***"Bear--Baar"***:Shairi - E

jannatjahan

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Baar girl ki kahani uski jubani....

Ungali na uthao hum par hum bhi insaan hain
aap logon ki tarah hi is dil me kuch armaan hain..
rijhate hain jab dil kisi ka char paise aate hain
aati hai tab badan pe sari..
masum bhai behno ka pet paalte hain..
kis baat ki hume har baar saza di jaati hai
kyun nahi badhte kadam tab,
jab beech raah me sareaam aurtein satayee jati hai
nachte hi hain to aisa kya gunaah kar lete hain
jurm ki taraf badhte kadamon ko
Bear Baar ki chaukhat par hi rok lete hain
karte hain jab numaish jism ki kai teer dilon par chubhte hain
phir aankhon me naach uthati hain wo tasveerein
jinki zindaganiyaan inhi paison se palte hain
bure hum nahi bura hamara waqt hai
jisne kuch logon ke liye kiya apna rawaiyaa sakht hai
kyun chinte ho humse hamari roji roti
hume bhi apnao aakhir hum bhi hain bharat ki beti
haan ye Bear Baar hai..nahi hoti yahan koi saajis
har taraf bikharta pyaar besumaar hai
mat thehrao hamare pese ko doshi
in paison se palati hai kai zindagiyaan
milti hai do waqt ki roti
hume samjho hamare prati apna najariya badal do
hume bhi do haq izzat se jeene ka
kadam badhao sab milkar is nek kaam ki pehal karo...

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shab

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Re: ***"Bear--Baar"***

«Reply #1 on: June 17, 2009, 08:55:26 AM »

BAHUT ACHCHA LIKHA JJ JI,BAHUT KHOOB


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_Vicky_

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Re: ***"Bear--Baar"***

«Reply #2 on: June 17, 2009, 09:00:20 AM »

Bahut Khooooooob Shweta Ji.. Ek Kadwa Such aur Baar Girls Ke dard Ko Bakhoobi Kaagaz par Utaara hai aapne.. Jawab Nahi aapki is Rachna Ka.. Bahut bahut Khooooooooooob dear.. Applause

**~** Mann **~**


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salil2002

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Re: ***"Bear--Baar"***

«Reply #3 on: June 17, 2009, 11:30:49 AM »

very good and interesting topic dear.............beautifully described .........good wrk keep it up......


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Talat

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Re: ***"Bear--Baar"***

«Reply #4 on: June 17, 2009, 12:53:49 PM »

Jannat,

Aapne Beer Bar girls ki durdasha aur unke ehsasat ko achcha utara hai lafzon main....Bohot Khoob dear !


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Re: ***"Bear--Baar"***

«Reply #5 on: June 17, 2009, 01:14:53 PM »

bahoot achcha likha jannat ji


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madhuwesh

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Re: ***"Bear--Baar"***

«Reply #6 on: June 18, 2009, 01:39:17 AM »

Really touching,Jannat ji,very beautiful creation. Clapping Smiley


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Roja

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Re: ***"Bear--Baar"***

«Reply #7 on: June 18, 2009, 02:20:43 AM »

Very good Bahut accha likha hai dear Shweta and dil ko chu gayi ye shayari ...


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SARVESH RASTOGI

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Re: ***"Bear--Baar"***

«Reply #8 on: June 18, 2009, 11:07:20 AM »

Wah Jannat Ji wah
SARVESH RASTOGI


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