:54:48 PM »

aap sbka behad shukriya...
Aur haan saman ji ye hmari hi pic hai :D


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Re: BACHPAN KI YAADEN PYARI.....K@HIN@@R

«Reply #12 on: November 28, 2013, 11:29:00 PM »

sabse pehle to aapka swagat hai aapki wapsi behad khubsurat aur umda qalaam se hui....jeewan ke sabse khbusurat hisse ke sath sanjoyga gaya qalaam lajawab raha ...bahut bahut mubarakbaad

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Re: BACHPAN KI YAADEN PYARI.....K@HIN@@R

«Reply #13 on: November 29, 2013, 02:49:51 AM »

shukria saudagar ji


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«Reply #14 on: November 29, 2013, 06:41:53 PM »


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