bas ab aur ni:Shairi - E

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..Its a poem with a request to stand against domestic violence. MAI KITANI KHUSH THI US DIN JAB TUM MUJHKO VAR KE LAYE THE , EK PYARI SI DUNIYA HOGI APNI AISE SAPNE MUJHE DIKHAYE THE ............ AUR MAI ABODH AGYANI THI , BAS PYAR , RISHTE AUR IZZAT ME LIPATI MERI NADAN KAHANI THI. YAD HAI KUCH DIN BAAD PRIYE , MAINE SHAYAD GALTI SE KUCH GALTI KAR DI , ISSE PEHLE KUCH KEH PATI , TUMHARE THAPPAD KI GOONJ NE MUJHE SHANT KAR DIYA ....... YE KAR KE TUMNE KYA SIDH KIA MAI SAMAJH NI PAYI THI , YA YE KI MAI KUCH BHI NI , YA FIR MUJHE TAKLEEF DE KOI SHANTI TUMNE PAI THI ,..... HAAN MUJHE DHAKKA LAGA PAR MAI CHUP... Plz see the remaining part too...


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Re: bas ab aur ni

«Reply #1 on: January 31, 2013, 09:04:57 AM »


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Re: bas ab aur ni

«Reply #2 on: January 31, 2013, 09:37:42 AM »

The remaining part... Tumne ek din kaat diye mere lambe baal, meri siskiyon ka sada karte rahe parihas , gin bhi ni paoge tumne kitane mujhpe vaar kiye , meri kaya par har din kitane naye ghav kiye .... BAS AB AUR NI , mai aj tumhe sada ke liye chor kar jaati hun , par yad rahe , ik din tum akele ho , sahare ke liye tadapoge .us din mere balon ke tukade tumhe dikhayi denge, meri siskiyon ke svar us din tumhe sunai denge...


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Re: bas ab aur ni

«Reply #3 on: January 31, 2013, 09:42:26 AM »

dard dard dard :(bahut achachaha likha hai Applause


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Re: bas ab aur ni

«Reply #4 on: January 31, 2013, 10:01:45 AM »

shukriya adil ji ......


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Re: bas ab aur ni

«Reply #5 on: January 31, 2013, 11:34:15 AM »

Tuhina jee itne dard bhare ehsaas the. good one


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Re: bas ab aur ni

«Reply #6 on: January 31, 2013, 12:04:05 PM »

nice and emotional


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Re: bas ab aur ni

«Reply #7 on: January 31, 2013, 12:08:13 PM »

Quote from: Tuhina on January 31, 2013, 08:50:51 AM

very nice ... i am touched...and also read and comment the remaining part too...


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Re: bas ab aur ni

«Reply #8 on: January 31, 2013, 12:09:31 PM »

Quote from: Tuhina on January 31, 2013, 09:37:42 AM

excellant work dear. dard bara hai ...


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Re: bas ab aur ni

«Reply #9 on: January 31, 2013, 01:15:51 PM »

very heart touching.... wonderful.....
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Tuhina

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Re: bas ab aur ni

«Reply #10 on: January 31, 2013, 02:56:12 PM »

bahut bahut dhanyavaad .... Sabhi ko


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Re: bas ab aur ni

«Reply #11 on: January 31, 2013, 04:04:48 PM »

Shayad kabhee aisa hua bhi ho kisi ke saath..
it's painful..nicely written
but still many questions..in my mind..want to ask..par in sawaalo ka javaab mil bhi gaya to..i'm not sure...............


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