Barf Poem By sunil Gahlot

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Barf..by Sunil Gahlot
kuch jaise jam sa gaya hai bheetar..
na jane ummeden hain ya sapne....!
koi to aag laga do..
ye manzar zara pighla do...!!

kuch khidkiyan hai kahin...
jo khulti hai badi mushkil se...!
shayad inhone sab kuch bohot kareeb se dekha hoga..
koshish karun kholne ki to bohot aawaz karti hai..
shayad kuch dard hota hoga...
aandiyon me apne pankh khatkhati hain..
darti hain in hawaon k shor se...saham sa jati hain..
koi ye kiwad laga do..!
mera sukooon lauta do...!!
koi to aag laga do..
ye manzar zara pighla do...!!

sapne kuch kache pakke se the..
kuch dhundhle dhundhle se...
kuch tere mere the aur kuch mere tere se..
pata nahi kun inka rang badal gaya hai...
kahin inko kuch to ho gaya hai...
ujiyare jaisa gora tan tha..
youvan to jaise charam par tha..
haalat kuch beemar se lagte hain..
koi to ilaz kara do..
koi to ilaz kara do..
koi to aag laga do..
ye manzar zara pighla do...!!

is barf ki barish ne bada nuksaan kia hai mera..
kuch ek barso se jeena dushwar kia hai mera...
ek imarat banani thi mujhe zindgi ki...par ab vahan kaam rooka hua sa hai....!
armano ne bataya k saaman khatam hua sa hai..!!
bola hai k abhi bohot yaden lagengi..Ab mujhse naye yaaden nahin banti...
kuch lamho ka udhar bandobast karwa do...!!
kuch yaden dila do..!!
mera makan bana do..!!
koi to aag laga do..
ye manzar zara pighla do...!!

- A poem by my friend Sunil Gahlot..
Check out the youtube link below to feel Sunil's words in his own voice.
<a href="http://www.youtube.com/v/DHyyjxp85xo&rel=1" target="_blank">http://www.youtube.com/v/DHyyjxp85xo&rel=1</a>
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«Reply #1 on: August 06, 2013, 08:35:27 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: August 06, 2013, 09:42:16 AM »
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bahut hee khubsurat .. is poem ko padhne ka utna maza nahi aaya jitna sunil jii ki aawaz mein sunne kka aaya ek  ajeeb se dard ka ehsas hua...behad umda bhai bahut hee khub... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: August 06, 2013, 12:32:41 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: August 06, 2013, 12:43:06 PM »
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GOOD ONE.......!!
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«Reply #5 on: August 06, 2013, 01:15:26 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Just Awesomeeeeeeeeee....
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«Reply #6 on: August 06, 2013, 04:16:41 PM »
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bahut khoob.. Applause Applause

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«Reply #7 on: August 06, 2013, 04:45:29 PM »
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BOHUT HI SHANDAAR LIKHA HAI APNE ,,ZABARDAST,
BOHUT ACHHI AUR BHAARI AWAAZ HAI APKI ,,LIKHTE RAHIYE PADHTE RAHIYE.

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«Reply #8 on: August 06, 2013, 09:35:24 PM »
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Thank You Doston..i am ready with 7 more videos on same Barf Theme.
Hope you will like them,..Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: August 06, 2013, 11:30:03 PM »
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waah waah
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«Reply #10 on: August 07, 2013, 02:02:28 PM »
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Thank a lot guys for your appreciation.Thanks to nandbahu,prashad,Miraj,aqsh,Waqt Bitaya,Mohammad Touhid,sahal,sksaini4 And soudagar.I just loved they way you guys commented on my little effort.You made my day guys.LOVE you.Usual SmileUsual SmileUsual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: August 07, 2013, 03:25:58 PM »
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Barf..by Sunil Gahlot
kuch jaise jam sa gaya hai bheetar..
na jane ummeden hain ya sapne....!
koi to aag laga do..
ye manzar zara pighla do...!!

kuch khidkiyan hai kahin...
jo khulti hai badi mushkil se...!
shayad inhone sab kuch bohot kareeb se dekha hoga..
koshish karun kholne ki to bohot aawaz karti hai..
shayad kuch dard hota hoga...
aandiyon me apne pankh khatkhati hain..
darti hain in hawaon k shor se...saham sa jati hain..
koi ye kiwad laga do..!
mera sukooon lauta do...!!
koi to aag laga do..
ye manzar zara pighla do...!!

sapne kuch kache pakke se the..
kuch dhundhle dhundhle se...
kuch tere mere the aur kuch mere tere se..
pata nahi kun inka rang badal gaya hai...
kahin inko kuch to ho gaya hai...
ujiyare jaisa gora tan tha..
youvan to jaise charam par tha..
haalat kuch beemar se lagte hain..
koi to ilaz kara do..
koi to ilaz kara do..
koi to aag laga do..
ye manzar zara pighla do...!!

is barf ki barish ne bada nuksaan kia hai mera..
kuch ek barso se jeena dushwar kia hai mera...
ek imarat banani thi mujhe zindgi ki...par ab vahan kaam rooka hua sa hai....!
armano ne bataya k saaman khatam hua sa hai..!!
bola hai k abhi bohot yaden lagengi..Ab mujhse naye yaaden nahin banti...
kuch lamho ka udhar bandobast karwa do...!!
kuch yaden dila do..!!
mera makan bana do..!!
koi to aag laga do..
ye manzar zara pighla do...!!

- A poem by my friend Sunil Gahlot..
Check out the youtube link below to feel Sunil's words in his own voice.
<a href="http://www.youtube.com/v/DHyyjxp85xo&rel=1" target="_blank">http://www.youtube.com/v/DHyyjxp85xo&rel=1</a>


you voice is magnetic, superbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb,sir

what a nazm mindblowing,sir
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«Reply #12 on: August 07, 2013, 03:31:23 PM »
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Thank You Doston..i am ready with 7 more videos on same Barf Theme.
Hope you will like them,..Usual Smile

Thank a lot guys for your appreciation.Thanks to nandbahu,prashad,Miraj,aqsh,Waqt Bitaya,Mohammad Touhid,sahal,sksaini4 And soudagar.I just loved they way you guys commented on my little effort.You made my day guys.LOVE you.Usual SmileUsual SmileUsual Smile

waiting to hear from you..keep it up.

yes u r welcome and u really deserve it.
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«Reply #13 on: August 08, 2013, 01:25:21 AM »
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Barf..by Sunil Gahlot
kuch jaise jam sa gaya hai bheetar..
na jane ummeden hain ya sapne....!
koi to aag laga do..
ye manzar zara pighla do...!!

kuch khidkiyan hai kahin...
jo khulti hai badi mushkil se...!
shayad inhone sab kuch bohot kareeb se dekha hoga..
koshish karun kholne ki to bohot aawaz karti hai..
shayad kuch dard hota hoga...
aandiyon me apne pankh khatkhati hain..
darti hain in hawaon k shor se...saham sa jati hain..
koi ye kiwad laga do..!
mera sukooon lauta do...!!
koi to aag laga do..
ye manzar zara pighla do...!!

sapne kuch kache pakke se the..
kuch dhundhle dhundhle se...
kuch tere mere the aur kuch mere tere se..
pata nahi kun inka rang badal gaya hai...
kahin inko kuch to ho gaya hai...
ujiyare jaisa gora tan tha..
youvan to jaise charam par tha..
haalat kuch beemar se lagte hain..
koi to ilaz kara do..
koi to ilaz kara do..
koi to aag laga do..
ye manzar zara pighla do...!!

is barf ki barish ne bada nuksaan kia hai mera..
kuch ek barso se jeena dushwar kia hai mera...
ek imarat banani thi mujhe zindgi ki...par ab vahan kaam rooka hua sa hai....!
armano ne bataya k saaman khatam hua sa hai..!!
bola hai k abhi bohot yaden lagengi..Ab mujhse naye yaaden nahin banti...
kuch lamho ka udhar bandobast karwa do...!!
kuch yaden dila do..!!
mera makan bana do..!!
koi to aag laga do..
ye manzar zara pighla do...!!

- A poem by my friend Sunil Gahlot..
Check out the youtube link below to feel Sunil's words in his own voice.
<a href="http://www.youtube.com/v/DHyyjxp85xo&rel=1" target="_blank">http://www.youtube.com/v/DHyyjxp85xo&rel=1</a>
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«Reply #14 on: August 08, 2013, 07:18:37 PM »
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bahot hi sunder....shabdon ka chayan , bhaavon ka varnan...  a total pakage...of emotions........n felings...   all these things combined to make a best poetry... and a poet whose poetry is the best ..prooves the best poet........
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