"barson ye jindagi"

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sehra me badalti rahi barson ye jindagi,
lamhon me hi kat-ti rahi barson ye jindagi,

rahoo me bhat-kata raha, manjil na pa saka,
har raah pe thith-kati rahi barson ye jindagi,

marta raha har din mai jeene ki aas me,
haathon se fislati rahi, barson ye jindagi,

khushiyo ko dhundh-dhundh ke hansta raha hun mai
har dhun pe thirakti rahi,barson ye jindagi,

Thapedon se jidagi ke kinaare pe aa gai,
machli si tadapti rahi, barson ye jindagi,

rishton ko seenchta raha ta-umra BEKARAR,
aur sholon si dhadhak-ti rahi barason ye jindagi

सेहरा मे बदलती रही बरसों ये जिंदगी,
लम्हों मे ही कटती रही बरसों ये जिंदगी,

राहों मे भटकता रहा, मंज़िल ना पा सका,
हर राह पे ठिठकती रही बरसों ये जिंदगी,

मरता रहा हर दिन मे जीने की आस मे,
हाथों से फिसलती रही, बरसों ये जिंदगी,

खुशियो को ढूँढ-ढूँढ के हंसता रहा हूँ मे
हर धुन पे थिरकती रही,बरसों ये जिंदगी,

थपेड़ों से ज़िदगी के किनारे पे आ गई,
मछली सी तड़पती रही, बरसों ये जिंदगी,

रिश्तों को सींचता रहा ता-उम्र बेकरार,
और शोलों सी धधक-ती रही बरसों ये जिंदगी
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«Reply #1 on: November 16, 2010, 10:51:55 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on November 16, 2010, 10:39:33 AM
sehra me badalti rahi barson ye jindagi,
lamhon me hi kat-ti rahi barson ye jindagi,

rahoo me bhat-kata raha, manjil na pa saka,
har raah pe thith-kati rahi barson ye jindagi,

marta raha har din mai jeene ki aas me,
haathon se fislati rahi, barson ye jindagi,

khushiyo ko dhundh-dhundh ke hansta raha hun mai
har dhun pe thirakti rahi,barson ye jindagi,

Thapedon se jidagi ke kinaare pe aa gai,
machli si tadapti rahi, barson ye jindagi,

rishton ko seenchta raha ta-umra BEKARAR,
aur sholon si dhadhak-ti rahi barason ye jindagi

सेहरा मे बदलती रही बरसों ये जिंदगी,
लम्हों मे ही कटती रही बरसों ये जिंदगी,

राहों मे भटकता रहा, मंज़िल ना पा सका,
हर राह पे ठिठकती रही बरसों ये जिंदगी,

मरता रहा हर दिन मे जीने की आस मे,
हाथों से फिसलती रही, बरसों ये जिंदगी,

खुशियो को ढूँढ-ढूँढ के हंसता रहा हूँ मे
हर धुन पे थिरकती रही,बरसों ये जिंदगी,

थपेड़ों से ज़िदगी के किनारे पे आ गई,
मछली सी तड़पती रही, बरसों ये जिंदगी,

रिश्तों को सींचता रहा ता-उम्र बेकरार,
और शोलों सी धधक-ती रही बरसों ये जिंदगी




Bahut bahut Aur bahut Khoob Sanjeev Bro..

Kuch kavitayen Sirf Padhi nahi jaati Mehsoos Ki Jaati hai, Iska Har Lafz Mehsoos Kiya Hai,naa Jaane Kitne Baar Yeh Kalaam Padh gaya..Bahut Hi Gehre Aur Anmol Jazbaat..Bahut Hi Suljhi Hui peshkash!!!!!Lafz Nahi Jo tareef kar sake..

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«Reply #2 on: November 16, 2010, 11:00:14 AM »
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jajbaat thik usi tarah aapke paas panhooche jaise likhe gaye the...kavita ka janm sarthak hua...shukriya bhai housala-afjai ka..
kamal ka sher hai bro.. Thumbs UP
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«Reply #3 on: November 16, 2010, 11:15:36 AM »
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  Bahut achha likha hai aapne bekarar ji, very nice. icon_thumleft
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«Reply #4 on: November 16, 2010, 11:46:02 AM »
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bahut khoob bekrar ji.....
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«Reply #5 on: November 16, 2010, 01:37:07 PM »
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Mast lika hai Bekarar ji... Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley

Koshishein laakh karti rahi sawaarne ko zindagi
Ban-ban kay beegaddti he rahi barson ye zindagi





Quote from: bekarar on November 16, 2010, 10:39:33 AM
sehra me badalti rahi barson ye jindagi,
lamhon me hi kat-ti rahi barson ye jindagi,

rahoo me bhat-kata raha, manjil na pa saka,
har raah pe thith-kati rahi barson ye jindagi,

marta raha har din mai jeene ki aas me,
haathon se fislati rahi, barson ye jindagi,

khushiyo ko dhundh-dhundh ke hansta raha hun mai
har dhun pe thirakti rahi,barson ye jindagi,

Thapedon se jidagi ke kinaare pe aa gai,
machli si tadapti rahi, barson ye jindagi,

rishton ko seenchta raha ta-umra BEKARAR,
aur sholon si dhadhak-ti rahi barason ye jindagi

सेहरा मे बदलती रही बरसों ये जिंदगी,
लम्हों मे ही कटती रही बरसों ये जिंदगी,

राहों मे भटकता रहा, मंज़िल ना पा सका,
हर राह पे ठिठकती रही बरसों ये जिंदगी,

मरता रहा हर दिन मे जीने की आस मे,
हाथों से फिसलती रही, बरसों ये जिंदगी,

खुशियो को ढूँढ-ढूँढ के हंसता रहा हूँ मे
हर धुन पे थिरकती रही,बरसों ये जिंदगी,

थपेड़ों से ज़िदगी के किनारे पे आ गई,
मछली सी तड़पती रही, बरसों ये जिंदगी,

रिश्तों को सींचता रहा ता-उम्र बेकरार,
और शोलों सी धधक-ती रही बरसों ये जिंदगी
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Quote from: tamanna.pt on November 16, 2010, 11:15:36 AM
  Bahut achha likha hai aapne bekarar ji, very nice. icon_thumleft

bahoot shukriya tamnna ji
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Quote from: manzil-e-ishq on November 16, 2010, 11:46:02 AM
bahut khoob bekrar ji.....

bahoot shukriya manjil ji
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Mast lika hai Bekarar ji... Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley

Koshishein laakh karti rahi sawaarne ko zindagi
Ban-ban kay beegaddti he rahi barson ye zindagi





bahoot shukriya koyal ji
do line aapki bhi bahoot achchi lagi
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«Reply #9 on: November 16, 2010, 04:47:08 PM »
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bahut khoob Sanjeev ji....padh kar laga jaise zindagi ki haqeeqat ko aaina dikha diya gaya ho.....
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«Reply #11 on: November 17, 2010, 05:26:06 AM »
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bahut khoob Sanjeev ji....padh kar laga jaise zindagi ki haqeeqat ko aaina dikha diya gaya ho.....
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shukriya anaam ji aapki taliyon ka lekin aakhir me ye chaar smily mujhe samajh nahi aaye?
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Sanjeev jee bahaut bahaut khoob..
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«Reply #14 on: November 18, 2010, 05:28:24 AM »
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Quote from: Shihab on November 17, 2010, 01:11:44 PM
Bahut Khub Sanjeev Bhai...


Khush Rahiye...


~Shihab~


bahoot bahho shukriya bhai aapko pasand aaya
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