Bachpan....... ParwaaZ -Panna 2:Shairi - E

ParwaaZ

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«Reply #15 on: April 20, 2013, 03:51:02 PM »

Quote from: suman59 on April 19, 2013, 08:57:00 PM

Wah Parwaaz, bahut pyara kalam likha hai aapne. bahut bahut daad..

Suman Jee Aadaab..!

Bahut bahut shukriyaa Aunty jee.. badi khushi huyi aapki tareef o houNsa afzaai paa kar..

Aage bhi apna aashirwaad banaye rakhiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez..


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Shireen Hakani

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Re: Bachpan....... ParwaaZ

«Reply #16 on: April 20, 2013, 06:23:11 PM »

Wah Wah Parwaaz Jee!!! Bachpan ki yaadeiN taaza ho gayi. Bohat hi pyaari ghazal kahi hai aap ne!

Dekh kar usko dil bahal jaata hai
Sab se khoobsurat nazaara bachpan

Chal jawaani se phir lautkar bachpan
Har gunaaH se raha kuwaara bachpan

Bohati Hi Khub!!!

Clapping Smiley


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sbechain

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Re: Bachpan....... ParwaaZ

«Reply #17 on: April 23, 2013, 03:59:27 AM »

Quote from: ParwaaZ on April 19, 2013, 08:49:01 PM

Aadaab.!

ChaNd ahsaas jo har zindagi se jude haiN... woH bachpan ke lamhe har kisi ko aziz hote haiN... Usual Smile

Mumkin hi nahi milna maiN suraj tuu Shamaa
MaiN din ka musafir huN tuu raat ki raani hai

Tab dekh ke chhupte the, ab dekhte haiN chhupke
WoH daur e ladakpan tha yeH daur e jawaani hai... Usual Smile

Unka mera woH humaara bachpan
Saat guzraa woH pyaara bachpan
haan bachpan pyaara to tha per saath nahin guzra jaane tum kahaan ke aur main kahaan ki icon_flower

Bhool jaata huN gile yaad kar usko
Zindagi jeene ka sahaara bachpan
bachpan bhool gai per gile abhi tak yaad hain kya karoo.n main aisi hi hoon icon_flower

Dekh kar usko dil bahal jaata hai
Sab se khoobsurat nazaara bachpan
aur main Laughing hard

Chal jawaani se phir lautkar bachpan
Har gunaaH se raha kuwaara bachpan
wah wah bahut pate ki baat kah di. mashaallah achi salaahiya di hai allah ne bachpan ko parakhne ki icon_flower

Kya sunaa gayaa ParwaaZ is dafa
Yaad aa gaya hume humaara bachpan

mujhe to abhi tak yaad nahin aayaa. kya karoo.n kund dimaag hoon
icon_flower

bachpan ji bahut khoob likha hai..........!


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ParwaaZ

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Re: Bachpan....... ParwaaZ

«Reply #18 on: April 23, 2013, 04:03:49 AM »

Quote from: khwahish on April 19, 2013, 09:01:50 PM

Humesha Ki Tarah Bahut bahut Khoooob Parwaaz Ji...

Par Aap iss Ghazal mein Aur Bhi Gehre Khayalaat bhar Sakte The...

Bahut Ache.

Khawahish jee Aadaab...!

Aapka bahut bahut shukriyaa janab.... Is tareef O houNsla afzai ke liye.. Usual Smile

Jee janab I agreed with your comment, shayad gehrai se soNchte toH likh bhi lete par kyta kareN aik toH waqt ki kami aur upar se kalam ko zaNg bhi lag gaya hai isliye instantly likhe aur post kar diye.. warna secdo kalaamoN ki tarhaa Yeh bhi padi rahti humare computer meiN... tongue3

Wel Aage bhi apna saath banaye rakhiye.. aate rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile


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ParwaaZ

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Re: Bachpan....... ParwaaZ

«Reply #19 on: April 23, 2013, 05:44:36 PM »

Quote from: aqsh on April 19, 2013, 09:40:03 PM

Bahut khoob parwaaz ji. bada pyaara likha hai aapne. but mujhe aapka intro ashaar bahut bahut achche lage. bahut bahut mubarak ho.

Mumkin hi nahi milna maiN suraj tuu Shamaa
MaiN din ka musafir huN tuu raat ki raani hai

Tab dekh ke chhupte the, ab dekhte haiN chhupke
WoH daur e ladakpan tha yeH daur e jawaani hai.

just awesome..... Clapping Smiley

Aqsh Jee aadaab....!

Bahut bahut shukriyaa jee....
Aap ko pasaNd aaya jaan kar achcha laga .... Tah e dil se shukriyaa aapka..

Aage bhi apna saath banaye rakhiye... Aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...


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