"barson ye jindagi"

by bekarar on November 16, 2010, 10:39:33 AM
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«Reply #15 on: November 18, 2010, 05:31:48 AM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on November 17, 2010, 01:47:11 PM
Sanjeev jee bahaut bahaut khoob..
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bahoot shukriya Bhai rahim aapne padha aur housala badhaya
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«Reply #16 on: November 18, 2010, 06:33:27 AM »
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bahut khoob jajbat ....jindagi ke kai rang...

dher ssaari daad~
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«Reply #17 on: November 18, 2010, 08:57:50 AM »
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bahoot shukriya abhi ji  Usual Smile
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«Reply #18 on: November 18, 2010, 10:41:48 AM »
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Barson se ye zindagi kisi ka kar rahi hai intezaar
Na jaane kab aayega wo jo karega Dil ko Gule-gulzaar
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«Reply #19 on: November 18, 2010, 04:27:49 PM »
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ye smily chhuppy ki dhyotak hain... icon_silent...silent icon hain.....maun reh kar taarifff.....


Quote from: bekarar on November 17, 2010, 05:27:17 AM
shukriya anaam ji aapki taliyon ka lekin aakhir me ye chaar smily mujhe samajh nahi aaye?
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«Reply #20 on: November 19, 2010, 07:54:35 AM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on November 18, 2010, 10:41:48 AM
Barson se ye zindagi kisi ka kar rahi hai intezaar
Na jaane kab aayega wo jo karega Dil ko Gule-gulzaar


umra baaqi hai bahoot tassalli se intzaar karo,
karke tanhaaiyon charcha, na auron ko bekarar karo
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«Reply #21 on: November 19, 2010, 07:55:03 AM »
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Quote from: ANAAM on November 18, 2010, 04:27:49 PM
ye smily chhuppy ki dhyotak hain... icon_silent...silent icon hain.....maun reh kar taarifff.....


ok I got it thanks for it again  Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #22 on: November 19, 2010, 08:01:32 AM »
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Wah wah hamesha ki tarah bahut khoob Bekarar ji,great lines by Khwaish ji n Koyal sis.excellent,hats off icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #23 on: November 19, 2010, 09:53:25 AM »
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Ye jaante hain hum....abhi "barson hai ye jindagi"...

Mansoobon mai doobe rehte hain hum
Na jaane kab aayega wo mera humdum

Umra beet rahi karte huye intezaar
Hamaari tanhaiyon se na ho bekarar

Humein bhee ho jaayega kisi se pyaar
Fikra nahi humein ess-ki jara bhi yaar


Quote from: bekarar on November 19, 2010, 07:54:35 AM
umra baaqi hai bahoot tassalli se karo intzaar ,
karke tanhaaiyon ka charcha,na auron ko karo bekarar
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«Reply #24 on: November 19, 2010, 09:59:03 AM »
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Thanks a lot Madhu-di....you always encourage me..... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Aapka ye Real Avtaar Tou mujhe bahut he jayaada pasand aaya.... love9 love4 love7
Labon pe tere ye katilaana muskaan
Haathon mai liye ho nashey ka jaam

Pad jaayegi jis par bhi teri yeh nazar
Allhha jaane kya hoga usska anjaam


Quote from: madhuwesh on November 19, 2010, 08:01:32 AM
Wah wah hamesha ki tarah bahut khoob Bekarar ji,great lines by Khwaish ji n Koyal sis.excellent,hats off icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #25 on: November 19, 2010, 10:12:23 AM »
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Wow bahut khoob Koyal sis,great lines,tareef ke liye shukriya.love you too,hats off icon_salut icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #26 on: November 20, 2010, 04:26:50 AM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on November 19, 2010, 09:53:25 AM
Ye jaante hain hum....abhi "barson hai ye jindagi"...

Mansoobon mai doobe rehte hain hum
Na jaane kab aayega wo mera humdum

Umra beet rahi karte huye intezaar
Hamaari tanhaiyon se na ho bekarar

Humein bhee ho jaayega kisi se pyaar
Fikra nahi humein ess-ki jara bhi yaar



gar mila bhi wo to kya pah-chaan loge,
ya ki jo bhi thopa gaya tum pe use maan loge?
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«Reply #27 on: November 20, 2010, 04:28:13 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on November 19, 2010, 08:01:32 AM
Wah wah hamesha ki tarah bahut khoob Bekarar ji,great lines by Khwaish ji n Koyal sis.excellent,hats off icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause

bahoot shukriya madhu ji........bahoot dino baad aapke deedaar hue comment ke saath..aate rahen
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«Reply #28 on: November 21, 2010, 07:29:45 AM »
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wah bekaraar ji. bahaut umda. dard o ruswaaee ko kis rang o shauq se pesh kiya hai. wah wah !
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«Reply #29 on: November 22, 2010, 05:22:02 PM »
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Quote from: zarra on November 21, 2010, 07:29:45 AM
wah bekaraar ji. bahaut umda. dard o ruswaaee ko kis rang o shauq se pesh kiya hai. wah wah !

bahoot shujriya zarra ji aapne is rachna ko pasand kiya....
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