BHOOKH AUR AAG

by kittoo on May 25, 2013, 12:46:30 PM
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CHARON TARAF LAGI HAI AAG
SHARAAB AUR SHABAAB KI
KOI ABLA AAJ FIR SE  LUTI  
KISI GHAR MEIN AAG FIR SE LAGI  
AAG BUJHANE KI KOSHISH MEIN
HATHELI FIR KISI KII JALI  
OOTH GAYEE NIGAAHEIN AASHA KI ORE
BANAANE KO PHIR SE JHOPDI NAYEE
IIS BERAHAM MENHGAAI MEIN
HO NA SAKI USKI JHOPDI NAYEE
IISI GUMM KO BHULANE KE LIYE
EK BOTAL AUR KHARIDNI PADI
FIR PEIT KI AAG BUJHANE KO ASMAT GHAR KI LUTANI PADI
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«Reply #1 on: May 25, 2013, 02:04:19 PM »
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bahut teekha tanz hai, aur ek karwi sachhayi jise aapne bayaaN kiya hai... tareef bhi nahiN kar sakta aisi cheez ki, bas itna hi kahuNga ki aapke khayaalaat ko mera salaam.... bas yuNhi likhte rahiye...
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«Reply #2 on: May 25, 2013, 07:09:42 PM »
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Quote from: kittoo on May 25, 2013, 12:46:30 PM
CHARON TARAF LAGI HAI AAG
SHARAAB AUR SHABAAB KI
KOI ABLA AAJ FIR SE  LUTI 
KISI GHAR MEIN AAG FIR SE LAGI 
AAG BUJHANE KI KOSHISH MEIN
HATHELI FIR KISI KII JALI 
OOTH GAYEE NIGAAHEIN AASHA KI ORE
BANAANE KO PHIR SE JHOPDI NAYEE
IIS BERAHAM MENHGAAI MEIN
HO NA SAKI USKI JHOPDI NAYEE
IISI GUMM KO BHULANE KE LIYE
EK BOTAL AUR KHARIDNI PADI
FIR PEIT KI AAG BUJHANE KO ASMAT GHAR KI LUTANI PADI
Waah Bahut Khoob
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«Reply #3 on: May 25, 2013, 08:21:29 PM »
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behtareen ehsaas hai kittoo ji. dheron daad.
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«Reply #4 on: May 25, 2013, 10:26:25 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Wah,Wah,Wah Kittu Bhai,
Bahut emda nazm kahi hai aapne.Very emotional.
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«Reply #5 on: May 25, 2013, 11:15:24 PM »
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sahi likha hai.. bahut khoob... Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: May 27, 2013, 06:13:10 PM »
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nice one
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