bhoolii-bisrii.......(K_A)

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                             nashaa pyaar kaa mokhtasar rahaa.!
                             dair   tak per iskaa asar rahaa.!!


                             saath  unkey  pataa to naa chalaa.!
                             mushkil bharaa per ye safar rahaa.!


                             ro  padii  raat  apnii  tarikii  pey  aaj.!
                             wo   nikley    naa    hii  qamar    rahaa.!


                             kahtaa   rahaa     zamaanaa  khudkushii  usey.!
                             diwaangi-e-ishq mein parwaana be-khabar rahaa.!


                             rudaad-e-ishq tumhein sunaaein  ge  phir  kabhi.!
                             salaamat     gar     ye   dil-o-jigar     rahaa.!


                             huey tanhaa hum yalghaar mein khamosh!
                             rishtey bachey naa hii ghar rahaa.!!
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        yalghaar- laddi, war
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«Reply #1 on: September 02, 2012, 04:07:23 PM »
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4th, 5th and maqte ka javaab naheen.
Bahut umda Khamosh jee
Kya kahne..
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«Reply #2 on: September 02, 2012, 04:26:16 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: September 02, 2012, 04:28:21 PM »
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bahut khoob .. Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: September 02, 2012, 06:37:30 PM »
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Bahut bahut khoob khamosh ji.... Applause
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«Reply #5 on: September 02, 2012, 07:05:56 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob K_A ji....!!!
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«Reply #6 on: September 03, 2012, 01:19:10 AM »
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wah wah khamosh ji, dhero dad
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«Reply #7 on: September 03, 2012, 06:34:02 AM »
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bahut khubsurati se likha hai...
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«Reply #8 on: September 03, 2012, 08:25:46 AM »
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KA Jee Aadaab!

Bahut khoob janab.. achche khayaalat piroye haiN aapne..
Sabhi ahsaas O khayaal aur sabhi ashaar khoob rahe..

humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye..
Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye..

Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
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«Reply #9 on: September 03, 2012, 10:21:14 AM »
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waah waah khamosh ji is shaandaar peshkash pr dheron daad
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«Reply #10 on: September 07, 2012, 07:04:19 PM »
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Quote from: mkv on September 02, 2012, 04:07:23 PM
4th, 5th and maqte ka javaab naheen.
Bahut umda Khamosh jee
Kya kahne..
Applause Applause



thanx
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«Reply #11 on: September 09, 2012, 12:03:49 AM »
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on September 02, 2012, 03:51:47 PM


                             nashaa pyaar kaa mokhtasar rahaa.!
                             dair   tak per iskaa asar rahaa.!!


                             saath  unkey  pataa to naa chalaa.!
                             mushkil bharaa per ye safar rahaa.!


                             ro  padii  raat  apnii  tarikii  pey  aaj.!
                             wo   nikley    naa    hii  qamar    rahaa.!


                             kahtaa   rahaa     zamaanaa  khudkushii  usey.!
                             diwaangi-e-ishq mein parwaana be-khabar rahaa.!


                             rudaad-e-ishq tumhein sunaaein  ge  phir  kabhi.!
                             salaamat     gar     ye   dil-o-jigar     rahaa.!


                             huey tanhaa hum yalghaar mein khamosh!
                             rishtey bachey naa hii ghar rahaa.!!
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        yalghaar- laddi, war

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«Reply #12 on: September 11, 2012, 08:46:49 AM »
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Quote from: soudagar on September 02, 2012, 04:26:16 PM
bahut khub bahut hi lajawab Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

THANX
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«Reply #13 on: September 15, 2012, 09:38:20 AM »
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Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on September 02, 2012, 04:28:21 PM
bahut khoob .. Usual Smile

thanx
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«Reply #14 on: September 17, 2012, 06:49:00 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on September 02, 2012, 06:01:02 PM
wah Kya Khoobsurat Maqta Kaha Hai
Bahut Bahut Khub Khamosh Ji Applause

Shad o aabaad rahiye

Shihab

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