Batao na vo rishta pyara kahan hai.. Ghazal

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आदाब
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हमेशा...  तुम्हारा !  हमारा .कहाँ  है ?
बताओ  न  रिश्ता वो  प्यारा कहाँ है

है आंसू  ही  आंसू  मुहब्बत में  यारो
मगर इस के बिन भी गुज़ारा कहाँ है

चले  आते चौखट पे तेरी  सितमगर
मगर  दिल  से तुमने पुकारा कहाँ है

ज़माने की हर शय को देखा है हमने
तेरे  हुस्न  सा  पर  नज़ारा  कहाँ  है

हकीकत  में  मझधार  ही ज़िंदगी  है
सफ़ीने को मिलता  किनारा  कहाँ है

जो  माझी  डुबोने  लगे  नाव  को तो
बता   डूबते   को   सहारा  कहाँ   है

लगाते  हैं  जो  दिल यहाँ  तीरगी  से
उसे   रौशनी   का   इशारा  कहाँ   है

मैं  हूँ  आरज़ू अब ज़माने की खातिर
वो  नादान  अर्जुन  तुम्हारा  कहाँ  है

आरज़ू -ए-अर्जुन
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«Reply #1 on: January 17, 2017, 09:04:05 PM »
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aadaab o tasleemat bil jawab arjun bhai

Ghazal pasand aaee khoob pasand aaee ...khuch sher to kisi sansanate teer ki maneend dhadle se dil me paiwast ho gaye ...is achi aur pyaari ghazal per bahut saari daad aadhi raat gaaye maazi ke jungle me bhatakte bhatakte yahan aa gaya aapki ghazal saamne nazar aaee bahut khoob saahib ....han eak baat doost samajh kar kah raha hun ...

asal zindagi to hai majdhar hi bus
Safeene ko milta kanara kahan hai..

Darj e baala sher ka misra e oola behr se khaarij hai ...chunke saheeh lafz asl bar wazn FEL yaani 21 hai 12 nahi ...misra yun kar ke dekhiye ...

HAQEEQAT ME MAJDHAAR HI ZINDAGI HAI
SAHEENE KO MILTA KANARA KAHAN HAI ..

baaqi aap bahtar jaante hain meri koi baat garan guzre to darguzar kaa muamila karen ...

Aapka doost
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«Reply #2 on: January 17, 2017, 09:47:31 PM »
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bahut khoobsurat peshkash hai arjun jee dheron daad.
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«Reply #3 on: January 18, 2017, 11:37:06 AM »
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क़दीर जुनैद साहब

मैं बेहद मशकूर हूँ आपकी इनायत का..  आप ने दिल से मेरे लफ्जों को पढ़ के उन्हें इज़्ज़त दी..
और मुझे आपका ख्याल भी बहुत पसंद आया..  मैने उस मिसरे को भी बदल दिया है..

Thank you very much...
Keep loving me.. 
Coz i am just a good student..

Shad o abaad rahein..
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«Reply #4 on: January 18, 2017, 11:37:51 AM »
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Bahut Shukriya surinder sir..  Aapki Muhabbat k liye..
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«Reply #5 on: January 18, 2017, 02:48:27 PM »
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हमेशा...  तुम्हारा !  हमारा .कहाँ  है ?
बताओ  न  रिश्ता वो  प्यारा कहाँ है

है आंसू  ही  आंसू  मुहब्बत में  यारो
मगर इस के बिन भी गुज़ारा कहाँ है

चले  आते चौखट पे तेरी  सितमगर
मगर  दिल  से तुमने पुकारा कहाँ है

ज़माने की हर शय को देखा है हमने
तेरे  हुस्न  सा  पर  नज़ारा  कहाँ  है

हकीकत  में  मझधार  ही ज़िंदगी  है
सफ़ीने को मिलता  किनारा  कहाँ है

जो  माझी  डुबोने  लगे  नाव  को तो
बता   डूबते   को   सहारा  कहाँ   है

लगाते  हैं  जो  दिल यहाँ  तीरगी  से
उसे   रौशनी   का   इशारा  कहाँ   है

मैं  हूँ  आरज़ू अब ज़माने की खातिर
वो  नादान  अर्जुन  तुम्हारा  कहाँ  है

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«Reply #6 on: January 18, 2017, 05:42:03 PM »
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बहुत शुक्रिया राजन जी
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«Reply #7 on: January 19, 2017, 08:30:02 AM »
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laajawaab ek rau ke saath dilidaad
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«Reply #8 on: January 19, 2017, 03:15:04 PM »
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Wah Kya Kehne Chha Gaye Aapto
Bahut Bahut Khub Arjun Sahab ...
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Shad o Aabaad Rahiye

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«Reply #9 on: January 19, 2017, 05:00:53 PM »
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Bahut Shukriya saini sahib..  Aapke is pyaar k liye...
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«Reply #10 on: January 19, 2017, 05:02:36 PM »
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Shihab ji bahut Shukriya bahut dino baad aap mere alfazon ke baam pe aaye hai...  Khushaamdeed..
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