Bachpan....... ParwaaZ

by ParwaaZ on April 19, 2013, 08:49:01 PM
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Aadaab.!


ChaNd ahsaas jo har zindagi se jude haiN... woH bachpan ke lamhe har kisi ko aziz hote haiN... Usual Smile  


Mumkin hi nahi milna maiN suraj tuu Shamaa
MaiN din ka musafir huN tuu raat ki raani hai

Tab dekh ke chhupte the, ab dekhte haiN chhupke
WoH daur e ladakpan tha yeH daur e jawaani hai... Usual Smile





Unka mera woH humaara bachpan
Saat guzraa woH pyaara bachpan

Bhool jaata huN gile yaad kar usko
Zindagi jeene ka sahaara bachpan

Dekh kar usko dil bahal jaata hai
Sab se khoobsurat nazaara bachpan

Chal jawaani se phir lautkar bachpan
Har gunaaH se raha kuwaara bachpan

Kya sunaa gayaa ParwaaZ is dafa
Yaad aa gaya hume humaara bachpan
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«Reply #1 on: April 19, 2013, 08:57:00 PM »
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Aadaab.!


ChaNd ahsaas jo har zindagi se jude haiN... woH bachpan ke lamhe har kisi ko aziz hote haiN... Usual Smile 





Unka mera woH humaara bachpan
Saat guzraa woH pyaara bachpan

Bhool jaata huN gile yaad kar usko
Zindagi jeene ka sahaara bachpan         Thumbs UP

Dekhkar isko dil bahal jaata hai
Sab se khoobsurat nazaara bachpan

Chal jawaani se phir lautkar bachpan
Har gunaaH se raha kuwaara bachpan       Applause Applause Applause

Kya sunaa gayaa ParwaaZ is dafa
Yaad aa gaya hume humaara bachpan




Wah Parwaaz, bahut pyara kalam likha hai aapne. bahut bahut daad..
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«Reply #2 on: April 19, 2013, 09:01:50 PM »
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Aadaab.!


ChaNd ahsaas jo har zindagi se jude haiN... woH bachpan ke lamhe har kisi ko aziz hote haiN... Usual Smile 





Unka mera woH humaara bachpan
Saat guzraa woH pyaara bachpan

Bhool jaata huN gile yaad kar usko
Zindagi jeene ka sahaara bachpan

Dekhkar isko dil bahal jaata hai
Sab se khoobsurat nazaara bachpan

Chal jawaani se phir lautkar bachpan
Har gunaaH se raha kuwaara bachpan

Kya sunaa gayaa ParwaaZ is dafa
Yaad aa gaya hume humaara bachpan





Humesha Ki Tarah Bahut bahut Khoooob Parwaaz Ji...

Par Aap iss Ghazal mein Aur Bhi Gehre Khayalaat bhar Sakte The...

Bahut Ache. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: April 19, 2013, 09:40:03 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Bahut khoob parwaaz ji. bada pyaara likha hai aapne. but mujhe aapka intro ashaar bahut bahut achche lage. bahut bahut mubarak ho.

Mumkin hi nahi milna maiN suraj tuu Shamaa
MaiN din ka musafir huN tuu raat ki raani hai
 
Tab dekh ke chhupte the, ab dekhte haiN chhupke
WoH daur e ladakpan tha yeH daur e jawaani hai.

just awesome..... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: April 19, 2013, 10:03:26 PM »
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Aadaab.!


ChaNd ahsaas jo har zindagi se jude haiN... woH bachpan ke lamhe har kisi ko aziz hote haiN... Usual Smile 


Mumkin hi nahi milna maiN suraj tuu Shamaa
MaiN din ka musafir huN tuu raat ki raani hai

Tab dekh ke chhupte the, ab dekhte haiN chhupke
WoH daur e ladakpan tha yeH daur e jawaani hai... Usual Smile





Unka mera woH humaara bachpan
Saat guzraa woH pyaara bachpan

Bhool jaata huN gile yaad kar usko
Zindagi jeene ka sahaara bachpan

Dekh kar usko dil bahal jaata hai
Sab se khoobsurat nazaara bachpan

Chal jawaani se phir lautkar bachpan
Har gunaaH se raha kuwaara bachpan

Kya sunaa gayaa ParwaaZ is dafa
Yaad aa gaya hume humaara bachpan




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«Reply #5 on: April 19, 2013, 10:08:42 PM »
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bahut khoob parwaaz bhaai
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«Reply #6 on: April 19, 2013, 11:19:03 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on April 19, 2013, 08:49:01 PM
Aadaab.!


ChaNd ahsaas jo har zindagi se jude haiN... woH bachpan ke lamhe har kisi ko aziz hote haiN... Usual Smile 


Mumkin hi nahi milna maiN suraj tuu Shamaa
MaiN din ka musafir huN tuu raat ki raani hai

Tab dekh ke chhupte the, ab dekhte haiN chhupke
WoH daur e ladakpan tha yeH daur e jawaani hai... Usual Smile





Unka mera woH humaara bachpan
Saat guzraa woH pyaara bachpan

Bhool jaata huN gile yaad kar usko
Zindagi jeene ka sahaara bachpan

Dekh kar usko dil bahal jaata hai
Sab se khoobsurat nazaara bachpan

Chal jawaani se phir lautkar bachpan
Har gunaaH se raha kuwaara bachpan

Kya sunaa gayaa ParwaaZ is dafa
Yaad aa gaya hume humaara bachpan



waah waah parwaz ji bohat khubsurat kalaam ,....bohat bohat c daad,.......
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«Reply #7 on: April 20, 2013, 12:39:56 AM »
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Bhool jaata huN gile yaad kar usko
Zindagi jeene ka sahaara bachpan

Bahut khoob likha hai aapne Parwaaz bhai
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«Reply #8 on: April 20, 2013, 01:06:23 AM »
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waah bro
ye kya suna dia Bro aaj aapne
yaad aa gya humko humaraa bachpan
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but pyari aur yaadon bhri ghazal bro
khus rhie
likhte rhie
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«Reply #9 on: April 20, 2013, 01:10:34 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on April 19, 2013, 08:49:01 PM
Aadaab.!


Bhool jaata huN gile yaad kar usko
Zindagi jeene ka sahaara bachpan



Idhar kaafi dino baad man kiya online hone ka, Halaat hi kuchh aise rahe bhai parwaaz ji.
  
Bahut Achhaa aur sahi likha hai aapne. Padh kar kuchh der ke liye  bachpan yaad aagaya.

Ek baar meine likha thaa...

Mera bachpan gaya thaa khel te hans te zawanii se,
Mujhe shak hai ki chup ke se zawani jane lagi hai.

Dili Daad Qabool Kariye.
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«Reply #10 on: April 20, 2013, 01:10:42 AM »
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bahut  bahut  khoob  parvaaz  jee  ,  bachpan  sach  me  bada  hi  pyara  hota  hai .........   I   STARTED   MISSING  MY   CHILDHOOD  , AFTER  READING  YOUR  POEM  ............
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bahut  bahut  khoob  parvaaz  jee  ,  bachpan  sach  me  bada  hi  pyara  hota  hai .........   I   STARTED   MISSING  MY   CHILDHOOD  , AFTER  READING  YOUR  POEM  ............
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«Reply #12 on: April 20, 2013, 01:55:46 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on April 19, 2013, 08:49:01 PM
Aadaab.!


ChaNd ahsaas jo har zindagi se jude haiN... woH bachpan ke lamhe har kisi ko aziz hote haiN... Usual Smile 


Mumkin hi nahi milna maiN suraj tuu Shamaa
MaiN din ka musafir huN tuu raat ki raani hai

Tab dekh ke chhupte the, ab dekhte haiN chhupke
WoH daur e ladakpan tha yeH daur e jawaani hai... Usual Smile





Unka mera woH humaara bachpan
Saat guzraa woH pyaara bachpan

Bhool jaata huN gile yaad kar usko
Zindagi jeene ka sahaara bachpan

Dekh kar usko dil bahal jaata hai
Sab se khoobsurat nazaara bachpan

Chal jawaani se phir lautkar bachpan
Har gunaaH se raha kuwaara bachpan

Kya sunaa gayaa ParwaaZ is dafa
Yaad aa gaya hume humaara bachpan





bahot khoob 2nd sher khoob rahaa Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: April 20, 2013, 02:37:19 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Parwaz ji bahut umda aur khoob peshkash rahi...

Mumkin hi nahi milna maiN suraj tuu Shamaa
MaiN din ka musafir huN tuu raat ki raani hai

Tab dekh ke chhupte the, ab dekhte haiN chhupke
WoH daur e ladakpan tha yeH daur e jawaani hai...

khaas kar in do sher par bahut saari mubarakbaad aapko...

Intezar !
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«Reply #14 on: April 20, 2013, 12:10:37 PM »
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bahut khoob , parwaaz sahib.waqai bachpan ki yaadein unmit aur bahut khush-kun hoti hain.thhori der ko ko haal ki uljhanein aur mustaqbil ki fikr se door kar deti hain. Is khubsurat kalaam par bahut mubarakbaad.
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