Beton Ki Shadiyan

by riyaz106 on March 16, 2010, 12:28:39 PM
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«Reply #15 on: March 17, 2010, 06:42:47 PM »
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Pandey ji aapka dher saara shukriya. Aapne bhi bahut achha likha hai.
Quote from: drpandey on March 16, 2010, 05:59:32 PM
Ye sher aaj ke haalat ki mukammal tasveer bayaan kar raha hai bahut khoob....Riyaz Sahab...

            Har roj falak se aati hain sadaayen,
            Berang hui basti, benoor hawayen...!
                      Ek sange-rawadaari,
                      Ek range-wafadaari,
                      Ek phool hi ulfat ka,
                      Koi to uthayen...!! Har roj!!
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«Reply #16 on: March 18, 2010, 05:14:55 AM »
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Prateek Ji aapka behad aur bahut saara shukriya. Aapko ghazal pasand aai, khushi hui. Masha Allah aap bhi bahut achha likhte hain.
Quote from: Prateek Mardia on March 16, 2010, 06:28:11 PM
Riyaaz jee-bahut khoob likha hai aapne.dumdaar ghazal hai aapki.

Kaash ji-aapki peshkash behad khoobsurat hai.

Dr. Pandey ji-Atyant gehri baatein aapne bade adab aur nazzakat se hum tuk pahuchaayi,aapka shukriya.
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Simna
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«Reply #17 on: March 18, 2010, 08:43:19 AM »
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Wow
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«Reply #18 on: March 18, 2010, 10:41:21 AM »
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HUM_DUM ji ghazal ko pasand farmane ke liye bahut bahut shukriya. Aainda bhi aapse hausla afzaai ki ummeed rahegi.
Quote from: HUM_DUM on March 16, 2010, 08:10:27 PM
Oh Wow Kya Baat Hai Riyaz Ji.
Har As'haar Gehraai Mein Dooba Hua Hai.
Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Jazbaat Hain...
Pura Insaf Kiya Hai Aapne Is Ghazal Ke Saath
Bahut Hi Umga Peskash.....
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«Reply #19 on: March 18, 2010, 12:34:38 PM »
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Behad shukriya Shabbir bhai ke aapne meri ghazal pasand farmai. Karm, mehrbani, nawazish.
Quote from: shabbir143 on March 17, 2010, 11:56:20 AM
Bohat Khoob Farmaaya Riyaz Bhai...
Bohat Achchi Ghazal Hai....
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«Reply #20 on: March 19, 2010, 09:49:16 AM »
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Bahut shukriya Simna ji.
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«Reply #21 on: March 19, 2010, 01:10:45 PM »
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Quote from: riyaz106 on March 16, 2010, 12:28:39 PM
                GHAZAL

Jo chhodi na tumne ye nadaniyan
To badhti rahengi preshaniyan

Agar paida hongi nahi betiyan
To beton ki hongi kahan shadiyan

Drakhton ko katoge yun hi agar
To sahra banengi hari wadiyan

Kisi dharm ko gar kahega bura
Uthengi tere dharm par ungliyan
 
Gaye the safar ko, bina rehnuma
Kinaron pe hi dubi sab kashtiyan

Buraai na chhodi to phir ek din
Gira dega ye  aasma.n bijliyan

Taraqqi ye kaisi hui 'Ashna'
Nadi mein paresha.n sabhi machhliyan
(added later)
           
Riyaz 'Ashna'




Mashallah...Bohot hi khoob Riyaz Ji, aapne is naazuk masle pe bohot gehraayi se lafzon ko ghazal main utaara hai...Bohot Khoob Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #22 on: March 19, 2010, 02:33:17 PM »
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Waah Waah Kya Baat Hai Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Riyaz ji.. ak naye andaaz mea likhi gai aapki yea ghazal wakai bahoot bahoot Umda hai... Keep writing... !

Kaash ji and Pandey ji... Bahoot Bahoot Khoobsoorati se aapne aapne ehsaas ko byaan kiya hai.. bahoot bahoot Umda !

Applause Applause Applause  Applause  Applause
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«Reply #23 on: March 19, 2010, 04:07:25 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Talat ji. Aapne ghazal ko badi tawajjo se padha aur iske mafhoom ko samajhte hue hausla afzaii ki, nawazish, karam aur shukriya.
Quote from: Celmira on March 19, 2010, 01:10:45 PM
Mashallah...Bohot hi khoob Riyaz Ji, aapne is naazuk masle pe bohot gehraayi se lafzon ko ghazal main utaara hai...Bohot Khoob Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #24 on: March 19, 2010, 08:22:07 PM »
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Quote from: riyaz106 on March 16, 2010, 12:28:39 PM
                GHAZAL

Jo chhodi na tumne ye nadaniyan
To badhti rahengi preshaniyan

Agar paida hongi nahi betiyan
To beton ki hongi kahan shadiyan

Drakhton ko katoge yun hi agar
To sahra banengi hari wadiyan

Kisi dharm ko gar kahega bura
Uthengi tere dharm par ungliyan
 
Gaye the safar ko, bina rehnuma
Kinaron pe hi dubi sab kashtiyan

Buraai na chhodi to phir ek din
Gira dega ye  aasma.n bijliyan

Taraqqi ye kaisi hui 'Ashna'
Nadi mein paresha.n sabhi machhliyan
(added later)
           
Riyaz 'Ashna'




Wah bohat khoob sach hi likha aap ne very nice...
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«Reply #25 on: March 19, 2010, 08:23:49 PM »
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Quote from: @kaash on March 16, 2010, 01:07:39 PM
Riyaz ji acha likha hai

ek koshish ki hai,ummeed hai pasand aayegi

dil me bharam mere dost dosti ke baad rakha nahi karte
nadaaniyan apni badhake doosre ko nada kaha nahi karte

ladkiyun ki paidayish se zyada unki ahmiyat zaruri
ladkiyun ki izzat ke bina ladke ladke kahlaya nahi karte

darakhton ko kaatna ek gunaah hai mere dost
zindagi har shajar me yun hi phool khila nahi karte

dharm sabhi ek hain insaan sabhi barabar hain
Allah ke darbaar me raja rank juda nahi lagte


safar vo hai jo mazilon ko nayi manzilen de den
khud ke lie chalne ko to dost chalna nahi kahte

achhayi burai sab nazron nazaaron ka khel hai
ache insaan kisi ko bhi bura nahi kahte




Very nice
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«Reply #26 on: March 20, 2010, 04:02:34 AM »
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Wah bahutb khoobsurat aur dil ko chu lene wali gazal likha aapne Riyaz bhai,Kaash ji ,Pandey ji.lovely work.excellent Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #27 on: March 20, 2010, 06:43:53 AM »
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Bahot bahot shukriya Sophi ji. Ghazal ko tawajjo ke saath padhne, pasand karne aur hausla afzaai ke liye main aapka mshkoor hun.
Quote from: Sophi on March 19, 2010, 02:33:17 PM
Waah Waah Kya Baat Hai Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Riyaz ji.. ak naye andaaz mea likhi gai aapki yea ghazal wakai bahoot bahoot Umda hai... Keep writing... !

Kaash ji and Pandey ji... Bahoot Bahoot Khoobsoorati se aapne aapne ehsaas ko byaan kiya hai.. bahoot bahoot Umda !

Applause Applause Applause  Applause  Applause
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«Reply #28 on: March 20, 2010, 07:41:31 AM »
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Bahut bahaut shukriya Khushi ji ke aapko meri ghaza pasand aai.
Quote from: khushi4pari on March 19, 2010, 08:22:07 PM
Wah bohat khoob sach hi likha aap ne very nice...
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«Reply #29 on: March 20, 2010, 02:23:56 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukria Madhu didi ke aapko meri ghazal pasand aai. Main mashkoor hun aapka.
Quote from: madhuwesh on March 20, 2010, 04:02:34 AM
Wah bahutb khoobsurat aur dil ko chu lene wali gazal likha aapne Riyaz bhai,Kaash ji ,Pandey ji.lovely work.excellent Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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