Battaun Anu-di kaisi lagti hai:Shairi - E

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Bataaun mujhe kaisi lagti hai......

Mujhe tou patton pe thehri shabnam lagti hai
Usha ki lalima si roshan chirag lagti hai...

Sab k chehre pe muskaan bikherti
Mamta ki wo anokhi muurat lagti hai...

Bachcho key saath bachchi lagti hai
Ye saawli-saloni surat sachi lagti hai

Prem sudha ke ras ki ye samunder lagti hai
Har mausam mai pyaar barsaati Yo ki jaan lagti hai

Bhaav aur shabdo ki ye tou khaan lagti hai
Yo kay ess manch ki mujhe shaan lagti hai

Kasak ban k dil ki kitne dewaano ki jaan lagti hai
Annu-Anaamikaa tu kavita kee pehchaan lagti hai

- KOYAL


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Re: Battaun Anu-di kaisi lagti hai

«Reply #1 on: September 01, 2010, 05:02:38 PM »

Koyal ji...

bahut masoom sa ...
bahut pyaara sa ...
bahut khoobsurat sa ...
bahut apna sa....
likha hai aapne....

sach ab tak jitne logon ne aapki Di ke baare me likha hai... mujhe sabse pyaari aapki kavita lagi.. aur ye baat main strainght from the heart keh raha hoon... bahut bahut bahut bahut bahut bahut....(infinity times)... pyaari moorat banayi hai aapne apne di ki aur ek dum jaisi hai wo bilkul waisi banayi hai.... i have no words to appreciate this poem... i am speechless....

to you...!!!

and for such a nice poem... thanks a lot....!!!

Quote from: KOYAL46 on September 01, 2010, 05:00:42 PM

Bataaun mujhe kaise lagti hai......

Mujhe tou patton pe thehri shabnam lagti hai
Usha ki lalima si roshan chirag lagti hai...

Sab k chehre pe muskaan bikherti
Mamta ki wo anokhi muurat lagti hai...

Bachcho key saath bachchi lagti hai
Ye saawli-saloni surat sachi lagti hai

Prem sudha ke ras ki ye samunder lagti hai
Har mausam mai pyaar barsaati Yo ki jaan lagti hai

Bhaav aur shabdo ki ye tou khaan lagti hai
Yo kay ess manch ki mujhe shaan lagti hai

Kasak ban k dil ki kitne dewaano ki jaan lagti hai
Annu-Anaamikaa tu kavita kee pehchaan lagti hai

- KOYAL


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Re: Battaun Anu-di kaisi lagti hai

«Reply #2 on: September 01, 2010, 05:05:13 PM »

Koyal Ji.....

Bahut Hi pyaariiiii Dedication,Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Ehsaas Se Bharpoor Yeh kavita Mann Ko Lubha Gayi..Kya Kehne Aapke Aur Aapke Didi Ke..

Bahut bahut Khoob


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Re: Battaun Anu-di kaisi lagti hai

«Reply #3 on: September 01, 2010, 05:17:24 PM »

AAP DONO MILKE MUJHE KAUNSE PED PE CHADHA RAHE HO BATAO ZARA.....

LEKIN SACH KAHA HAI AAPNE...KOYAL NE YE POEM BHT DIL SE LIKHI HAI..AND AAPNE BHI BHT DIL SE HI REPLY KIYA HAI..THNX KAPIL..FOR EVRYTHING.....

MUJHE NAHIN PATA MAINE AISA KYA KIYA HAI JO SAB ISS TARAH KEH RAHE HAIN...LEKIN AAP SAB KA SATH ACHCHA LAGTA HAI...ISLY MASTI CHALTI REHTI HAI...KYA SPL HUA HAI MUJHSE JO ITNA PYAAR MIL RAHA HAI NAHIN JANTI...

BUT I LOVE YOINDIA ...DIL SE.....AUR YAHAN K HAR MEMBER SE MUJHE PYAR HAI...AND THNXXXX K AAP SABNE BHI MUJHE YAHAN KA MEMBER AUR ISS PARIWAR KA HISSA BANAYA HAI...ISKE LIYE MAIN HAMESHA THNKFUL RAHUNGI....


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Re: Battaun Anu-di kaisi lagti hai

«Reply #4 on: September 01, 2010, 05:33:44 PM »

Mat daro majboot ped hai.....chane ka jhaad nahi hai.....nahi girogi Anu-di....... wave

waise hum khade hain neeche.....catch karne ko.....par kudna nahi...net kamjoor hai ji........ Winking

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on September 01, 2010, 05:17:24 PM


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Re: Battaun Anu-di kaisi lagti hai

«Reply #5 on: September 01, 2010, 06:12:00 PM »

Quote from: KOYAL46 on September 01, 2010, 05:00:42 PM

Bilkul theek kaha hai aap ne apne di ke liye Koyal Ji


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Re: Battaun Anu-di kaisi lagti hai

«Reply #6 on: September 01, 2010, 08:29:11 PM »

"pyaar kiya nahi jaata,
pyaar ho jaata hai..."

aur yahi hua hai hum sabko aapse.... pyaar....ye alag alag insaan ko alag alag roop me hua hai apse... kuch to khaas hoga aapme ki hr koi fida hai... kar koi aapko pasand karta hai... kuch log aapke lekhni ke deewaane hain , kuch aapki baaton ke aur kuch sirf aapke... kuch log ye soch ke compliment karte hain ki ladki hai thoda impress karunga to pat jaayegi... kuch isliye ko unko akelepan me kisi ka saath mil gaya... kuch isliye ki unko at least koi aisa mil jaata hai jinke saath wo thodi der masti kar sake , thoda khush ho sake, thoda muskura sake....and so on...

chaliye main Koyal ji ke shabdon me hi kehta hoon....

Bataaun mujhe kaisi lagti hai......

(haan sach me bilkul jaisa kahaa hai waisi lagti hai)

Mujhe tou patton pe thehri shabnam lagti hai
Usha ki lalima si roshan chirag lagti hai...

.......isko main dhang se explain nahi kar paunga. aur agar karunga to kuch ulta pulta ho sakta hai. isliye chahunga ki Koyal ji hi karein.

Sab k chehre pe muskaan bikherti
Mamta ki wo anokhi muurat lagti hai...

har kisi se pyaar hai aapko. koi chhal nahi koi kapat nahi. pas niswaarth prem aur dosti rakhti hain sabse. jo chahe baat kar le. jaise chahe kar le. har kisi ke rang me rang jaati hain aur unhe bhi apne rang me rang deti hain... sach aisi hi moorat ho aap

Bachcho key saath bachchi lagti hai
Ye saawli-saloni surat sachi lagti hai

Koyal ji ke liye, Rahul ji ke liye... aap ek dost hain. unke sukh dukh share karti hain... daant ti hain, samjhaati hain aur dher saara pyaar bhi karti hain. aur hum jaise doston ke liye jinhone apne imagination se aapki tasveer bana rakhi hai apne aankhon ke saamne unke liye ek kavita ki strot hain... unki ghazal hain

Prem sudha ke ras ki ye samunder lagti hai
Har mausam mai pyaar barsaati Yo ki jaan lagti hai

itna pyaar hai sabke liye ki khatam hone ka naam hi nahi leta. chahe koi bhi ho inse pyaar jarur milta hai. kabhi nahi dekha kisi ke liye naraaz hote ya kisi se gussa hote. chahe koi khush ho chahe koi udaas ho, ye hamesha . sach kahaa hai pream naam ka jo amrit hai uska saagar hi hain Kasak ji...yunhi har kisi ke liye aap pyaar barsaate rahiye....

Bhaav aur shabdo ki ye tou khaan lagti hai
Yo kay ess manch ki mujhe shaan lagti hai

shabd.. shabdon ki to jaadugarni hain... ab kahengi main har kisi ko yahi kehta hoon. par sach kahun to bahut kam log aise hain jinka likha padhte hi meri ungliyaan apne aap keyboard pe chale lagti hain kuch naya likhne k liye.. bich me shayad April me khoob saari poems likhi thi maine aur is baar august me likh paaya hoon sirf inke likhe ko padhke... is mahine maine 112 poems likhe hain... an achievement for me aur unme se jo achche hain wo inhi ke poem ke jawaab me bane hain... thanks to you kasak ji... sach me aap Yo ke manch ki shaan ki hain... sach...

Kasak ban k dil ki kitne dewaano ki jaan lagti hai
Annu-Anaamikaa tu kavita kee pehchaan lagti hai

haan sach kaha kai logo ke dil ki kasak bani hui hai... bahut miss karte hain sab aapko... aur iska ehsas aapko bhi hoga ki kitna miss karte hain aapko sab jab aap nahi hote logged in... aur kavita itni khoob likhti hain ki apko hi kavita ki pehchan bata diya hai Koyal ji ne... thanks Koyal ji...

Aur mere liye aap kuch nahi hai... sirf ek "Dost" ke siwa.... shayad yahi ek shabd saaare feelings ko capture kar leta hai...

ab senti nahi hone ka... aur ye mat bolna ki rula diya .. mast ek pyaari si smile dena ... samjhe sarkar.... no... no sarkaar nahi ko Koyal ji abhi kuch bol padengi... samjhe Kasak ji....

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Re: Battaun Anu-di kaisi lagti hai

«Reply #7 on: September 01, 2010, 08:59:48 PM »

Quote from: klaskar on September 01, 2010, 08:29:11 PM

"pyaar kiya nahi jaata,
pyaar ho jaata hai..."

..... ......... ......... ....
main nahin roi kapil......see me smiling...


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Re: Battaun Anu-di kaisi lagti hai

«Reply #8 on: September 01, 2010, 09:53:56 PM »

good...!!!

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on September 01, 2010, 08:59:48 PM

..... ......... ......... ....
main nahin roi kapil......see me smiling...


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Re: Battaun Anu-di kaisi lagti hai

«Reply #9 on: September 01, 2010, 11:38:56 PM »

Quote from: klaskar on September 01, 2010, 08:29:11 PM

"pyaar kiya nahi jaata,
pyaar ho jaata hai..."

Bahut khoob aur sahi bayaan kiya hai aap ne Kapil Ji


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Re: Battaun Anu-di kaisi lagti hai

«Reply #10 on: September 02, 2010, 01:31:26 PM »

Mein kya kahu ab.......Kapil ji aapne meri lines ka....Shabdaarth....Bhaavaarth.....aur Gudhaarth sab kar daala.......Aabaar shabd bhi chhota padega.....


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Re: Battaun Anu-di kaisi lagti hai

«Reply #11 on: September 02, 2010, 02:52:32 PM »

Bahut bahut shukriya Rajesh ji... waise ye compliment mujhe nahi Koyal ji ko jaana chahiye....unki hi rachna hai jispe main kuch kuch bol paayaa... Thanks Koyal ji...!!!

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Re: Battaun Anu-di kaisi lagti hai

«Reply #12 on: September 02, 2010, 02:53:15 PM »

waise Gudhaarth ka arth nahi samajh aaya humein...!!!

Quote from: KOYAL46 on September 02, 2010, 01:31:26 PM

Mein kya kahu ab.......Kapil ji aapne meri lines ka....Shabdaarth....Bhaavaarth.....aur Gudhaarth sab kar daala.......Aabaar shabd bhi chhota padega.....


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Re: Battaun Anu-di kaisi lagti hai

«Reply #13 on: September 02, 2010, 02:59:24 PM »

Ye tou Hindi k pandit masterji batayenge ji........aap tou jaante huye anjaan bante ho.......


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Re: Battaun Anu-di kaisi lagti hai

«Reply #14 on: September 02, 2010, 03:30:10 PM »

na ji mujhe sach me nahi pata.. wait kar lete hain Hindi k pandit masterji ka.... Usual Smile


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