Batwaara "Khwaish"

by khwaish on June 07, 2012, 07:26:20 AM
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Log Jhoot Kehte Hai Ke 'DeewaroN' Mein 'Daraare' Padhti Hai!!!!
Haqeeqat To Yeh Hai Ki Jab 'RishtoN'  Mein 'Daraare' Padhti hai
                   
            Jab 'Deewaare' Banti Hai..!!!!!!!



Zindagi Mein Har Bache Ko Khuda Ki Di Hui Sabse Anmol Amaanat
"Maa-Baap" Ki Den Hai,Jiska Dena Hum Zindagi Bhar Nahi De Paayenge
BachoN Ke Liye Maa-Baap ki Qurbaani Ko Woh Hi sahee Samjhega
 Jab Woh Khud uss Mukaam Par Pahunchega..
Mujhe Afsos Tab Hota Hai Jab Bache Bade Hokar
Apne Hi Maa-Baap Se Hissa Maangte Hai Aur Alag-Alag
Rehne Ki  Baatein Kehte Hai...Jis pariwaar Ke Khwaab Dekhe The,
Waheen Pariwaar Alag Hone Ki baatein Karta Hai..
Unn Maa-Baap Ke Dil Par Kya Guzarti Hogi Jab
Apne Hi BachoN Ki Wajeh Se Woh Khud Batt Jaate Hai......



Chehre Par Muskaan,AankhoN Mein Thakaan
Kabhi Unn Se Unkee Kahaani Naa Puch..!!!!

Woh To Bas Daud Rahe The Zindagi Ki Daud Mein
Haal-Chaal Puchle Par Kya Hai Pareshani Na puch

Pata Bhi Naa Chala Aur Sehat Ne Saath Chodd Diya!!
Bachon Par Kya Hoti Hai Baap Ki Meharbani Naa Puch

Jism Tootha Hai Par Unke Ke Hausle Nahee Toothe..!!!
Apni Aulaad Ke Liye, Maa-Baap Ki Qurbani Naa Puch

Waqt Ke mutaabik Kuch Bhi To Ek Saa Nahi Rehta.....!!!!!
Jo Bayaan Ho Dil Se,Usse lafzoN Ki Zabaani Naa Puch

Kaam Kar Apna Par  Maa-Baap Ko Bhi Waqt Diya Kar..!!!!
Teri Hi Parvarish  Mein Kat gayi Jo Unkee Jawani Naa Puch

"Khwaish" Maa-Baap Khuda Ki Di Hui Anmol Daulat Hai..!!!!
Pyaar Puch Par Paiso Se Tolkar Pyaar Ki Nishaani Naa Puch


               ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: June 07, 2012, 07:36:41 AM »
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Is bar to lamba intzar krvaya khawahish ji aapne par intzar ka fal bhut hi jyada meetha mila........ Bahut hi khubsurat rachna  aisi rachna jo tareef ki mohtaj nahi tareef jiski mohtaj h..... 

 Mera bad luck ki saini sir aur aapki rachna ke liye shbd nahi juta pa rha aur mobileol ki wajh se dher sare salute bhi nahi kr pa rha............mafi chahunga...........but i salute u also sir.....khas insan ki bahut hi khas rachna aam aadmi ki zindgi se judi hui...mubarakbad
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«Reply #2 on: June 07, 2012, 07:44:26 AM »
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Khwaishji.Aaj phir aap ki eik bahut khubsurat kavish dekhne ko mili.Tabiat khush ho gai. Beshak ye eik aisi tragedy hai jo har daur mein hoti aaayi hai . Bus aajkal kuch zyada bedardi ke sath nazar aa rahi hai.
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«Reply #3 on: June 07, 2012, 08:37:24 AM »
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KHWAISH JEE BAHUT HI UMDA PESHKASH.
MERE PAAS IS KALAAM KI TAREEF KARNE KE LIYE SHABD NAHEEN HAIN.
DILI DAAD AUR 1 RAU KUBOOL KIJIYE
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«Reply #4 on: June 07, 2012, 09:06:10 AM »
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is rachna ke liye no words khwaish ji..... bas aankhein num aur gala suukh gaya hai... ajeeb si haalat hai iss waqt.... hats off to u for ur this post khwaish ji.
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«Reply #5 on: June 07, 2012, 09:21:41 AM »
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ek haqeeqat bayaan kartee bejod peshkash jismen bepanah kashish hai main aapko dil se mubaarak baad deta hoon khwaish beta ji
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«Reply #6 on: June 07, 2012, 09:52:51 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on June 07, 2012, 07:26:20 AM
Log Jhoot Kehte Hai Ke 'DeewaroN' Mein 'Daraare' Padhti Hai!!!!
Haqeeqat To Yeh Hai Ki Jab 'RishtoN'  Mein 'Daraare' Padhti hai
                   
            Jab 'Deewaare' Banti Hai..!!!!!!!



Zindagi Mein Har Bache Ko Khuda Ki Di Hui Sabse Anmol Amaanat
"Maa-Baap" Ki Den Hai,Jiska Dena Hum Zindagi Bhar Nahi De Paayenge
BachoN Ke Liye Maa-Baap ki Qurbaani Ko Woh Hi sahee Samjhega
 Jab Woh Khud uss Mukaam Par Pahunchega..
Mujhe Afsos Tab Hota Hai Jab Bache Bade Hokar
Apne Hi Maa-Baap Se Hissa Maangte Hai Aur Alag-Alag
Rehne Ki  Baatein Kehte Hai...Jis pariwaar Ke Khwaab Dekhe The,
Waheen Pariwaar Alag Hone Ki baatein Karta Hai..
Unn Maa-Baap Ke Dil Par Kya Guzarti Hogi Jab
Apne Hi BachoN Ki Wajeh Se Woh Khud Batt Jaate Hai......



Chehre Par Muskaan,AankhoN Mein Thakaan
Kabhi Unn Se Unkee Kahaani Naa Puch..!!!!

Woh To Bas Daud Rahe The Zindagi Ki Daud Mein
Haal-Chaal Puchle Par Kya Hai Pareshani Na puch

Pata Bhi Naa Chala Aur Sehat Ne Saath Chodd Diya!!
Bachon Par Kya Hoti Hai Baap Ki Meharbani Naa Puch

Jism Tootha Hai Par Unke Ke Hausle Nahee Toothe..!!!
Apni Aulaad Ke Liye, Maa-Baap Ki Qurbani Naa Puch

Waqt Ke mutaabik Kuch Bhi To Ek Saa Nahi Rehta.....!!!!!
Jo Bayaan Ho Dil Se,Usse lafzoN Ki Zabaani Naa Puch

Kaam Kar Apna Par  Maa-Baap Ko Bhi Waqt Diya Kar..!!!!
Teri Hi Parvarish  Mein Kat gayi Jo Unkee Jawani Naa Puch

"Khwaish" Maa-Baap Khuda Ki Di Hui Anmol Daulat Hai..!!!!
Pyaar Puch Par Paiso Se Tolkar Pyaar Ki Nishaani Naa Puch


               ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

Bahut umda peskash khwaais ji bahut hi heart touching creation hai dheron daad qabool kariye is nazm ke liye.
khas tour par is sher ke liye :
Waqt Ke mutaabik Kuch Bhi To Ek Saa Nahi Rehta.....!!!!!
Jo Bayaan Ho Dil Se,Usse lafzoN Ki Zabaani Naa Puch
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«Reply #7 on: June 07, 2012, 02:42:47 PM »
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Quote from: soudagar on June 07, 2012, 07:36:41 AM
Is bar to lamba intzar krvaya khawahish ji aapne par intzar ka fal bhut hi jyada meetha mila........ Bahut hi khubsurat rachna  aisi rachna jo tareef ki mohtaj nahi tareef jiski mohtaj h..... 

 Mera bad luck ki saini sir aur aapki rachna ke liye shbd nahi juta pa rha aur mobileol ki wajh se dher sare salute bhi nahi kr pa rha............mafi chahunga...........but i salute u also sir.....khas insan ki bahut hi khas rachna aam aadmi ki zindgi se judi hui...mubarakbad

Saudagar Ji Aapne Itni tareef Kar Di Jis Ka Bilkul Bhi Haqdaar Nahi, Bas Aap Sab Ka Yuhi Pyaar bana Rahe  issi Umeed Se aap Sab Ke Beech Aa jaata Hoon..Iss Kalaam Ko Padhne Ke Liye Aur isse Kadar pasand Karne Ke liye Aapka Sache Dil Se Bahut Bahut Shukriya Dost..Yuhi Humesha Saath banaye Rakhiyega... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #8 on: June 07, 2012, 05:17:16 PM »
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Bahut khoob Khwaish jee

shaandaar peshkash... Applause Applause
Waqt Ke mutaabik Kuch Bhi To Ek Saa Nahi Rehta.....!!!!!
Jo Bayaan Ho Dil Se,Usse lafzoN Ki Zabaani Naa Puch
BAHUT UMDA Applause
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«Reply #9 on: June 07, 2012, 07:40:44 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Khwaish ji....!!!
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«Reply #10 on: June 08, 2012, 07:56:42 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on June 07, 2012, 07:44:26 AM
Khwaishji.Aaj phir aap ki eik bahut khubsurat kavish dekhne ko mili.Tabiat khush ho gai. Beshak ye eik aisi tragedy hai jo har daur mein hoti aaayi hai . Bus aajkal kuch zyada bedardi ke sath nazar aa rahi hai.


Saheb Aapne Apna Waqt diya,Apaka Teh Dil Se Bhaut bahut Shukriya....Aapki Daad Mil Jaaye To yakeen Ho Jaata Hai Ke Likhna Safal hua..

Aur Saheb Bilkul Sach Kahaa Aapne Aajkal Aise Halaat Zyaada Dekhne Ko Milte Hai, main Khud Yeh Kalaam Aise Halaat Ko Apni AankhoN Ke saamne Dekh Kar Likh Gaya..Kuch Lines Yaad Aa Gayi Share karta Chaloon..


Everybody Know's How To Built A Beautiful House
But Only Few Know, How To live Beautifully In A House....
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«Reply #11 on: June 08, 2012, 08:01:13 AM »
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Quote from: Anahita on June 07, 2012, 08:37:24 AM
KHWAISH JEE BAHUT HI UMDA PESHKASH.
MERE PAAS IS KALAAM KI TAREEF KARNE KE LIYE SHABD NAHEEN HAIN.
DILI DAAD AUR 1 RAU KUBOOL KIJIYE
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Thankyou Sooooooooooooooooooo Much Anahita Ji..

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«Reply #12 on: June 08, 2012, 07:28:35 PM »
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khwaish ji ,ati-uttam rachna aur aaj ke sandarbh mein vastusthi ka sahi sahi chitran karti hui aapko bahut bahut badhaai
aur ek rau sweekar karen
ghansham das ahuja
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«Reply #13 on: June 09, 2012, 11:54:59 AM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on June 07, 2012, 09:06:10 AM
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is rachna ke liye no words khwaish ji..... bas aankhein num aur gala suukh gaya hai... ajeeb si haalat hai iss waqt.... hats off to u for ur this post khwaish ji.


Thankyou Soooooooooooooooooooooooooo Dear Anuuuu..

Veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyy happpy To Seee U back.....

Thanks a Ton For Ur Time & Appreciation..

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«Reply #14 on: June 09, 2012, 11:59:20 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on June 07, 2012, 09:21:41 AM
ek haqeeqat bayaan kartee bejod peshkash jismen bepanah kashish hai main aapko dil se mubaarak baad deta hoon khwaish beta ji


Saheb Aapne "Beta Ji" Kahaa Waheen Mere Liye Sabse badi daad Hai..Yeh Pyaar Aur Aashirwaad Yuhi Banaye Rakhiyega Humesha Ke Liye,Bas Itni Si guzaarish Hai Aapse...

Thankyou Soooooooooooooooooooo Much!!!!!

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