BARH CHALE KADAM FIR USI ORE.......

by Tuhina on May 26, 2013, 11:45:52 PM
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Surya   ki   sunehri   dhoop   ho , jahan   jharno   ki   nirmal   vani   ho........            Jahan   badalon   ki garaj - baras    ki   ghatati    roz   kahani   ho.......                                                                                            Jahan   nadiyon   ki   athkheli   ho , jahan   roj   saj- sanvar   pi   se milane   ati    bhor    naveli   ho,                                                               Jahan   pakshiyon   ki   kalrav   ho ,  koyal   ki   mithi    taan   ho,  jahan   pedon    se   pak   kar    girate    peele   meethe   aam   ho                                                           Jahan    pagdandiyon    ka balkhana   ho   aur   kheton   ka lahlahana,                                                                                                   Jahan   roz   ek   ho   magar   alag sa   lage   surya   ka    ana   jana ..... Yeh    devbhoomi   ho   kisi   thaur  badh   chalen    kadam   fir   usi   ore........
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«Reply #1 on: May 27, 2013, 02:21:35 AM »
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bahut khoob tuhina ji...
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Saavan
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«Reply #2 on: May 27, 2013, 08:48:28 AM »
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Mil jaye ger aisi jaga to hume bhi batana
Hum bhi bana lenge ik khubsurat ashiyana
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«Reply #3 on: May 27, 2013, 12:56:03 PM »
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Bahut khoob tuhina jee..happy9
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«Reply #4 on: May 27, 2013, 01:32:45 PM »
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good
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Tuhina
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«Reply #5 on: May 27, 2013, 02:53:44 PM »
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thanks  everyone.......
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«Reply #6 on: May 27, 2013, 03:13:08 PM »
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hmm nature admirer, beautiful writeup..............
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RAJAN KONDAL
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«Reply #7 on: May 27, 2013, 03:25:17 PM »
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bhut khub....
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«Reply #8 on: May 27, 2013, 07:51:46 PM »
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«Reply #9 on: May 27, 2013, 08:09:41 PM »
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Bahut sundar Tuhina ji .... Lekin kavita ki  panktiyaan
gadya ki tarah continuation mein na likh kar  kavita ki
bhaanti ooper neeche dein to kavita  parhne  mein adhik
anand aayega aur ye adhik pasand ki jaayegi.
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«Reply #10 on: May 28, 2013, 06:48:02 PM »
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waah waah
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