bechaaaaaaaargii...................(K_A)

by khamosh_aawaaz on August 04, 2012, 08:17:58 AM
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                              rotey-rotey ek aur shaam huii.!
                              umr  ghareeb  ki tamaam huii.!!

    
                              bani   ashiqi  sabab-e-dushmani.!
                              betii mohallaey ki badnaam huii.!


                              mili    naukri   rasookdaar   ko.!
                              mehnat    meri    nakaam    huii.!


                              mofaad  mein  apne  ladtey  rahe.!
                              aafat  mein yahaan  aawaam  huii.!


                              sahein kyaa-kyaa abb khamosh  hum.!
                               sau zulm  aur zindagi haraam  huii.!!
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«Reply #1 on: August 04, 2012, 09:33:04 AM »
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waaaah khamoshji waaah khub....

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«Reply #2 on: August 04, 2012, 10:06:27 AM »
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bahut hi umda kalaam pesh kiya hai K_A ji, dheron daad
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«Reply #3 on: August 04, 2012, 10:19:01 AM »
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Good khamoshji
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«Reply #4 on: August 04, 2012, 10:55:15 AM »
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behatree peshkash dherondaad aur mubarakbaad
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«Reply #5 on: August 04, 2012, 11:22:01 AM »
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on August 04, 2012, 08:17:58 AM


                              rotey-rotey ek aur shaam huii.!
                              umr  ghareeb  ki tamaam huii.!!

     
                              bani   ashiqi  sabab-e-dushmani.!
                              betii mohallaey ki badnaam huii.!


                              mili    naukri   rasookdaar   ko.!
                              mehnat    meri    nakaam    huii.!


                              mofaad  mein  apni  ladtey  rahe.!
                              aafat  mein yahaan  aawaam  huii.!


                              sahein kyaa-kyaa abb khamosh  hum.!
                               sau zulm  aur   ek   jaan  huii.!!
Waaah Waah Bahut khoob gazal likhi hai aapne KA ji .... Dheron daad aur mubarak baad qabool kariye..
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«Reply #6 on: August 04, 2012, 01:27:01 PM »
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Vaah
bahut khoob Khamosh jee
kya baat hai.
har sher jindgee ki uljhano ko samete..
behatreen kalaam..dili daad kubool farmaayen
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«Reply #7 on: August 04, 2012, 02:31:36 PM »
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bahut khoob
dil ko chhoo liya ahi apne kamosh ji aur
ba-khoobi zindagi ki uljhne bayaan huii

 
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«Reply #8 on: August 04, 2012, 03:03:19 PM »
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boht khub k a ji
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«Reply #9 on: August 04, 2012, 05:49:44 PM »
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on August 04, 2012, 08:17:58 AM


                              rotey-rotey ek aur shaam huii.!
                              umr  ghareeb  ki tamaam huii.!!

     
                              bani   ashiqi  sabab-e-dushmani.!
                              betii mohallaey ki badnaam huii.!


                              mili    naukri   rasookdaar   ko.!
                              mehnat    meri    nakaam    huii.!


                              mofaad  mein  apni  ladtey  rahe.!
                              aafat  mein yahaan  aawaam  huii.!


                              sahein kyaa-kyaa abb khamosh  hum.!
                               sau zulm  aur   ek   jaan  huii.!!


Bahut Bahut Khoooob!!!

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«Reply #10 on: August 04, 2012, 05:57:09 PM »
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on August 04, 2012, 08:17:58 AM


                              rotey-rotey ek aur shaam huii.!
                              umr  ghareeb  ki tamaam huii.!!

     
                              bani   ashiqi  sabab-e-dushmani.!
                              betii mohallaey ki badnaam huii.!


                              mili    naukri   rasookdaar   ko.!
                              mehnat    meri    nakaam    huii.!


                              mofaad  mein  apni  ladtey  rahe.!
                              aafat  mein yahaan  aawaam  huii.!


                              sahein kyaa-kyaa abb khamosh  hum.!
                               sau zulm  aur   ek   jaan  huii.!!

wah wah bahut khoob K_A jee
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«Reply #11 on: August 04, 2012, 09:25:37 PM »
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kya baat hai....very very nice
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«Reply #12 on: August 05, 2012, 03:02:06 AM »
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wah ji wah---
zindgi ko bahot gareeb se yani kareeb se dikha dia aapne
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«Reply #13 on: August 05, 2012, 03:29:38 AM »
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nice
mehfil mei janab aap her baar chate hai
sach jindgi ka aapke her sdher mei paate hai
Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on August 04, 2012, 08:17:58 AM


                              rotey-rotey ek aur shaam huii.!
                              umr  ghareeb  ki tamaam huii.!!

     
                              bani   ashiqi  sabab-e-dushmani.!
                              betii mohallaey ki badnaam huii.!


                              mili    naukri   rasookdaar   ko.!
                              mehnat    meri    nakaam    huii.!


                              mofaad  mein  apne  ladtey  rahe.!
                              aafat  mein yahaan  aawaam  huii.!


                              sahein kyaa-kyaa abb khamosh  hum.!
                               sau zulm  aur   ek   jaan  huii.!!
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«Reply #14 on: August 05, 2012, 06:49:53 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne K_A ji....!!!
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