Beton Ki Shadiyan -Panna 3:Shairi - E

RAHIKA

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«Reply #30 on: March 21, 2010, 05:50:50 AM »

Bahot khub!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
yoindia ke shayar shayari ke sath sath samajikta ka bhi khayal rakhte hain
ye jankar khushi hu happy3

our main bhi es community ka chhota hissa hun ye baat abhimanaspad hain icon_thumleft

hats of to you icon_salut

-RAHIKA


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riyaz106

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Re: Beton Ki Shadiyan

«Reply #31 on: March 21, 2010, 07:17:20 AM »

Bahut bahut shukriya Rahika ji. Yoindia pararivar mein aapka swaagat hai. Aap is community ka chhota sa hissa nahin, barabar ka hissa hain.

Samaaj hum sab se milkar banta hai aur iski har achhai burai ke liye hum sab zimmedar hain. Iski buraiyon ko hum log hi khatm kar sakte hain, koi aur nahi.

Quote from: RAHIKA on March 21, 2010, 05:50:50 AM

Bahot khub!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
yoindia ke shayar shayari ke sath sath samajikta ka bhi khayal rakhte hain
ye jankar khushi hu happy3

our main bhi es community ka chhota hissa hun ye baat abhimanaspad hain icon_thumleft

hats of to you icon_salut

-RAHIKA


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waquif ansari

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Re: Beton Ki Shadiyan

«Reply #32 on: March 22, 2010, 09:40:18 AM »

Quote from: riyaz106 on March 16, 2010, 12:28:39 PM

GHAZAL

Jo chhodi na tumne ye nadaniyan
To badhti rahengi preshaniyan

Agar paida hongi nahi betiyan
To beton ki hongi kahan shadiyan

Drakhton ko katoge yun hi agar
To sahra banengi hari wadiyan

Kisi dharm ko gar kahega bura
Uthengi tere dharm par ungliyan

Gaye the safar ko, bina rehnuma
Kinaron pe hi dubi sab kashtiyan

Buraai na chhodi to phir ek din
Gira dega ye aasma.n bijliyan

Taraqqi ye kaisi hui 'Ashna'
Nadi mein paresha.n sabhi machhliyan
(added later)

Riyaz 'Ashna'

Wah wah wah!kamaal ki ghazal kahi hai Janaab Riyaz Ashna Ji aapne. Aaj k haalaat-o-kawakib ki sahi tarjumaani karti hui ye ghazal apni khususiyaat meiN munfarid lab-o-lehja liye hue hai. Apke afkaar ka husn is ghazal meiN numaayaaN nazar aa raha hai. Kamaal ki baat to ye hai k poori ghazal meiN sheriyat apni aab-o-taab ke saath maujood hai. Aik murassa ghazal kahne ke liye aap mubarakbaad ke mustahaq haiN. HazaaroN daad qubul kijiye aur aise hi tilism-angez ghazloN se nawaazte rahiye.


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riyaz106

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Re: Beton Ki Shadiyan

«Reply #33 on: March 22, 2010, 11:57:38 AM »

Waqif sahab kin alfaaz se aapka shukriya adaa karun ke aapko ye ghazal itni pasand aai. Aur jo tabsara aapne kiya hai wo to kamaal ka hai. Behrhal bade khuloos-o-adab ke saath aapka shukriya adaa karta hun.

Quote from: waquif ansari on March 22, 2010, 09:40:18 AM


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