Bekhudi

by Brijinder on June 28, 2007, 09:03:13 PM
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Bekhudi

Ik mauj-e-samndar-e-qaynaat hai zindagi
Khud hi jwaab aur swaalaat hai zindagi

Khud ki talaash yeh safar-e-hyaat
Abhi din ki aarzu ab justju-e- raat

Kuch jaani pehchani raahon pay
UmroN kay qaafilay
Ghardish-e-doraaN main pinha manzilaiN
Kabhi manzil ka pa laina
Phir us say uqta jaanaa
Yeh shauq-e-manzil nahi
Shayud jeenay ka bus bahaanaa

Jab bar gayi bahut tanhai
Banaya phulsupha-e-khudai
But banayay banai azaanaiN
Phir sajaai rishton ki dukaanaiN

Jab jab bhi khud say uqtaiya insaaN
Daur-e-wehshat main laut aayaa insaaN

Is hajoom-e-zindagi main tanha hai har koi
Bus giraphat-e-khwaab-e-bahaanaa hai har koi

Ik bhatkan umr kay jaNgloN main
Liyay beqasi-e-namaloom diloN main
Har koi jiyay jaataa hai
Dard-o-masarrat kay ajab saNgam ko
Unwaan-e-zindgai diyay jaataa hai

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«Reply #1 on: June 29, 2007, 03:55:39 AM »
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Umda peshkash.. but I don't think that it fits in Judai section !
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«Reply #2 on: June 29, 2007, 04:03:05 AM »
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Bahut khoob bijender bhai
Dil ro pada read karte hi sach main bahut achcha
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«Reply #3 on: June 29, 2007, 05:29:50 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: June 29, 2007, 05:31:12 AM »
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Bahut hi achhe lafzon se saji bahut hi pyaari nazm... =D>

Brijinder ji... Bahut hi achha likha aapne...
Aapki agli nazm ka intezaar rahega... Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: June 29, 2007, 08:41:37 PM »
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I am very thankful to all of for the warm words of appreciation.I hope this poem lingers in ur heart and raises some questions of its own.
Brijinder
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