Bheed mein khaas...........

by SURESH SANGWAN on May 20, 2010, 02:51:42 PM
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Khaali waqt mein jo socha hai humne .
ki apne hi zakhmon ko kuredaa hai humne.

Ghamon ke gulshan pe bahaar ,aur hum maali
Ye sab tab hi hota hai jab hota hai waqt khaali.

Iss zindgani ka kya bharosa hai.
Jo sach lagtaa hai wo bhi shayad  dhokha hai.

Sachh ki zustzu hi kahin liye ja rahi hai.
Mere khayal se sachhai wahi jo samne aa rahi hai.

Chhod kar bekaar ki baaton ko kyun na aisa kar lete hain.
Shokh hamesha hote hain wahi jo kuchh shauk paal lete hain.

Jab tak shauk humaare paas hain.
Tab tak doonia ki bheed mein hum khaas hain.
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«Reply #1 on: May 20, 2010, 03:03:14 PM »
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Bahut bahut Khoob Sureshji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: May 20, 2010, 03:05:54 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya khwaishji. icon_flower icon_flower
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Bahut bahut Khoob Sureshji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: May 20, 2010, 05:16:02 PM »
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bheed mei ek shakhs alag sa nazer aata hai
jaane kyu wo mujse apna sa nazer aata hai

wahi chehra,wahi aankhe ,wahi sab kuchhai sabme
jaane kyu bhir bhi koi ek man ko bhaata hai

na jaan na pahchaan ,na koi hai rishta usse
jaanu kyu use dekh dil muskuraye  jaata hai

bheed mei ek shakhs alag sa nager aata hai
jaane kyu wo mujse apna sa nazer aata hai
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«Reply #4 on: May 20, 2010, 07:58:17 PM »
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Wah wah Suresh ji,bahut hi khoob,mindblowing creation,Manoj ji aapne bhi kuch kam nahi likha,great work. icon_salut Hats off to you! Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: May 20, 2010, 11:11:22 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Suresh ji...!!!
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«Reply #6 on: May 21, 2010, 05:38:14 AM »
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manoj ji bahut khoobsurati se bataayaa hai aapne apne khas ke baare mein.bahut khoob icon_flower icon_flower Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Quote from: MANOJ6568 on May 20, 2010, 05:16:02 PM
bheed mei ek shakhs alag sa nazer aata hai
jaane kyu wo mujse apna sa nazer aata hai

wahi chehra,wahi aankhe ,wahi sab kuchhai sabme
jaane kyu bhir bhi koi ek man ko bhaata hai

na jaan na pahchaan ,na koi hai rishta usse
jaanu kyu use dekh dil muskuraye  jaata hai

bheed mei ek shakhs alag sa nager aata hai
jaane kyu wo mujse apna sa nazer aata hai
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«Reply #7 on: May 21, 2010, 05:39:59 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya madhuwesh ji hausla afzahi ke liye aur apna waqt dene ke liye. icon_flower icon_flower
Quote from: madhuwesh on May 20, 2010, 07:58:17 PM
Wah wah Suresh ji,bahut hi khoob,mindblowing creation,Manoj ji aapne bhi kuch kam nahi likha,great work. icon_salut Hats off to you! Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: May 21, 2010, 05:41:19 AM »
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bahut shukriya kapil ji.
ki aapko kavita vichhar pasand aaye. icon_flower icon_flower
Quote from: klaskar on May 20, 2010, 11:11:22 PM
bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Suresh ji...!!!
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«Reply #9 on: May 22, 2010, 08:22:52 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause

great job
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«Reply #10 on: May 22, 2010, 08:23:38 AM »
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Quote from: MANOJ6568 on May 20, 2010, 05:16:02 PM
bheed mei ek shakhs alag sa nazer aata hai
jaane kyu wo mujse apna sa nazer aata hai

wahi chehra,wahi aankhe ,wahi sab kuchhai sabme
jaane kyu bhir bhi koi ek man ko bhaata hai

na jaan na pahchaan ,na koi hai rishta usse
jaanu kyu use dekh dil muskuraye  jaata hai

bheed mei ek shakhs alag sa nager aata hai
jaane kyu wo mujse apna sa nazer aata hai


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«Reply #11 on: May 23, 2010, 04:21:53 PM »
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thanks a lot thegrimreaper ji.
Quote from: thegrimreaper on May 22, 2010, 08:22:52 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause

great job
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