Bolte q nahi.........(Juan Eliya)

by sajid_ghayel on January 09, 2009, 09:59:41 AM
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Khaamoshii kah rahii hai kaan mein kyaa
aa rahaa hai mere gumaan mein kyaa

[gumaan=thought]

ab mujhe ko_ii Tokataa bhii nahii.n
yahii hotaa hai khaanadaan mein kyaa

bolate kyon nahi mere haq me.n
aabale par gaye zubaan mein kyaa

[aabale=blisters]

merii har baat be-asar hi rahii
nuqs hai kuchh mere bayaan mein kyaa

[nuqs=fault; bayaan=method of expression]

vo mile to ye puuchhanaa hai mujhe
abhii huu.N mai.n terii amaan mein kyaa

[amaan=security]

yuu.n jo takataa hai aasamaan ko tuu
ko_ii rahataa hai aasamaan mein kyaa

ye mujhe chain kyuu.N nahii.n pa.Dataa
ik hii shaKhs thaa jahaan mein kyaa

[chain=contentment]

                   -Juan Eliya-
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«Reply #1 on: January 09, 2009, 10:46:10 AM »
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Sajid ....  what a beautiful poem... thanks for sharing. Juan ji ki iss peshkesh se inspire hokar kucch ashaar...

Abhi bhi chend saansien hai meri baaqi
Teer nahin rha koi teri kaman mein kya?

Dil tod ke chala gya issmein rehne wala
Reh gya hai ab iss khali makaan mein kya

Koi nashtar, koi khanjar, koi teg le aao
Baccha kucch nai nafrat ki dukan mein kya?


(Teg = Talwar)

HumTum   hello
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«Reply #2 on: January 09, 2009, 10:56:37 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on January 09, 2009, 09:59:41 AM
Khaamoshii kah rahii hai kaan mein kyaa
aa rahaa hai mere gumaan mein kyaa

[gumaan=thought]

ab mujhe ko_ii Tokataa bhii nahii.n
yahii hotaa hai khaanadaan mein kyaa

bolate kyon nahi mere haq me.n
aabale par gaye zubaan mein kyaa

[aabale=blisters]

merii har baat be-asar hi rahii
nuqs hai kuchh mere bayaan mein kyaa

[nuqs=fault; bayaan=method of expression]

vo mile to ye puuchhanaa hai mujhe
abhii huu.N mai.n terii amaan mein kyaa

[amaan=security]

yuu.n jo takataa hai aasamaan ko tuu
ko_ii rahataa hai aasamaan mein kyaa

ye mujhe chain kyuu.N nahii.n pa.Dataa
ik hii shaKhs thaa jahaan mein kyaa

[chain=contentment]

                   -Juan Eliya-

very nice sharing GHAYEL

Jasbir Singh
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«Reply #3 on: January 09, 2009, 10:57:46 AM »
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Quote from: HumTum on January 09, 2009, 10:46:10 AM
Sajid ....  what a beautiful poem... thanks for sharing. Juan ji ki iss peshkesh se inspire hokar kucch ashaar...

Abhi bhi chend saansien hai meri baaqi
Teer nahin rha koi teri kaman mein kya?

Dil tod ke chala gya issmein rehne wala
Reh gya hai ab iss khali makaan mein kya

Koi nashtar, koi khanjar, koi teg le aao
Baccha kucch nai nafrat ki dukan mein kya?


(Teg = Talwar)

HumTum   hello



oh ho... kya baat hai HUMTUM ...

Jasbir Singh
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #4 on: January 09, 2009, 01:10:51 PM »
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Nice sharing Ghayel Ji
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #5 on: January 09, 2009, 01:11:33 PM »
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Quote from: HumTum on January 09, 2009, 10:46:10 AM
Sajid ....  what a beautiful poem... thanks for sharing. Juan ji ki iss peshkesh se inspire hokar kucch ashaar...

Abhi bhi chend saansien hai meri baaqi
Teer nahin rha koi teri kaman mein kya?

Dil tod ke chala gya issmein rehne wala
Reh gya hai ab iss khali makaan mein kya

Koi nashtar, koi khanjar, koi teg le aao
Baccha kucch nai nafrat ki dukan mein kya?


(Teg = Talwar)

HumTum   hello


Bahut khoob Hum Tum Ji
Achcha sharing hai
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«Reply #6 on: January 09, 2009, 02:42:05 PM »
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Quote from: HumTum on January 09, 2009, 10:46:10 AM
Sajid ....  what a beautiful poem... thanks for sharing. Juan ji ki iss peshkesh se inspire hokar kucch ashaar...

Abhi bhi chend saansien hai meri baaqi
Teer nahin rha koi teri kaman mein kya?

Dil tod ke chala gya issmein rehne wala
Reh gya hai ab iss khali makaan mein kya

Koi nashtar, koi khanjar, koi teg le aao
Baccha kucch nai nafrat ki dukan mein kya?


(Teg = Talwar)

HumTum   hello


Khoobsurat bohat bohat khoobsurat isiliye to share karta hu kabhi kabhi to bring the best out of my freinds ijazat ho to main bhi kuch himmat karu
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«Reply #7 on: January 09, 2009, 02:42:59 PM »
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tahnk u rajesh and jasbire
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«Reply #8 on: January 09, 2009, 03:02:12 PM »
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Ab umid hi kya rakhe hum,
Pathar dil insaan se,
Jo legaya sari Khushiya,
Mere dil k makaan se!

Zindegi k char pal,
Rehgaye the isi ehsas me,
Do pal legaye wo,
Do reh gaye the aas me!

Na shikayat ki humne,
Na kisise izhar kiya,
Humne kis dagabaaz se,
Zindegi bhar pyar kiya!

Zillat ki zindegi to di thi,
Jeena tha dushwar kiya,
Duniya me izzat ko hamari,
Usne tar tar kiya!

Chain se hume jeene na diya,
Maut se pehle maar diya,
Jab kabr me sukun se lete the,
Tab Ruh par hamare vaar kiya!
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«Reply #9 on: January 09, 2009, 03:28:05 PM »
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Bohat Achche Sajid Bhaiya,.
Hum Tum Ji,.
And Salma Ji,.

Yunhi Likhte Rahiye,.
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«Reply #10 on: January 10, 2009, 02:11:14 AM »
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nice sharing SG ji and nice sharing Salma..
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«Reply #11 on: January 10, 2009, 03:26:46 AM »
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Quote from: salma786 on January 09, 2009, 03:02:12 PM
Ab umid hi kya rakhe hum,
Pathar dil insaan se,
Jo legaya sari Khushiya,
Mere dil k makaan se!

Zindegi k char pal,
Rehgaye the isi ehsas me,
Do pal legaye wo,
Do reh gaye the aas me!

Na shikayat ki humne,
Na kisise izhar kiya,
Humne kis dagabaaz se,
Zindegi bhar pyar kiya!

Zillat ki zindegi to di thi,
Jeena tha dushwar kiya,
Duniya me izzat ko hamari,
Usne tar tar kiya!

Chain se hume jeene na diya,
Maut se pehle maar diya,
Jab kabr me sukun se lete the,
Tab Ruh par hamare vaar kiya!



bahut hi badiya salma

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«Reply #12 on: January 10, 2009, 05:48:37 AM »
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nice sharing SG ji and nice sharing Salma..
Its nt a sharing pooja....Its ma own words!!!
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«Reply #13 on: January 10, 2009, 05:51:14 AM »
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Thanks jasbir ji Usual Smile
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