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by Tuhina on January 21, 2013, 04:19:36 AM
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Mere  gam  ko  tum  shayari  kaho,  
farak  ni  padta ,  
takleef   to   tab  hoti   hai ,  
jab  tum  vaah  kehte    ho .............  

Logon  se  suna  hai  kissa  ,  
tumhari  bejod  davaon  ka ,  
mere  zara  se  zakhm  ko  
kyun  lailaj  kehte  ho  ............
                               
Maana  ki  aaj  dushman ho ,  
par  kabhi  to  dost  the ,  
gar  ni  the , to  milte  hi  
kyun  salaam  kehte ho.......
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«Reply #1 on: January 21, 2013, 05:04:40 AM »
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very nice
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«Reply #2 on: January 21, 2013, 09:02:14 AM »
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nice but each sentence/chhand should be written in different lines/next line. It can then be enjoyed fully.
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«Reply #3 on: January 21, 2013, 02:02:41 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

bahut khoob Tuhina ji....!!!
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