~ * Bhitar * ~_DeV

by thinkhattk on April 14, 2010, 05:01:01 AM
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Mere bhitar naadi bahh rahi he usse to tum sunn sakte ho,

lekin mere bhitar jo registtan fella huaa he usme to sirf muje hi bhatakna he..
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«Reply #1 on: April 14, 2010, 10:17:53 AM »
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bahut theek likha hai aapne.very nice.
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Quote from: thinkhattk on April 14, 2010, 05:01:01 AM

Mere bhitar naadi bahh rahi he usse to tum sunn sakte ho,

lekin mere bhitar jo registtan fella huaa he usme to sirf muje hi bhatakna he..
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«Reply #2 on: April 14, 2010, 10:27:00 AM »
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Wah bahut khoob Dev ji.dho lines mein bahut gaheri baat kahe di aapne.great lines.excellent Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: April 15, 2010, 01:43:17 PM »
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Wah wah wah kya baat hai....Devangi... Applause Clapping Smiley Applause Clapping Smiley Applause

Badi daarshnic,philosophical soch hai yaar...

Bhitar ki nadi ko tou kai baar humne Dev
Aankhon k raaste baahar aate dekha hai... tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed
Par tera ye marusthal tou kabhi dikha nahi
Bol Baku bol usse kyu tune chhupa rakha hai... Winking Winking Winking
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«Reply #4 on: April 15, 2010, 02:01:19 PM »
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dost bahut khoob in lines mai bahut kuch samet ke rakh diya hai aap ne, bahut badia ji wah
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«Reply #5 on: April 16, 2010, 05:46:34 AM »
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Quote from: thinkhattk on April 14, 2010, 05:01:01 AM

Mere bhitar naadi bahh rahi he usse to tum sunn sakte ho,

lekin mere bhitar jo registtan fella huaa he usme to sirf muje hi bhatakna he..

Bahut Khoob
Do punktiyon mein bahut kuch kah diya aap ne
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«Reply #6 on: April 17, 2010, 07:28:36 AM »
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sabhi ka tahe dil se sukriya....
Quote from: KOYAL46 on April 15, 2010, 01:43:17 PM
Wah wah wah kya baat hai....Devangi... Applause Clapping Smiley Applause Clapping Smiley Applause

Badi daarshnic,philosophical soch hai yaar...

Bhitar ki nadi ko tou kai baar humne Dev
Aankhon k raaste baahar aate dekha hai... tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed
Par tera ye marusthal tou kabhi dikha nahi
Bol Baku bol usse kyu tune chhupa rakha hai... Winking Winking Winking


aabhar taro koyal.... saras jawab aapyo chhe te.....
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«Reply #7 on: April 17, 2010, 09:54:04 AM »
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Thanks Devangi-di.....


Quote from: thinkhattk on April 17, 2010, 07:28:36 AM
sabhi ka tahe dil se sukriya....
aabhar taro koyal.... saras jawab aapyo chhe te.....
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